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Inside the Roaring of Summer: A Poetic Song
- Inside the Roaring of Summer: A Poetic Song -
A poetry collaboration between myself (Kara Lucielle Pythiana-Ashton) and Ivo Lamplot-Asle Nezorf.
Ivo is a friend of mine on Facebook, who is from the Czech Republic. This is our combined creation.
Inside the roaring of the gentlest of winds,
Inside the depths of the happiest of minds...
It is summer, upon the inside of our souls!
The season of delight, the one that consoles.
The sun rises so early in the hours of dawn,
Golden upon the green of the verdant lawn...
And is late to bed, keeping us wide awake.
The sun rises early and goes to bed so late!
Someone is singing, in a powerful voice. Calling, calling! Yearning!
Someone is singing, by a divine choice! Calling, calling! Returning!
You look out the window, the sun smiling,
You are captivated, the light is so beguiling!
Birds are singing and joy is flying in hearts.
Yours and mine, and others in distant parts!
It is summer, and dragonflies are reflecting,
In the glow of afternoon, eyes all detecting...
The surface of the river, and what is therein.
The warm night comes, and is soon to begin!
Someone is singing, in a powerful way. Crying, crying! Joyfully!
Someone is singing, to greet a new day! Crying, crying! Tearfully!
Joyful is the moment, as the heart is happy,
Holding hands amid the hour's great dignity.
Already from nature one is led to the dance,
Lovers in love with summer, as if in trance...
Running towards the sun, there is no return.
Blessed by the season in a new heat to burn!
Under a clear sky, lying down on the grass,
Next to each other, I feel your warm grasp.
Someone is singing, in a powerful tone. Calling, calling! Yearning!
Someone is singing, so far from home! Calling, calling! Returning!
Hearts of fools, or mad lovers lost in dreams,
My blue eyes are like the sea, or cool streams.
Your love for me, soft as sand inside the soul,
When I hold your hand, I may lose all control.
The world will turn, as I walk the garden soil,
My feet bare and my heart free from every toil.
Everything spins and turns, and day is passing,
As night descends, to find us so softly kissing!
Someone is singing, of a life and a life. Crying, crying! Joyfully!
Someone is singing, and ending all strife. Crying, crying! Tearfully!
It takes a fool's heart, and a love that is insane,
To create a world so ruled by love once again!
A poetry collaboration between myself (Kara Lucielle Pythiana-Ashton) and Ivo Lamplot-Asle Nezorf.
Ivo is a friend of mine on Facebook, who is from the Czech Republic. This is our combined creation.
Inside the roaring of the gentlest of winds,
Inside the depths of the happiest of minds...
It is summer, upon the inside of our souls!
The season of delight, the one that consoles.
The sun rises so early in the hours of dawn,
Golden upon the green of the verdant lawn...
And is late to bed, keeping us wide awake.
The sun rises early and goes to bed so late!
Someone is singing, in a powerful voice. Calling, calling! Yearning!
Someone is singing, by a divine choice! Calling, calling! Returning!
You look out the window, the sun smiling,
You are captivated, the light is so beguiling!
Birds are singing and joy is flying in hearts.
Yours and mine, and others in distant parts!
It is summer, and dragonflies are reflecting,
In the glow of afternoon, eyes all detecting...
The surface of the river, and what is therein.
The warm night comes, and is soon to begin!
Someone is singing, in a powerful way. Crying, crying! Joyfully!
Someone is singing, to greet a new day! Crying, crying! Tearfully!
Joyful is the moment, as the heart is happy,
Holding hands amid the hour's great dignity.
Already from nature one is led to the dance,
Lovers in love with summer, as if in trance...
Running towards the sun, there is no return.
Blessed by the season in a new heat to burn!
Under a clear sky, lying down on the grass,
Next to each other, I feel your warm grasp.
Someone is singing, in a powerful tone. Calling, calling! Yearning!
Someone is singing, so far from home! Calling, calling! Returning!
Hearts of fools, or mad lovers lost in dreams,
My blue eyes are like the sea, or cool streams.
Your love for me, soft as sand inside the soul,
When I hold your hand, I may lose all control.
The world will turn, as I walk the garden soil,
My feet bare and my heart free from every toil.
Everything spins and turns, and day is passing,
As night descends, to find us so softly kissing!
Someone is singing, of a life and a life. Crying, crying! Joyfully!
Someone is singing, and ending all strife. Crying, crying! Tearfully!
It takes a fool's heart, and a love that is insane,
To create a world so ruled by love once again!
Published 3rd Jun 2023
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5th Jun 2023 10:55pm
Beautiful work, babe! You and your friend Ivo did awesome creating that poem... song... both, together. You really made the rhythm shine through, and the whole thing has a super happy cheerful extra summery vibe to it. With a nice message at the end, too. Love it, honey! Super lots. Kisses for you.
5th Jun 2023 10:59pm
Thanks so much, sweetie pie, I am delighted to see how much you loved this poem! Yeah, the trick was to get the musical qualities of this just right so I could do the whole concept justice. I think it turned out very decently, I have to admit. The summer theme was actually all my idea, too! Ivo told me to pick a theme, and that was the theme I chose. We went from there with it, and I expanded it, refined it, and worked it into the form you see here. Many passionate kisses for you, my darling doll! *Smiles*
12th Jun 2023 6:28pm
8th Sep 2023 7:22pm
14th Oct 2023 00:08am
And I am happy indeed to be your friend! Good friends are so hard to come by in this world today... and the rarer a thing is, the more precious it also is.
16th Oct 2023 00:53am
I sent you a butterfly, it's a bit off the edge compared to what I compose, something must have moved in me, but it's also older.
17th Oct 2023 8:55pm
Sounds very interesting, I'll have to check it out the next time I'm on Facebook.
16th Oct 2023 00:48am
I'm very glad that you're here again, you actually moved me a little, even if it's a bit heavy now. You were sick before and I'm sick now for a change. but I'm so glad you're here. :-*
17th Oct 2023 8:57pm
It is great to finally be feeling back to a semblance of my old self again! And great to be back here on Deep Underground Poetry, posting new works. I hope your sickness passes quickly, and that you're feeling better soon! :)
16th Oct 2023 00:50am
17th Oct 2023 9:00pm
Sometimes, sequels rarely are able to top the excellence of the original! I'm extremely happy with how this work turned out... better than I had expected. But it is, indeed, quite an original creation! Which is something people love quite a bit. *Smiles* :D
18th Oct 2023 8:15pm
I didn't intend to repeat the old work, but to create more and more new ones together, that's what I'm looking forward to.
29th Oct 2023 6:48pm
Oh, I know that! No worries there. It'll really just be a matter of finding the free time to work on something like that... myself, I've been madly busy and practically swamped with backed up projects that I need to complete. So, who knows when we'd get the chance to work on a new collaboration! But, if I ever do get the free time for it, I have to admit it would be very fun to do. *Smiles* :)
31st Oct 2023 8:07pm
