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In Nature's Present{Haiku}
Rain is falling down
In my feelings I so drown
Light as can be seen
~
Smoking so freely
Mother nature is with me
The rain's healing see
~
Unordinary
Watching the flowers next to me
Filled with such beauty
In my feelings I so drown
Light as can be seen
~
Smoking so freely
Mother nature is with me
The rain's healing see
~
Unordinary
Watching the flowers next to me
Filled with such beauty
Published 17th May 2023
Author's Note
Early morning, smoking a joint out in the nature at home. It's raining lightly and there are flower bushes. Hope you enjoyed the read!💜
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17th May 2023 11:43am
Dear KG,
I enjoyed each of these haiku’s. So much lovely imagery. A wonderful sense of peace and appreciation within each one. H🌷
I enjoyed each of these haiku’s. So much lovely imagery. A wonderful sense of peace and appreciation within each one. H🌷
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17th May 2023 4:07pm
Haha😆. That's the best comment ever!!! Totally unexpected. Congrats on making me laugh and thanks for the feedback!💜
17th May 2023 4:47pm
welcome!
Everytime i visit my Mom
i tell her laughing extends our lifeline
and then she says,
" STOP making me laugh!! "
She will be 90 come this 26th of May, and i plan to keep her laughing at least until 100!!!
DELIGHTED to cause You to smile and laugh!
Everytime i visit my Mom
i tell her laughing extends our lifeline
and then she says,
" STOP making me laugh!! "
She will be 90 come this 26th of May, and i plan to keep her laughing at least until 100!!!
DELIGHTED to cause You to smile and laugh!
17th May 2023 7:21pm
Wow, that's a real touching story. Happy Birthday to your Mother!!!🎈💝🎁🥰 I to hope to have a longevity of a life.
I do laugh a lot in my day to day life. I hope that my efforts are worth while.
Your story you told me, though short... Inspired me to keep working hard and even harder still! Keep rooting for her!
I was rooting for my own mother to make it as far as 100(at least) who's line cut short at 79.
And what a strong woman was she. It's always best to cherish every moment, thank you😌💜
I do laugh a lot in my day to day life. I hope that my efforts are worth while.
Your story you told me, though short... Inspired me to keep working hard and even harder still! Keep rooting for her!
I was rooting for my own mother to make it as far as 100(at least) who's line cut short at 79.
And what a strong woman was she. It's always best to cherish every moment, thank you😌💜
