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anguish
i haven't gone
a single minute,
not one,
without
craving your
hands on my face,
your forehead
on mine
as you whisper
it's going to
be all right
against my
quivering lips
in my anguish,
i could believe it
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Re. anguish
16th May 2023 2:47pm
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16th May 2023 3:14pm
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16th May 2023 9:53pm
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16th May 2023 10:22pm
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16th May 2023 8:05pm
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16th May 2023 9:51pm
Re. anguish
17th May 2023 9:54am
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17th May 2023 1:29pm
Big Fuck.
I’m sorry you understand, because it blows unattractive ass.
But thank you.
Re: Re. anguish
17th May 2023 1:55pm
I used to use the expression " blows dead dog dicks" -- actually I still use it...
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Re. anguish
17th May 2023 1:00pm
You’ve touched on something most of us work to protect. I appreciate the honesty of this write.
(Hugs) girl.
(Hugs) girl.
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Re: Re. anguish
17th May 2023 1:30pm
Ugh, my eye makeup looked hot and now it’s getting wet again.
Fucking allergies!
Thanks girl, I appreciate it
Re. anguish
17th May 2023 6:55pm
Dear B,
Uuuugggghhhh! Totally know this. The all consuming obsession with him took up all the head space I had and then some. What I hated most was waking up to phantom touches on my face or hair. I truly appreciate being being let inside your thoughts. While painful, there is a connection of delicate pain only understood by those of us who feel deeply but don’t want anyone to know it. H🌷
Uuuugggghhhh! Totally know this. The all consuming obsession with him took up all the head space I had and then some. What I hated most was waking up to phantom touches on my face or hair. I truly appreciate being being let inside your thoughts. While painful, there is a connection of delicate pain only understood by those of us who feel deeply but don’t want anyone to know it. H🌷
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18th May 2023 3:46am
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19th May 2023 1:55am
Re. anguish
23rd May 2023 4:14am
Having a bum knee means you can't outrun yourself. So you write stuff like this.
And I love it.
Your leg will get better. And you will also write about your fire more, soon enough.
But it's okay to let your rain out, too.
And I love it.
Your leg will get better. And you will also write about your fire more, soon enough.
But it's okay to let your rain out, too.
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