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here boy! fetch. good boy...
this talk of
love
so pedestrian
and alien all at
once
tasting of cobra
venom
and scented with
lavender
undecipherable
like small fragments
of dead sea scrolls
beyond the touch
of any
grace
like well trained
mutts from God's
obedience school
and like a sickness
in the history
of our
bones
we fetch after that damn
love stick each time
it's thrown
no matter how many
times we've gone
over that self
serving cliff
chasing
after
it
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Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
15th May 2023 10:52am
With love pursuit one must always still try ... it won't necessarily fall into your lap.
Having a dog often opens up conversations !!
BIG
Having a dog often opens up conversations !!
BIG
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Re: Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
15th May 2023 11:49am
I not sure if one need try. Maybe not all of us do.
Thank you, PoetSpeak.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, PoetSpeak.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
15th May 2023 11:27am
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15th May 2023 11:50am
Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
15th May 2023 12:19pm
Fabulous! Wow really enjoyed this vibe!
And so true too!
Hugs you Buddha
Jackie ♥️
And so true too!
Hugs you Buddha
Jackie ♥️
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Re: Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
15th May 2023 12:21pm
Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
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15th May 2023 5:50pm
Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
15th May 2023 11:30pm
I think it wise to let it find you if it will. I refuse to play fetch. Excellent ink Buddha!!,
🦋
JeJe
🦋
JeJe
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Re: Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
15th May 2023 11:55pm
Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
16th May 2023 3:07am
Oh fuckshit, right?! Like, I know that stick, no matter how big and beautiful and girthy it is, is just a fucking stick and not worth the fall.
And yet?
Every. Fucking. Time.
Do they have insurance for stick chasing? It's quite the liability.
And this was quite the read.
B
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Re: Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
16th May 2023 3:09am
The only insurance is the experience that age brings, I'm afraid
Thank you, B. Very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, B. Very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
16th May 2023 3:19am
Dear BK,
Life’s recurring joke. The love stick. No pretending I won’t chase it if it’s ever thrown my way again. Of course, at this stage it’ll be more of slow hobble to fetch it. Outstanding piece. H🌷
Life’s recurring joke. The love stick. No pretending I won’t chase it if it’s ever thrown my way again. Of course, at this stage it’ll be more of slow hobble to fetch it. Outstanding piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
16th May 2023 3:27am
Right there with you.
Thank you, Honoria. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Honoria. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
16th May 2023 10:19pm
It's great. Again. Your writing seems to have taken on a new level of expression and emotion.
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16th May 2023 11:22pm
Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
25th Jun 2023 4:15am
Not sure if it was intentional but that last stanza not only felt but it looked concrete (clever either way), clever all the way.
Nice work bk.
Nice work bk.
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Re: Re. here boy! fetch. good boy...
25th Jun 2023 4:40am
Clever and maybe a cleaver.
Thank you, wally. As always, much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, wally. As always, much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.