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Infinitesimal Microcosm
Infinitesimal microcosm.
Digital decimals might code columns.
Figures of depth suppose light flow ponder.
Interdimensional, like globes, yonder?
Distant, directional, heights pose dawning.
Fitted dissection goes, rising bottoms.
Rigid with webbing shows cycled stardust.
Limit is testing known night horizon.
Pivotal lengths can fold pi on top of.
Physical stretching wove winding wander.
Pitted, symmetrical size was fallen.
Into conceptual climb, such launching.
Spinning, a spectrum pulls lines so lofted.
Integral nexus holds higher conscience.
Visual spectacle sights zone comets.
Witness ineffable time slow clocking.
Simple subjection sews signs, uncommon.
This, and yet jesters stole mind's subconscious.
Trickery guesses jones plights sardonic.
Cynical scepters bode lying launder.
Dividend-destined dope binds our markets.
Driven in Western hopes, lining pockets.
Women undressing jokes, pining wallets.
Tipping the vesture cloaks wine from bottle.
Winning professional prizes darkens.
Mystical, sensual, pride shall bomb us.
Mythical steppingstones stride for Sodom.
Visions inept will dull, crying, "Pontius!"
Gifted, perpetual, wise, comes God's love.
Scriptural, hence, behold, Christ, Son, Father.
Bringing His best bestowed righteous honor.
Biblical blessing growth, ripened harvest.
Digital decimals might code columns.
Figures of depth suppose light flow ponder.
Interdimensional, like globes, yonder?
Distant, directional, heights pose dawning.
Fitted dissection goes, rising bottoms.
Rigid with webbing shows cycled stardust.
Limit is testing known night horizon.
Pivotal lengths can fold pi on top of.
Physical stretching wove winding wander.
Pitted, symmetrical size was fallen.
Into conceptual climb, such launching.
Spinning, a spectrum pulls lines so lofted.
Integral nexus holds higher conscience.
Visual spectacle sights zone comets.
Witness ineffable time slow clocking.
Simple subjection sews signs, uncommon.
This, and yet jesters stole mind's subconscious.
Trickery guesses jones plights sardonic.
Cynical scepters bode lying launder.
Dividend-destined dope binds our markets.
Driven in Western hopes, lining pockets.
Women undressing jokes, pining wallets.
Tipping the vesture cloaks wine from bottle.
Winning professional prizes darkens.
Mystical, sensual, pride shall bomb us.
Mythical steppingstones stride for Sodom.
Visions inept will dull, crying, "Pontius!"
Gifted, perpetual, wise, comes God's love.
Scriptural, hence, behold, Christ, Son, Father.
Bringing His best bestowed righteous honor.
Biblical blessing growth, ripened harvest.
Published 8th May 2023
Author's Note
This is an extensive syllable rhyme scheme that I attempted to carry out through a body of work.
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8th May 2023 11:54pm
I enjoy how you put words together in unusual ways. Very thought provoking. Are you a dictionary reader like me? I love learning new words.
I've lists of rhyming vocabularies that I've looked up in the past. Words I thought of, as well as reading a dictionary and thesaurus, as well as using a rhyme dictionary. My original quest was to prove that you can rhyme whole sentences, throughout an entire body of work, without deviating from the scheme. You can use even 3 and 4 syllable words. Once you get a feel for using big and little words, and still holding a rhyme scheme, it really helps and challenges how you describe things, especially when you're carrying the same rhyme scheme throughout an entire body of work, instead of switching words to rhyme. Some would claim it limits you, whereas I believe it challenges you. It can be pulled off. Even something like accent, pronunciation, drawl, and delivery can help with what words to rhyme, and how to rhyme them. You have to realize that there is a little room for what's called "slant" rhyming. Words aren't as "technical" as they seem, in spelling, to where you can actually rhyme words you wouldn't realize rhyme. For example, "Four oranges" rhymes with "more boring than." BOR/ing and OR'ange, you wouldn't think, rhyme. The emphasized syllable rhymes, and the secondary one kind of takes care of itself. Anyway, I guess I've kind of become accustomed to bigger words, and how they rhyme, and the syllable emphasis, and how to piece it together. Like anything, it takes a lot of practice and work. I was originally inspired by rap and hip hop in my style of writing. I have many rhyming pieces in my profile that serve as examples.
9th May 2023 00:10am
I wasn’t aware that there was a rhyming dictionary. I use my dictionary and thesaurus everyday. I have a fair bit of rhyme on my profile. I tried to move away from it as there weren’t many rhymers on here so I felt as if I was the odd one out. I don’t care anymore though. It is part of my style so I’m going to stick with what works for me.
Yeah man, rhyming has its own defining "aesthetic." It adds something to the meter and frame of the piece. Yeah, I use wordhippo's website for their rhyme dictionary, sometimes. You have to go through and pick out what rhymes, because it's not precise, but it's really a huge help. I find myself planning my work, sometimes, just picking out words, before I even know what I want to write. That's what rhyme does. It's like a certain stanza or "frame", in which you convey the definition, and hold its "form." Anyway, yeah, you'd be surprised what all 3 and 4 syllable words rhyme. I have many pieces in my profile, just rhyming 3 and 4 syllable words. Hope this helps!
