Hope, Cries and Dreams

For me, reads more fact than fiction
Love this terse spill

Yes they are true things I was feeling. Thanks for reading. Have a nice day! 🌻

Amazing

Why thank you very much 😊
Have a lovely day.

Hello Deliabear

This is an intoxicating little poem full of imagery, you have beautifully woven our nature of emotions back to mother earth herself, how she surrounds us everywhere and within us all, to express such vivid images in a short poem is certainly a craft not many can do, I was revelling in reading it all and it was refreshing.

Kind Regards

-A

Aww. Thank you so much, you made my morning. Your kind comments made me feel so nice in a dark time.  
Have a beautiful day, 🌹

Those two sentences of your poem Still, are lingering in my veins...... 😊

Thank you for always being so kind. Storms don't last forever. Days of inner sun will come. 🌞

I see lots of hope and light peaking through in your poetry, it will grow to Super Nova in time...
You are skilled with your words,

Regards,
BITS

Wow, that was so nice of you to say. I have found a path of hope and light in some dark, very dark times I'm challenged with. And I try to convey that sometimes with my words. I don't know if it's possible to feel both agony and hope simultaneously but I do sometimes. Sorry for that tangent, lol.
I do want to bring people who are lost in the dark, hope and light. Thx so much for your comments, they brightened my night. 💜

There is something I just find hopeful in the sound of those birds. Thank you so much for reading and for encouragement. It means a lot.
Have a lovely day 🐦 🌹

Nice alliteration with this one... great flow...

Thank you so much for stopping by.
I'm so inspired by spring, it offers much needed hope.
Have a lovely, inspiring day 🌺

Your alliteration in phrasing was really lovely, D-bear, You have such a light voice, and poetically, this is a really uplifting piece.

Many thanks Betty. I like to try and transform my pain into something uplifting or that offers hope. I'm about to read your latest post, they always astound me.
Hope there is magic in your day ✨

Very creative format, expression, vocabulary, and metaphors.  The formality seems suitable and original enough to hold its own in any relative interpretation.  Clean, clear, concise, easy to read, but details and depths, compacted together.  The aesthetics of emotion, depicted by the language of an observant visionary.

Wow. Thank you so so much for your critique. You totally made my night. 😊

Fucking A

BIG

My fav kind of comment. 😊
Thank you.

Happy to please 🤠