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Separating (is like taking air from my lungs)
seperating love
from my heart ~ when talking to
you ~ impossible
from my heart ~ when talking to
you ~ impossible
Published 14th Apr 2023
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15th Apr 2023 4:43pm
Perfect.
A great example of being a sniper with words.
I love the message contained within, too.
A great example of being a sniper with words.
I love the message contained within, too.
16th Apr 2023 4:52am
I echo Styx, AP.
Your internal message is my favorite part about your senryu style. It's a second blow. Like a throat punch then dick kick.
Lovely
Your internal message is my favorite part about your senryu style. It's a second blow. Like a throat punch then dick kick.
Lovely
16th Apr 2023 5:03pm
