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Into the Mist
My coffee’s gone cold
while I stare off into space,
wondering where the time went
as if I wasn’t wasting some of it
right now, watching you vaporize
into mist, right in the middle
of a weekday conversation;
as if I hadn’t just squandered
my precious moments with a coward.
Where does it go indeed,
when you believe in seeing the good
instead of the truth?
I dump out my cup and refill it,
determined not to waste a single drop,
or another thought
on you.
while I stare off into space,
wondering where the time went
as if I wasn’t wasting some of it
right now, watching you vaporize
into mist, right in the middle
of a weekday conversation;
as if I hadn’t just squandered
my precious moments with a coward.
Where does it go indeed,
when you believe in seeing the good
instead of the truth?
I dump out my cup and refill it,
determined not to waste a single drop,
or another thought
on you.
Published 8th Apr 2023
Author's Note
Close the door, you’re letting all the flies in.
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8th Apr 2023 10:27pm
wasted thoughts
i do that a lot onstead of focasing on writing
but i conjuted an image there of the cold coffee going in the sink
i do that a lot onstead of focasing on writing
but i conjuted an image there of the cold coffee going in the sink
8th Apr 2023 11:43pm
Anonymous
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8th Apr 2023 11:20pm
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8th Apr 2023 11:44pm
9th Apr 2023 5:49am
Dear L,
This poem is such a sage piece of insight in letting go of the nonsense, starting anew with fresh thoughts on those who bring us joy. It’s so frustrating when I let myself keep ruminating over someone who’s ridiculous. Cheers to never wasting another cup of coffee and keeping out the flies! H🌷
This poem is such a sage piece of insight in letting go of the nonsense, starting anew with fresh thoughts on those who bring us joy. It’s so frustrating when I let myself keep ruminating over someone who’s ridiculous. Cheers to never wasting another cup of coffee and keeping out the flies! H🌷
9th Apr 2023 11:43am
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Apr 2023 6:45am
9th Apr 2023 1:49pm
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11th Apr 2023 00:43am
9th Apr 2023 2:46pm
Our friends intuitions concur with mine. Nicely cathartic piece it seems like to me.
11th Apr 2023 00:43am
18th May 2023 00:59am
Luna, your spills are on a higher level of self consciousness written like a conversation it flows so well.
Great work
Great work
18th May 2023 12:02pm
