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It's my Jefferson Airplane life
We're rounding the corner of 79th Street
Onyx and I
Making sure the coast is clear
She doesn't like busses
A bus stop is there
I could avoid the stop but...
She needs to get used to them
They're everywhere here
She's getting better
This isn't small town Texas
An adopted hound
We've had her close to 4 months now
It's early morning
Wind is calm and not as cold as usual
I'm thinking about poetry and DUP
All that it takes to write here now
Latest chapter is bots and privacy
Then I see some lovely purple flowers
Growing in the tree pits
Now I'm starting to think about coffee
Something about Spring
The air moist and a slight overcast day
It's my Jefferson Airplane life
Goose bumps, Psychedelics and promise
Onyx and I
Making sure the coast is clear
She doesn't like busses
A bus stop is there
I could avoid the stop but...
She needs to get used to them
They're everywhere here
She's getting better
This isn't small town Texas
An adopted hound
We've had her close to 4 months now
It's early morning
Wind is calm and not as cold as usual
I'm thinking about poetry and DUP
All that it takes to write here now
Latest chapter is bots and privacy
Then I see some lovely purple flowers
Growing in the tree pits
Now I'm starting to think about coffee
Something about Spring
The air moist and a slight overcast day
It's my Jefferson Airplane life
Goose bumps, Psychedelics and promise
Published 6th Apr 2023
| Edited 12th Oct 2024
Author's Note
I grew up on listening to Jefferson Airplane.
They were my band. Still are a million years later. If you want to know about life they were and still are a heady band and ahead of their times. Just listen to "Eskimo Blue Day" and you'll listen to a warning about climate change in 1969.
Coffee is brewing
They were my band. Still are a million years later. If you want to know about life they were and still are a heady band and ahead of their times. Just listen to "Eskimo Blue Day" and you'll listen to a warning about climate change in 1969.
Coffee is brewing
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6th Apr 2023 1:11pm
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6th Apr 2023 1:15pm
Yes, DUP is entertainment for the mind but not the gospel. It shouldn't be this hard to write on a site but stuff keeps getting in the way. The poem came to me organically so I wrote it in a stream of consciousness and here it is ..
Thanks for your comment C
Thanks for your comment C
6th Apr 2023 1:20pm
Thank you for this write.
I am disheartened by the whole idea that the site is being used for such garbage. I came here to write, to spill my soul and heart on the page with other like minded people with heart, not a bot who can’t think for himself.
I appreciate your quietude this morning.
I am disheartened by the whole idea that the site is being used for such garbage. I came here to write, to spill my soul and heart on the page with other like minded people with heart, not a bot who can’t think for himself.
I appreciate your quietude this morning.
6th Apr 2023 1:23pm
Yes Mary
Me too
The chaos on this site is more sordid each day. It's still a cool place to post but like the rest of our fucked up world, it's got issues.
Dog walks often yield poems.
I appreciate your read and comment !
Thx
Me too
The chaos on this site is more sordid each day. It's still a cool place to post but like the rest of our fucked up world, it's got issues.
Dog walks often yield poems.
I appreciate your read and comment !
Thx
6th Apr 2023 1:38pm
Fuck.
Shit man, you have feelings and thoughts and stuff! I thought it was all porn and sarcasm.
Big like.
Shit man, you have feelings and thoughts and stuff! I thought it was all porn and sarcasm.
Big like.
6th Apr 2023 1:44pm
Yeah
I got a lot of feelings
You do too
You show them sometimes
It's ok to do so ...
BIG LIKE your comment
Thx
I got a lot of feelings
You do too
You show them sometimes
It's ok to do so ...
BIG LIKE your comment
Thx
6th Apr 2023 2:54pm
There's a lot of shit to wade through here on DUP, and in the outside world - it's no different. The real people are worth the stink every time.
Thanks for the moment of peace. I'm gonna go make another coffee now.
Really LIKE, a whole lot. ✔✔✔
❤k
Thanks for the moment of peace. I'm gonna go make another coffee now.
Really LIKE, a whole lot. ✔✔✔
❤k
6th Apr 2023 3:08pm
Yes, a really messy place.
But worth it in its own messy room way.
This write means a lot to me.
I'm glad you could see it
Thx
Xx
🤠❤
But worth it in its own messy room way.
This write means a lot to me.
I'm glad you could see it
Thx
Xx
🤠❤
6th Apr 2023 3:12pm
6th Apr 2023 4:03pm
There's a lot to not understand but it depends if you don't understand my poem or don't understand Deep Underground Poetry right now. Two different subjects merged into each other.
6th Apr 2023 4:20pm
6th Apr 2023 5:00pm
6th Apr 2023 6:17pm
Dear PS,
Yes, turning a blind eye and keeping the focus is becoming a bit more challenging but I enjoyed our walk this morning 😉
It’s a great day to create.
And Jefferson Airplane 🤟🏻
Rockin’ write. H🌷
Yes, turning a blind eye and keeping the focus is becoming a bit more challenging but I enjoyed our walk this morning 😉
It’s a great day to create.
And Jefferson Airplane 🤟🏻
Rockin’ write. H🌷
6th Apr 2023 6:46pm
Dear H,
There's nothing like the dog walk, then
( Ginger ) and now ( Onyx ). It's super enjoyable though. Within it though is reflection and that's where the poems start to reflect in early morning sun. Not sure what to make of anything anymore so I tell what I know and rock on from the past and into the future 💯
Thx ❤
There's nothing like the dog walk, then
( Ginger ) and now ( Onyx ). It's super enjoyable though. Within it though is reflection and that's where the poems start to reflect in early morning sun. Not sure what to make of anything anymore so I tell what I know and rock on from the past and into the future 💯
Thx ❤
7th Apr 2023 00:10am
Enjoy your music with your woman and make sure she goes wild. Keep on writing.
7th Apr 2023 00:15am
7th Apr 2023 4:06am
Enjoy the purple flowers and avoid bus smoke and bad vibes. Make your own party. Save me a seat.
7th Apr 2023 11:52am
Seat saved
It's early so no bad vibes yet.
See what the day brings ....
Cool mask, incognito got us through the pandemic.
Room the casbah !
It's early so no bad vibes yet.
See what the day brings ....
Cool mask, incognito got us through the pandemic.
Room the casbah !
7th Apr 2023 12:38pm
I love this snapshot of you life in NYC, PoetSpeak & your thought process as you're doing it. I have thought for a while now how nice it might be to visit some of my poet friends on a little tour. I will need lots & lots of spare cash for that, of course, also their trust & approval but, the thought alone is enough to make me smile. 😊
7th Apr 2023 1:00pm
That would be quite a journey Billy.
I think many of us have had those thoughts about meeting people we communicate with on the site.
DUP should have a convention somewhere.
I wonder how many would attend??
I think many of us have had those thoughts about meeting people we communicate with on the site.
DUP should have a convention somewhere.
I wonder how many would attend??
7th Apr 2023 1:07pm
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8th Apr 2023 00:53am
8th Apr 2023 3:25am
Very human and very natural write. I enjoyed this walk with you but I'm not sure I'm walking beside you or on my four feet.
8th Apr 2023 3:33am
Interesting question...
Humorous too
I like this comment
You might both get a treat ...
Thx
Humorous too
I like this comment
You might both get a treat ...
Thx
17th May 2023 2:43am
Those early morning walks do help clear the mind and give us a little perspective on the little things.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
