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After Work at the Bar
She liked teasing
I liked being teased
She was my part-time secretary
Big tits, nice lingerie, morals free
Perfect for me
She always needed cash
Come pay day I'd flip her a twenty
She'd get real close
Unbutton her blouse slowly
Invite me to cop a feel
She needs a raise I thought
Friday nights after work
We'd all get wasted at the bar
She'd slide in real close
Sometimes go to the back booth
The make out spot
You could smell the desire
The couple before us
Left a scent of desperation
Greed and untold truths
I wanted some
We'd drink till sloppy and careless
Someone's gonna get in trouble
Lou Reed on the juke box
Early summer
Loins on fire in the cannibal heat
I liked being teased
She was my part-time secretary
Big tits, nice lingerie, morals free
Perfect for me
She always needed cash
Come pay day I'd flip her a twenty
She'd get real close
Unbutton her blouse slowly
Invite me to cop a feel
She needs a raise I thought
Friday nights after work
We'd all get wasted at the bar
She'd slide in real close
Sometimes go to the back booth
The make out spot
You could smell the desire
The couple before us
Left a scent of desperation
Greed and untold truths
I wanted some
We'd drink till sloppy and careless
Someone's gonna get in trouble
Lou Reed on the juke box
Early summer
Loins on fire in the cannibal heat
Published 31st Mar 2023
Author's Note
Back in the day, the good times rolled ....
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Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
31st Mar 2023 4:47pm
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31st Mar 2023 5:00pm
Yeah, I always like to stick my degenerate hero Lou Reed in there. Based on true tales of lust and drunken depravity.
Thx C
Thx C
31st Mar 2023 5:21pm
31st Mar 2023 5:49pm
31st Mar 2023 6:16pm
31st Mar 2023 5:58pm
31st Mar 2023 6:16pm
31st Mar 2023 9:48pm
Lingerie is the best of things...
I like the willingness of your secretary...
She is most excellent...
I like the willingness of your secretary...
She is most excellent...
31st Mar 2023 10:04pm
She was very sweet and knew how to use her attributes. Good times back in the day.
She looked great in pink bras pushing up her phenomenal cargo ....
She looked great in pink bras pushing up her phenomenal cargo ....
31st Mar 2023 10:28pm
The pic really helps with the description of the heat in the piece, to tight dude
31st Mar 2023 10:49pm
31st Mar 2023 10:54pm
31st Mar 2023 11:11pm
31st Mar 2023 11:57pm
You give your seed then she later tells you that you are going to be a daddy, LOL. Keep on writing.
1st Apr 2023 00:22am
My seed is gluten free and non-GMO and otherwise sterile. Women know I can fuck free and clear — no babies. No wonder I’m so popular …
1st Apr 2023 4:44am
Dear PS,
I haven’t worn that blouse or my hair like that in years! Where did you get that pic of me? 😉😄
The good ole days. So many good times back in the day. No cares, just living for the moment. Totally dig the vibe. H🌷
I haven’t worn that blouse or my hair like that in years! Where did you get that pic of me? 😉😄
The good ole days. So many good times back in the day. No cares, just living for the moment. Totally dig the vibe. H🌷
1st Apr 2023 12:17pm
Dear H,
Working in the drone corporation doing management stuff. I called it changing diapers. The only salvation was Sharon and the bar ..... We moved the bar lower too.
Good times indeed ....
Thx H
🤠❤
Working in the drone corporation doing management stuff. I called it changing diapers. The only salvation was Sharon and the bar ..... We moved the bar lower too.
Good times indeed ....
Thx H
🤠❤
1st Apr 2023 2:00pm
Lingerie at the bar not work right? A sensational sassy poem enjoyably to read. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
1st Apr 2023 2:15pm
No work at the bar
That's fun time
She knew what makes a man come back for more....
Thanks Z
That's fun time
She knew what makes a man come back for more....
Thanks Z
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Jan 2024 00:45am
1st Apr 2023 2:23pm
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1st Apr 2023 2:27pm
No
Lust and taking care of lust is the only way to live...
Poetspeak mantra "fuck me till I'm sated and sore then fuck me some more"
Lust and taking care of lust is the only way to live...
Poetspeak mantra "fuck me till I'm sated and sore then fuck me some more"
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Jan 2024 00:45am
1st Apr 2023 2:35pm
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1st Apr 2023 2:38pm
1st Apr 2023 10:44pm
We have a thing at work. Final Fridays!
The last Friday of the month everyone goes to the ballroom
and has drinks. All departments get to mingle and catch up.
I didn't make it this time!!
Maybe next - nothing like that happens though - I think!! hahaha
The last Friday of the month everyone goes to the ballroom
and has drinks. All departments get to mingle and catch up.
I didn't make it this time!!
Maybe next - nothing like that happens though - I think!! hahaha
1st Apr 2023 10:51pm
If I was there, that would be happening !!
Yeah, memory lane, fun to write about. Someone called me out of the blue from that job yesterday. It had been years since I talked to him. Gave me the idea to do this write.. stuff happens after work, throw in some booze and a poem is born ...
Word hot sauce 💥
Yeah, memory lane, fun to write about. Someone called me out of the blue from that job yesterday. It had been years since I talked to him. Gave me the idea to do this write.. stuff happens after work, throw in some booze and a poem is born ...
Word hot sauce 💥
1st Apr 2023 11:23pm
She sounds like just the type of secretary you wanted. Wearing short skirts and low cut blouses to lean over your desk. Flip her a twenty. Lol geez, what is she a stripper… She definitely deserves a raise. Who doesn’t love the back booth… Oh the stories I have to tell about the back booth. Lol The scent of desperation is so thrilling isn’t it? And I have found that someone always gets in trouble. ;) And I love that picture, she’s definitely got the look. :p
1st Apr 2023 11:48pm
She could have been a stripper. Would have made more money. She would have missed me though. I gave her something money can’t buy. Can you guess what that is ??
Love the privacy of the back booth. Poets and poems are born back there. I didn’t know it then but I do now.
You’ve got to have someone to write about. Look between the lines and get back to me what you see there. I’ll be waiting. …..
Love the privacy of the back booth. Poets and poems are born back there. I didn’t know it then but I do now.
You’ve got to have someone to write about. Look between the lines and get back to me what you see there. I’ll be waiting. …..
2nd Apr 2023 4:01pm
I hear Roxy Music; "Love Is A Drug". More than Lou Reed! But that's just me taking liberty with your mood build. Lol.
Cannibal heat, indeed! I like reading your historic admittance. It's good to know how not alone the world really is.
Cannibal heat, indeed! I like reading your historic admittance. It's good to know how not alone the world really is.
It's funny, work is work no matter what you do or where you work. At the end of the week a lot of people enjoy the comraderie of their co-workers in a drink or two. Sometimes those comrades become something more. I'm long out of that environment but it sure was fun back on my day.
Appreciate the comment Styx.
On a personal music note the Roxy Music song "More than This" is still an all time favorite. Love Bryan Ferry solo stuff too !
Appreciate the comment Styx.
On a personal music note the Roxy Music song "More than This" is still an all time favorite. Love Bryan Ferry solo stuff too !
2nd Apr 2023 4:30pm
2nd Apr 2023 4:37pm
Bete Noire
Boys and Girls
Lots more
Yes, power, style and sex in the air always with him.
Bryan Ferry
Boys and Girls
Lots more
Yes, power, style and sex in the air always with him.
Bryan Ferry
3rd Apr 2023 00:43am
DAAAAAMMMNNN you crusty sonova!
I didn't know you still had the FIRE in you with all of the short ass fart poems. But yep. You still got the stuff!
AND IT'S HOT!
Go you PS!
You have BL.
I have TF (The Fuck)
and this here?
BL TF
I didn't know you still had the FIRE in you with all of the short ass fart poems. But yep. You still got the stuff!
AND IT'S HOT!
Go you PS!
You have BL.
I have TF (The Fuck)
and this here?
BL TF
3rd Apr 2023 2:34am
WOW
I just got my head anointed with oil
Goddamn
Yeah, when I write my truth from back then there's a lot to say. Lord knows this heathen has done stuff you would be mighty proud of....
Hey, the oatmeal and blow for breakfast is the high octane of champions.
This is an awesome comment
Stay tuned
Xo
Dr. Betty
Magna CUM
BL the TF
I just got my head anointed with oil
Goddamn
Yeah, when I write my truth from back then there's a lot to say. Lord knows this heathen has done stuff you would be mighty proud of....
Hey, the oatmeal and blow for breakfast is the high octane of champions.
This is an awesome comment
Stay tuned
Xo
Dr. Betty
Magna CUM
BL the TF
8th Apr 2023 6:00pm
8th Apr 2023 6:03pm
Pretty much happened as I wrote it with some iconic embellishment.
Those were the days bk ...
Those were the days bk ...
8th May 2023 7:13pm
The 80’s and 90’s were more carefree. Now HR hovers over everything.
BIG LIKE
BIG LIKE
8th May 2023 9:31pm
Definitely more fun back then.
Now everything is a problem...
Let's get a time machine Wally !!
Thx W
Now everything is a problem...
Let's get a time machine Wally !!
Thx W
