wander

This is so beautiful. I love the song too.
Your poem reminded me of this

https://youtu.be/DPwfGDHdpOE

This is a lovely, tender piece of poetry which reminds me that even though we're all flawed, we're also full of such an enormous capacity to love fathoms deep.

Really enjoyed this one, Brenda
Thank you for sharing yourself
🌹 💙
B

This poignant and heartfelt poem explores the complexities of love and longing. You have used rich imagery and metaphors to convey the depth of your emotions and the pain of being separated from the person you love.

The lines "my mind seeks yours" and "your soul mingles with mine" create a sense of intimacy and connection, while the line "with tender touches I know you ache" conveys a deep understanding of the loved one's emotional state.

Your wandering and dreaming are depicted as a form of escape, a way to exalt nature and dance on the winds. But even as they explore these otherworldly realms, they remain tethered to the loved ones, hearing their call from the universes.

The final lines, "hold me closer tiny dancer / your soul and mind free to wander together," are both wistful and hopeful, expressing a desire for closeness and connection even in the midst of distance and uncertainty.

This beautifully written poem captures the complexities and nuances of love, longing, and the human spirit.

"I hear you calling me from in the universes when I wander too far"
It does tend to have that dance feel, reaching out and bringing you back.
Nicely penned.