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Never be Glum
Never be glum old man, you had a life to desire,
You stood on the shoulders of giants, merely to push the bar higher,
Till alone you stood, peerless and brilliant,
The best of a generation, daring to be different.
Armed with jokes, diffusing all tensions,
Lobbing knowledge grenades, anecdotes, penetrating questions,
You had a style that could not be ignored
The giant of a little man, cranky but adored.
Never be glum old man, take pleasure in your crew,
We inherited that glint in your eye, mini versions of you,
No wonder we all want to successful be,
Apples rarely fall far from the tree.
You’re going to rage at the dying of the light,
Your Galway heart pumping Nenagh blood will fight,
And I hope the images of your life do flash,
Reminding you of your halcyon days,
a man with class.
Never be glum Dad, be nothing but proud,
I hope you see that you stand out from the crowd,
Indeed Da, never be glum,
You taught us all how to play your killer hand,
You have succeeded, you have won.
Author's Note
Wrote this for my Da. He is at war with the aging process. It gets him down. I tried to cheer him up.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Never be Glum
21st Mar 2023 5:14pm
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21st Mar 2023 8:31pm
Re. Never be Glum
21st Mar 2023 8:09pm
This is so touching, with the audio accompaniment it had me in tears. You have beautiful energy.
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21st Mar 2023 8:32pm
You're very kind, as always Daniel. I appreciate your comments very much.
Regards,
BITS
Regards,
BITS
Re. Never be Glum
21st Mar 2023 8:49pm
I almost forgot to breath while reading because I was so terrifically affected!
I took care of my ailing father and watched from the front row as the aging process and sickness took away from me someone who will never be able to be replaced. Someone who I was connected to in a way that was only ours. It hurts, even still... years later, to not have his particular force of love and understanding in my life. I applaud this beautiful attempt of hopefulness and caring from a son to his Da. Cherish each other as well, often and as hard as you can, while you can. Time really does go by in a mere blink. You'll never regret the times you've spent letting those you care about most, know, just that.
Thank you for sharing this one, I absolutely loved it and felt each and every word.
Stellar work!
Thank you for sharing your heart and talent
🌹 💙
B
I took care of my ailing father and watched from the front row as the aging process and sickness took away from me someone who will never be able to be replaced. Someone who I was connected to in a way that was only ours. It hurts, even still... years later, to not have his particular force of love and understanding in my life. I applaud this beautiful attempt of hopefulness and caring from a son to his Da. Cherish each other as well, often and as hard as you can, while you can. Time really does go by in a mere blink. You'll never regret the times you've spent letting those you care about most, know, just that.
Thank you for sharing this one, I absolutely loved it and felt each and every word.
Stellar work!
Thank you for sharing your heart and talent
🌹 💙
B
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Re. Never be Glum
21st Mar 2023 9:08pm
Hi Bluevelvete,
Your words ring so true. I hear the love and affection for your Father loud and clearly in your beautiful poignant words.
The aging process can be so so cruel. It ebbs away slowly. It hurts poor Da. Our helplessness is often hard to take.
Thanks for sharing your story and thoughts. Here's to our loved ones...
BITS
Your words ring so true. I hear the love and affection for your Father loud and clearly in your beautiful poignant words.
The aging process can be so so cruel. It ebbs away slowly. It hurts poor Da. Our helplessness is often hard to take.
Thanks for sharing your story and thoughts. Here's to our loved ones...
BITS
Re. Never be Glum
Anonymous
21st Mar 2023 9:46pm
Oh so beautifully done. This parent theme has been resonating all around me lately. Having kids that care is always a win
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21st Mar 2023 9:59pm
Thanks for giving a listen and sharing your thoughts Ladyfancy,
Always appreciated,
Regards,
BITS
Always appreciated,
Regards,
BITS
Re. Never be Glum
22nd Mar 2023 10:01am
Such a loving tribute to yer Da. Resonates greatly. I guessing from the playfulness of your words that he is quite the lovable scoundrel. Age really is the cruelest mistress. Your presentation is always sublime. Such a refreshing and innovative addition to this site.
My 'Chinnery' mob were from Derry, but stretched as far as Galway Bay. Somehow, they've played an integral role in my travels. Rob
My 'Chinnery' mob were from Derry, but stretched as far as Galway Bay. Somehow, they've played an integral role in my travels. Rob
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22nd Mar 2023 12:15pm
Thanks for listening Rob, always appreciated and for the kind words.
My Mam's crew are beside Derry, Buncrana, Derry is beautiful.
You are riddled with Celtic blood so, should I being saying congrats or commiserations!?
I was given the Celtic liquor gene , a double copy I'd say.
Regards,
BITS
My Mam's crew are beside Derry, Buncrana, Derry is beautiful.
You are riddled with Celtic blood so, should I being saying congrats or commiserations!?
I was given the Celtic liquor gene , a double copy I'd say.
Regards,
BITS
Re. Never be Glum
22nd Mar 2023 11:07pm
Re: Re. Never be Glum
23rd Mar 2023 8:59am
Hi K,
Thanks for dropping by.
Unwritten Irish rule... never admit to your sons you are proud of them.... hee hee...
Regards,
BITS
Thanks for dropping by.
Unwritten Irish rule... never admit to your sons you are proud of them.... hee hee...
Regards,
BITS
Re. Never be Glum
30th Mar 2023 9:40am
The words alone are a beautiful tribute. Your reading and video just took it to another level, amazing.
LJ
LJ
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Re. Never be Glum
30th Mar 2023 10:55am
Hi LJ,
Thanks for reading/listening and sharing, and for your kind words, much appreciated, as always!
Regards,
BITS
Thanks for reading/listening and sharing, and for your kind words, much appreciated, as always!
Regards,
BITS
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Re. Never be Glum
30th Mar 2023 9:49pm
Hi Cathedral,
Sorry for your loss.... it's the real crappy part about this whole life game, losing the ones we love and then we check out ourselves, seems like a raw deal indeed!?
Thank you for giving my work an ear. I will check out your work on my next sit down!
Regards,
BITS
Sorry for your loss.... it's the real crappy part about this whole life game, losing the ones we love and then we check out ourselves, seems like a raw deal indeed!?
Thank you for giving my work an ear. I will check out your work on my next sit down!
Regards,
BITS
Re. Never be Glum
Anonymous
6th May 2023 4:06pm
Hi Bits,
Beautiful tribute.
Take care.
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Beautiful tribute.
Take care.
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