Hope

Every night I wonder
Will you ever be my knight ?
It would make my Heart pound
To know that you re mine
The two of us flying, freed fom our burden
Swimming against the tide of our World,
Alive.

PS: I am a french student and I d like if you could tell me what you think about this short poem, if it's good enough or not. Feel free to give your opinion.
(#complicated love story)