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Waves of sexuality
Let's trample
each other today
get down from the body
into the soul
forget the outside sounds
and become engrossed
in each other's sensuous sounds
and let's get mad
Let's drench each other's body
with hot saliva
let's make wet
every rosy fold of this cozy bed.
each other today
get down from the body
into the soul
forget the outside sounds
and become engrossed
in each other's sensuous sounds
and let's get mad
Let's drench each other's body
with hot saliva
let's make wet
every rosy fold of this cozy bed.
Author's Note
Come on an erotic journey with me and turn yourself on.
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Re. Waves of sexuality
9th Mar 2023 3:24pm
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9th Mar 2023 3:37pm
☺️🤗 thanks a ton Debbie for this beautiful and appreciable feedback. It's a lot for me.
Re. Waves of sexuality
9th Mar 2023 3:59pm
HOT, both picture and poem. Picture inspired rhyming caption:
Your toes I'm sucking
while we are fucking,
black merges in white
on this passion night.
Your toes I'm sucking
while we are fucking,
black merges in white
on this passion night.
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Re. Waves of sexuality
I would have gone with something like, 'outside world' as you're using 'sounds' later in the poem. But there's no right or wrong way to write how you feel it.
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10th Mar 2023 12:32pm
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Re. Waves of sexuality
6th Nov 2023 2:56am
Waves this powerful could drowned a tsunami... I am awash in the waves of your sexuality Dimpy!
JJ
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JJ
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6th Nov 2023 2:57am
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6th Nov 2023 3:16am
I think the safest place to be in your tsunami is in your arms, riding your waves...
JJ
JJ
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