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Naked Go Sundown
A true form of art,
soft skin-like doe,
naked go sundown.
In forest meadowsweet
shedding the heirlooms,
and la-di-da.
As if on a staircase
a waterfall descends,
praying naked on acorns.
Distancing from hypocrites,
in naked anatomy,
like a looking glass.
soft skin-like doe,
naked go sundown.
In forest meadowsweet
shedding the heirlooms,
and la-di-da.
As if on a staircase
a waterfall descends,
praying naked on acorns.
Distancing from hypocrites,
in naked anatomy,
like a looking glass.
Published 25th Feb 2023
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25th Feb 2023 4:45am
25th Feb 2023 4:47am
25th Feb 2023 4:56am
25th Feb 2023 2:03pm
Fuck that’s good. The title is hypnotic
Naked go sundown
At night we strip it all away.
And your execution of the the waterfall was fucking sick. Clean. Razor sharp. I fucking like that as much as hook
“As if on a staircase
a waterfall descends,
praying naked on acorns.”
Amazing work
Naked go sundown
At night we strip it all away.
And your execution of the the waterfall was fucking sick. Clean. Razor sharp. I fucking like that as much as hook
“As if on a staircase
a waterfall descends,
praying naked on acorns.”
Amazing work
