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My Cherry
Stealing time away with a beautiful boy
his lips gently grazed my neck
Sending shivers up and down my spine
Until I was pulsing with desire
Leaving me begging for release these foreign feelings
his experience was alluring to my virginal skin
As he undressed me with slow precision
Teasing my nipples to pleasure and hardness.
Before kissing a fiery path down my tummy
To my clit, where he expertly
Licked and flicked until I came
For the first glorious time
As I lay, naked under the moon
I felt him press his dick against me
Before pushing himself inside me
It hurt, his cock was too big and I was so tight.
So he had me straddle his narrow hips
Where I eased myself onto him
And rode him cowgirl style
To a heaven unlike any Id ever known.
He popped my cherry and then my heart
I was in love with him
But he was just a player
That left me feeling like a tart.
"thanks to Indie, for taking the time to have help me refine this"
his lips gently grazed my neck
Sending shivers up and down my spine
Until I was pulsing with desire
Leaving me begging for release these foreign feelings
his experience was alluring to my virginal skin
As he undressed me with slow precision
Teasing my nipples to pleasure and hardness.
Before kissing a fiery path down my tummy
To my clit, where he expertly
Licked and flicked until I came
For the first glorious time
As I lay, naked under the moon
I felt him press his dick against me
Before pushing himself inside me
It hurt, his cock was too big and I was so tight.
So he had me straddle his narrow hips
Where I eased myself onto him
And rode him cowgirl style
To a heaven unlike any Id ever known.
He popped my cherry and then my heart
I was in love with him
But he was just a player
That left me feeling like a tart.
"thanks to Indie, for taking the time to have help me refine this"
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Anonymous
- Edited 13th Sep 2018 6:45am
8th Apr 2012 9:48am
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re: licked and flicked until I came
10th Apr 2012 9:29pm
yeah I loved him but he loved many ladies as it turned out lol oh well live and learn..peace Crim :)
This Is
8th Apr 2012 8:12pm
re: This Is
10th Apr 2012 9:30pm
ty beautiful lady..I have to give credit to Indie for making my skeleton of a poem into a fleshy beauty..peace Crim :)
either way...
Anonymous
9th Apr 2012 5:49am
it's normal to be in love with your first sexual partner. Shameful? Noway! So what if they don't return the feeling? Just try and remember the best part of it...if only it were that easy..."laughs"
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Anonymous
9th Apr 2012 3:23pm
Unveiling (crimsin),
Maybe they should have a special Hallmark card for this one: Sorry for your loss ; )
Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
tornado
Maybe they should have a special Hallmark card for this one: Sorry for your loss ; )
Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
tornado
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re: Re: Cherry
10th Apr 2012 9:34pm
no need for a card lol..it was an experience I enjoyed with some one I loved even though he loved lots of ladies as I later found out..ty peace Crim :)
Very
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2012 10:57am
15th Apr 2012 10:55am
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re: Very
18th Apr 2012 1:36am
I owe the beauty of this poem to Indie though the experience with a player was mine..ty for the read and sharing of your experience..peace Crim :)
My Cherry
30th Apr 2012 10:01pm
A beautiful sensual journey, a memory to keep, even if he wasn't..... A wonderful write. :)
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re: My Cherry
30th Apr 2012 10:19pm
Divine
8th May 2012 6:28pm
Oh my friend..I can soooo relate. i remember my first like yesterday as well..and he too was a playa! I adored every inch of him heart and soul. I feel you in this one. This is a lovely piece about this topic..The title is awesome as well. fcxx
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re: Divine
9th May 2012 5:42pm
ty Fcxx for such a beautiful comment..I too loved him heart and soul but alas he loved a lot of ladies :) peace Crim
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9th Apr 2013 1:26am
Re: My Cherry
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2013 6:24pm
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re: Re: My Cherry
23rd Nov 2013 8:20pm
thank you Mr. A you're comments are going to make me smile all day thank you :) much love Crim
Re: My Cherry
12th Dec 2013 1:54am
Losing virginity
is a loving experience
more fun for the gal
may not be his first
the gals just give in
for love
for lust
when burst
the guys run
she alone does thirst
But accept it well
she was the game
in name
is a loving experience
more fun for the gal
may not be his first
the gals just give in
for love
for lust
when burst
the guys run
she alone does thirst
But accept it well
she was the game
in name
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12th Dec 2013 4:31pm
Re: My Cherry
14th Dec 2013 4:26pm
Re: My Cherry
19th Dec 2013 8:04pm
i love cherries red
and juicy some
squeeze
many release
but cherries are best
when virgins like
laid to rest
their first
sexy gift at best
inspired by crimson
and juicy some
squeeze
many release
but cherries are best
when virgins like
laid to rest
their first
sexy gift at best
inspired by crimson
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Anonymous
5th Mar 2014 00:23am
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6th Mar 2014 4:40pm