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No de Nile
The crocodile's eyes
glowed red
like neon stop signs
come in
for an evening swim
It said
It will be fun
It said
I longed to glide sensually
under the beams of the moon
in this ancient river
In this exotic land
to submerge myself in trust
to be cleansed of doubt
but no
not on this night
not in this river
likely
not in this lifetime
glowed red
like neon stop signs
come in
for an evening swim
It said
It will be fun
It said
I longed to glide sensually
under the beams of the moon
in this ancient river
In this exotic land
to submerge myself in trust
to be cleansed of doubt
but no
not on this night
not in this river
likely
not in this lifetime
Author's Note
Can't ignore the crocodiles. Can't stick to safe little swimming pools either.
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Re. No de Nile
13th Feb 2023 2:06am
Lovely write… I will be on the Nile in the not too distant future… how coincidental…
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Re: Re. No de Nile
13th Feb 2023 2:17pm
Thanks. I'm looking forward to your trip because I know there will be great poetry and pictures.
Re. No de Nile
13th Feb 2023 3:20am
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13th Feb 2023 2:18pm
Re. No de Nile
13th Feb 2023 3:45am
tread strong but careful. It is a world of sobek.
I like your narrative flow. And that end, like a cherry on a sundae.
Cheers.
I like your narrative flow. And that end, like a cherry on a sundae.
Cheers.
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Re: Re. No de Nile
18th Feb 2023 5:02am
Re. No de Nile
13th Feb 2023 8:52am
Wonderful work...
I like crocodiles and alligators...
Is it strange that I find their arms and hands "cute"...
I don't often "think" that word...
I also think cows are "cute"...
I was driving down the highway...
Saw one through the mobile cage...
She was cute and beautiful...
I like crocodiles and alligators...
Is it strange that I find their arms and hands "cute"...
I don't often "think" that word...
I also think cows are "cute"...
I was driving down the highway...
Saw one through the mobile cage...
She was cute and beautiful...
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Re: Re. No de Nile
18th Feb 2023 5:06am
Thank you.
I get the crocodilian cute thing.
And they always look like they're having some warped thought they're smiling about.
I get the crocodilian cute thing.
And they always look like they're having some warped thought they're smiling about.
Re. No de Nile
14th Feb 2023 2:34am
The allure for nights of danger sings darkly and beautifully here. You are a woman whose mystique fascinates me.
John
John
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Re: Re. No de Nile
14th Feb 2023 2:16pm
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18th Feb 2023 4:08am
Re. No de Nile
18th Feb 2023 3:45am
Re. No de Nile
23rd Feb 2023 9:53pm
Even if the waters look so inviting, danger lurks around.
Nice spill Pink.
Nice spill Pink.
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Re. No de Nile
17th Mar 2023 1:08am
Good one! I like how you use a concrete incident as a conduit to speak of the difficulties you (or the narrator) go through. Thanks for sharing!
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