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Better this way!

 
I don't even know anymore
what have we done
neither what we said
I just remember a few words
loose without meaning
only bare words pass
through my head
by my memory
and even more
through my oblivion...

I haven't had time to search
at the bottom of memory
the scars of what we said.

There has been no space
to keep the nuances
in the tones of what was said.

I believe it was serious!
I believe it was sudden!
I believe it was traumatic!

Through my oblivion
and even more
by my memory
through my head
only bare words pass
loose without meaning
I only remember a few words
so little of what we said
what have we done
I don't even know anymore.


PAR
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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