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Loving Me
Don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
With to many nights spent dreaming about you
To many secret poems written for you too
Ooh the lies in my diary
Of you kissing and loving me, Loving Me
I swear I can't take this fall
Rejection has my back against a wall
But the truth has gotta be
I gotta know if you also wake screaming for Me
Don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
To many secrets hidden of cuddling and smelling your hair
To many nights spent boo thinking of you always being there
From the play pens though out eternity, and back again
My universe has given you to me until the very end
Do you wanna to try and shake me
Because I'm shakable baby
Do you wanna try and break me
Because I'm breakable baby
My everything has to go into an approach
Your visage radiates, do I dare to broach
Your oneness hoping to inject myself into your dreams
Universally compensated as so many imaginary hugs and kisses are redeemed
Hahaha, don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
With to many nights spent dreaming about you
To many secret poems written for you too
Ooh the lies in my diary
Of you kissing and loving me, Loving Me
I swear I can't take this fall
Rejection has my back against a wall
But the truth has gotta be
I gotta know if you also wake screaming for Me
Don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
To many secrets hidden of cuddling and smelling your hair
To many nights spent boo thinking of you always being there
From the play pens though out eternity, and back again
My universe has given you to me until the very end
Do you wanna to try and shake me
Because I'm shakable baby
Do you wanna try and break me
Because I'm breakable baby
My everything has to go into an approach
Your visage radiates, do I dare to broach
Your oneness hoping to inject myself into your dreams
Universally compensated as so many imaginary hugs and kisses are redeemed
Hahaha, don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
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Re: Re. Loving Me
20th Jan 2023 1:26am
Re. Loving Me
20th Jan 2023 2:49am
I'm digging this piece Meme!
It's got bounce and harmony.
I hear it like a song in my head.
It's got bounce and harmony.
I hear it like a song in my head.
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Re: Re. Loving Me
20th Jan 2023 2:54am
Re. Loving Me
25th Jan 2023 3:58am
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25th Jan 2023 4:00am
That's two of you that say this is to sing to, we never think like that when writing. Thanks a ton for reading and commenting, much appreciation
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2nd Feb 2023 2:28am
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Re: Re. Loving Me
2nd Feb 2023 2:42am
We don't know Gus, but we will read your last piece of course. Thanks for the read and the comment, much appreciation
Re. Loving Me
3rd Feb 2023 7:43am
Lovely and just as deep as when the Beatles sing it to me. .. but if course they said.. don't let me down.. close enough. Miss you Boo
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3rd Feb 2023 6:01pm
Re. Loving Me
12th Feb 2023 3:44am
God-damn...
So much raw...unfiltered vulnerability
Condensed into one poem
Amazing work!!!
So much raw...unfiltered vulnerability
Condensed into one poem
Amazing work!!!
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Re: Re. Loving Me
12th Feb 2023 10:51am
Thanks dude, we tried something a little different. Thank you for the thumbs up
Re. Loving Me
12th Feb 2023 11:46am
Re: Re. Loving Me
12th Feb 2023 11:58am
Thanks a ton, every once in a while we manage something decent. Again thank you
Re. Loving Me
15th Feb 2023 8:57pm
This is a different side of you Me. The raw emotion and vulnerability is precise! 🖤
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Re: Re. Loving Me
15th Feb 2023 9:44pm
Why thank you Little Lady, versatility is the key to longevity. Much appreciation
Re. Loving Me
15th Feb 2023 8:58pm
This is a different side of you Me. The raw emotion and vulnerability is precise! 🖤
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7th Apr 2023 3:45am
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7th Apr 2023 3:56am
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26th Apr 2023 9:49pm
Re. Loving Me
8th Jun 2023 9:25pm
Couldn't help but identify with those who saw a song in this - brings to my mind the song Don't Bring Me Down by ELO (Electric Light Orchestra), video link here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z9nkzaOPP6g
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z9nkzaOPP6g
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Re: Re. Loving Me
8th Jun 2023 11:25pm
Re. Loving Me
Really dig it.... Read it twice and found it's playful tenderness refreshing and endearing and sort of mixed with a bit of wariness...which makes it feel that much more human.
I can see why there's a zillion comments, it's awesome ink, Me!!
Glad I stumbled upon it
🌹 💙
I can see why there's a zillion comments, it's awesome ink, Me!!
Glad I stumbled upon it
🌹 💙
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Re: Re. Loving Me
26th Jun 2023 4:24pm
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7th Sep 2023 6:18am
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