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Needles
The artist in me would choose
The sadist wouldn't care
The placement is everything
The thigh, breast, stomach
Soft tissue, heavy payload
Choose carefully
It's your calling
A pain doctrine
I could do it
Without emotion
We have that kind of bond
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The sadist wouldn't care
The placement is everything
The thigh, breast, stomach
Soft tissue, heavy payload
Choose carefully
It's your calling
A pain doctrine
I could do it
Without emotion
We have that kind of bond
Available
Discuss
Author's Note
Watercolor and Micron Pen Painting by Poetspeak
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Needles
9th Jan 2023 9:13pm
So many needles
Gently pressed to the skin.
The masochist will never give in
Placement is a sin.
The thigh, breast, stomach, ...
Pressing into them.
Acupuncture, you will never win.
Because I love the feeling.
When you break the skin.
Still you are a pain in the ass.
But we have that kind of bond. lol
Taking in all these lines.
Like a web and...
The colors are really beautiful.
Don't let it go to your head.
Those lines look too thick for a micron pen.
You must have been bearing down hard.
But I know you like doing that... :p
Gently pressed to the skin.
The masochist will never give in
Placement is a sin.
The thigh, breast, stomach, ...
Pressing into them.
Acupuncture, you will never win.
Because I love the feeling.
When you break the skin.
Still you are a pain in the ass.
But we have that kind of bond. lol
Taking in all these lines.
Like a web and...
The colors are really beautiful.
Don't let it go to your head.
Those lines look too thick for a micron pen.
You must have been bearing down hard.
But I know you like doing that... :p
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Re: Re. Needles
9th Jan 2023 9:45pm
The more you hold back, the deeper the cut.
When I ask you a question I expect an answer.
Your expertise is avoidance.
I'm used to that
Then when I call you on it I get a face
So on and on it goes.
Breaking thermometers and trying to scoop up mercury rivers.
Micron pen is new
I did bear down on it still the lines look elegant to me.
We have a bond, people don't understand it.
I'd prefer they keep guessing...
When I ask you a question I expect an answer.
Your expertise is avoidance.
I'm used to that
Then when I call you on it I get a face
So on and on it goes.
Breaking thermometers and trying to scoop up mercury rivers.
Micron pen is new
I did bear down on it still the lines look elegant to me.
We have a bond, people don't understand it.
I'd prefer they keep guessing...
Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 12:45pm
I suppose I like the deep cuts.
Everything is an answer after all.
Let's avoid talking about avoidance...
So much emotion is hidden behind a face.
And yes, so it goes.
I have followed the rivers of mercury...
Been in the clutches of the mad hatter, absorbing it.
The lines do look elegant, as does the art.
Just felt you might need some levity...
It's a very insightful piece...
Even the title says a lot.
Everything is an answer after all.
Let's avoid talking about avoidance...
So much emotion is hidden behind a face.
And yes, so it goes.
I have followed the rivers of mercury...
Been in the clutches of the mad hatter, absorbing it.
The lines do look elegant, as does the art.
Just felt you might need some levity...
It's a very insightful piece...
Even the title says a lot.
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Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 1:26pm
Ok
I learned something with this write.
The art is new and fit the subject matter.
I'll always take levity or make it myself.
Yeah
Deep cuts
Sunny Day Strut
All in this molotov cocktail
Thx Kx
I learned something with this write.
The art is new and fit the subject matter.
I'll always take levity or make it myself.
Yeah
Deep cuts
Sunny Day Strut
All in this molotov cocktail
Thx Kx
Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 00:12am
Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 00:16am
Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 1:09am
Re. Needles
Hey PS
I hate needles!!
Literally got to turn away and look elsewhere when getting
my blood drawn.
But this painting I can stare at - I love how soft it is compared to its title. LOL
thanks for sharing!!
I hate needles!!
Literally got to turn away and look elsewhere when getting
my blood drawn.
But this painting I can stare at - I love how soft it is compared to its title. LOL
thanks for sharing!!
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Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 2:20am
It’s ironic Adel
We all all have unique phobias
Fetishes too lol
Needles don’t bother me at all
Highway driving does me in, merging lanes and all that. Good thing I live In Mass Transit heaven though lots of creepy people down there.
Been having fun with these micron pen and watercolor efforts. Old dog learning new tricks.
Thx A
Appreciate your interest
I’ll take your next shot for you …
We all all have unique phobias
Fetishes too lol
Needles don’t bother me at all
Highway driving does me in, merging lanes and all that. Good thing I live In Mass Transit heaven though lots of creepy people down there.
Been having fun with these micron pen and watercolor efforts. Old dog learning new tricks.
Thx A
Appreciate your interest
I’ll take your next shot for you …
Re. Needles
This looks some of the scars I wear inside and out with shame and some with fucking pride! Some I asked for and some I did not. This is a piece I could see myself sitting in a bar somewhere chatting about all night long.....Love this and you. <3
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Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 3:08am
This the kind of comment I was hoping for ..
A lot in this that some like yourself can bite into.
What's a little pain amongst poets. We are always shedding skins and searching for new ones.
BIG THANKS for the comment and the love.
I always wondered why you loved me and I know more now.
🤠❤
A lot in this that some like yourself can bite into.
What's a little pain amongst poets. We are always shedding skins and searching for new ones.
BIG THANKS for the comment and the love.
I always wondered why you loved me and I know more now.
🤠❤
Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 3:58am
Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 1:21pm
Yes, a lot of similarities.
You probably have a sunnier personality.
It's natural for you. That's a good thing.
People like me too.
It's the darkness that invades privately....
Thank you 🤠❤
You probably have a sunnier personality.
It's natural for you. That's a good thing.
People like me too.
It's the darkness that invades privately....
Thank you 🤠❤
Re: Re. Needles
4th Feb 2023 2:21pm
and some times I invite the darkness to kick the door wide open and saunter itself right on in....
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Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 1:22pm
Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 1:36pm
I use needles all the time, between sewing as a hobby and drawing blood at work, though at times, the lines have blurred, and each has criss-crossed the other, between getting paid for a seamstress side gig vs getting enjoyment from sticking one in someone's vein.....
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Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 2:02pm
I have no problems having blood drawn. I kinda like watching the needle go in. Same with vaccines. Jab me a let's get on with the day.
You do so many things Lisa, where do you find the time?
I'll bet you're a multitasking queen ...
Thx for the comment
Appreciate
You do so many things Lisa, where do you find the time?
I'll bet you're a multitasking queen ...
Thx for the comment
Appreciate
Re. Needles
Anonymous
10th Jan 2023 3:53pm
I can't stand pricks but I like this and you
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Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 4:16pm
Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 5:40pm
a sneaky post modern cubist. Your art inspires me to paint and draw.
I have been painting my graphics onto canvas. and doing little mind sketches. Your abstracts have been a huge influence on my current abstracts.
Regards
James
I have been painting my graphics onto canvas. and doing little mind sketches. Your abstracts have been a huge influence on my current abstracts.
Regards
James
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Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 5:48pm
Yes
Sneaky cubist
I like that.
I'm honored by your compliments and glad that I inspire you to do art. That thrills me to no end.
Stay tuned, more new art in progress
Thx
Sneaky cubist
I like that.
I'm honored by your compliments and glad that I inspire you to do art. That thrills me to no end.
Stay tuned, more new art in progress
Thx
Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 5:43pm
Needles are just a necessary thing, not good or bad to me. I don't seek pain but I can handle it.
Cool art. Spikey-like.
❤️k
Cool art. Spikey-like.
❤️k
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Re: Re. Needles
10th Jan 2023 5:55pm
No pain for you Red
Thx on the art, I had a vision and it actually came out better !!
🤠❤
Thx on the art, I had a vision and it actually came out better !!
🤠❤
Re. Needles
15th Jan 2023 6:21pm
"Without emotion"...it's like we like the coldness attached.
Amazing spill, amazing artwork.
BIG LIKE
Amazing spill, amazing artwork.
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Needles
15th Jan 2023 6:25pm