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bluebird
you wept lemons
in my sunflower desire
I utter enchantments
you echo loneliness
I conjured two suns
to burn bright in your dark sky
I turn your sour disposition
you believe in me that is enough
bluebirds gossip about your happiness
they tell me
birds of the air watch over you
in the mists of time
I saw you once and i fell
in the eternal strife there is a you and I
what more can we ask for?
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16th Dec 2022 10:55pm
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Re: Re. bluebird
16th Dec 2022 11:09pm
Re. bluebird
16th Dec 2022 11:52pm
"you wept lemons in my sunflower desire." Out-fucking-standing! Brilliant,
my sweet crimsin.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
my sweet crimsin.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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17th Dec 2022 00:34am
Re. bluebird
17th Dec 2022 00:51am
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17th Dec 2022 1:50am
hello beautiful poetess good evening thank you most graciously your thoughts are lovely to me 💕
Re: Re. bluebird
17th Dec 2022 1:53am
Good evening to you too poetess, I hope you're okay today.
You're so very welcome by the way beautiful
You're so very welcome by the way beautiful
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Re: Re. bluebird
17th Dec 2022 2:08am
I'm fine just looking at a video the choreography here is impeccable ❤️
and the song so emotive...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3VB4dQuQ00&list=RDGMEMQ1dJ7wXfLlqCjwV0xfSNbA&index=2
and the song so emotive...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3VB4dQuQ00&list=RDGMEMQ1dJ7wXfLlqCjwV0xfSNbA&index=2
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17th Dec 2022 5:42pm
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17th Dec 2022 5:57pm
Re. bluebird
17th Dec 2022 9:09pm
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20th Dec 2022 1:33pm
Re. bluebird
19th Dec 2022 8:36am
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20th Dec 2022 1:33pm
Re. bluebird
20th Dec 2022 4:01am
A rhapsody of incredibly inspired imagery that sings to me of summer love where the bluebird sings and lovers find each other. Beautiful beyond compare my dear friend.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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20th Dec 2022 1:34pm