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Look how easy it is for you
You know I love the cold
That’s what I need from you
Obeying your cruel commands
Always nodding in agreement
I learned to accept my fate
While you practiced on me
Writing the most obscene things
That you perfected so well
Look how easy it is for you
How these words burn me
While laying me so coldly
This torture I need so much
As you kick these words into me
They won’t stay at the bottom
Stuffing them viscously one by one
As the sheet catches on fire
This pretense of caring, so cold
You are here to take everything
And I am here to give it to you
That which excites me so much
We can try to estimate its value
But you know for me it’s priceless
I will never run away from this
Your pride gleams between my legs
It’s so cold when you touch me
Hands gripping my hips so tight
Nestled close against your groin
Mouth on my neck as you bite
My fingernails digging so deep
I cannot face you in this embrace
Because I am the bottom, beneath you
And the only words are “yes, Master”
We will always finish your way
While your hands cover my mouth
Because you never need my words
You just want my body forever
Cruel eyes staring into my darkness
As my blood pulses against your tongue
Calling for every drop as it runs
Your fingers gripping into my mouth
You definitely control the outcome
So excited by your lack of soul
Biting down on your dead fingers
Sucking the blood, tasting myself
My blood coursing through you
Taking in my life’s savings
So greedy and wanting my soul
Which I give readily to your power
I try to close my eyes as you bite harder
You have been training me for so long
Watching as you tangle me, a slave
In your rapturous painful oblivion
Grabbing my ass, holding me so rough
Permission to do anything you want
Slamming my eyes closed like a shield
But giving in completely to your will
My neediness is so strong for your cold
You force my own mortality out of me
Draining me of everything I have
Only to feed it back to me, still alive
And it’s just as cold as I always dream
This beautiful nightmare you keep me in
Always taking my essence and blood
While I make you hot forevermore
That’s what I need from you
Obeying your cruel commands
Always nodding in agreement
I learned to accept my fate
While you practiced on me
Writing the most obscene things
That you perfected so well
Look how easy it is for you
How these words burn me
While laying me so coldly
This torture I need so much
As you kick these words into me
They won’t stay at the bottom
Stuffing them viscously one by one
As the sheet catches on fire
This pretense of caring, so cold
You are here to take everything
And I am here to give it to you
That which excites me so much
We can try to estimate its value
But you know for me it’s priceless
I will never run away from this
Your pride gleams between my legs
It’s so cold when you touch me
Hands gripping my hips so tight
Nestled close against your groin
Mouth on my neck as you bite
My fingernails digging so deep
I cannot face you in this embrace
Because I am the bottom, beneath you
And the only words are “yes, Master”
We will always finish your way
While your hands cover my mouth
Because you never need my words
You just want my body forever
Cruel eyes staring into my darkness
As my blood pulses against your tongue
Calling for every drop as it runs
Your fingers gripping into my mouth
You definitely control the outcome
So excited by your lack of soul
Biting down on your dead fingers
Sucking the blood, tasting myself
My blood coursing through you
Taking in my life’s savings
So greedy and wanting my soul
Which I give readily to your power
I try to close my eyes as you bite harder
You have been training me for so long
Watching as you tangle me, a slave
In your rapturous painful oblivion
Grabbing my ass, holding me so rough
Permission to do anything you want
Slamming my eyes closed like a shield
But giving in completely to your will
My neediness is so strong for your cold
You force my own mortality out of me
Draining me of everything I have
Only to feed it back to me, still alive
And it’s just as cold as I always dream
This beautiful nightmare you keep me in
Always taking my essence and blood
While I make you hot forevermore
Author's Note
Alternate 'work' version. Replace "yes, Master" with "yes, Boss"...
Totally different feel right? lol Changes the whole meaning with one word. I am good like that. :p
Part of the Kristina's mirror series of inspired writes. :)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/464232-an-l-shaped-word/
Totally different feel right? lol Changes the whole meaning with one word. I am good like that. :p
Part of the Kristina's mirror series of inspired writes. :)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/464232-an-l-shaped-word/
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Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 3:11pm
Master sounds much better
Do as your master requests. Great write gorgeous
Loved the new spin it brings
Love and light
Ron x
Do as your master requests. Great write gorgeous
Loved the new spin it brings
Love and light
Ron x
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16th Dec 2022 3:18pm
Oh yes! Master does sound lovely doesn't it? But that's why it was first. ;) Still having the Boss tell you what to do, taking dictation. Well that's very sexy also isn't it? ;) You just have to be the Boss. There is so much work to be done after hours. So much overtime. So I couldn't help but think about that. I will probably post something else on that next week. ;) But what can I say, I am always horny. lol I always anticipate what Master requests but always love the unexpected...
Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 3:13pm
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16th Dec 2022 3:25pm
Well I do love being gorgeous my dear MP. ;) I am here to keep you excited because what is life without excitement. It would be pretty boring. It 's always important to have some fun. :) Makes me think of the gorgeous smells, tastes, and colours of Morocco. So much spice and life is always gorgeous.
Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 3:35pm
good morning sexy this is over the top fantabulous
it excited me deeply... I feel this in my depths...
man what you do to me lady ❤️
it excited me deeply... I feel this in my depths...
man what you do to me lady ❤️
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Re: Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 3:51pm
You are over the top fabulous to me Brenda! ;) And so I love exciting you deeply, to our depths. ;) Life would be so boring without excitement, and variety... Oh, the spice of life!! I LOVE the sound of 'man what you do to me', now that sounds like a poem that needs to be written for sure. ;) Just saying...
Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 3:57pm
The bolded words illuminate the beautiful intensity of this piece. Great write.
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Re: Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 4:19pm
Hey there Pink, I am really happy the bold words illuminated the intensity as intended. I am pretty impatient with formatting but I always hope it accomplishes something especially capturing the intensity... And supported by the italic as well. I really love that you thought it was great and very much appreciate you stopping by and sharing your thoughts. It means a lot to me. ;)
Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 6:05pm
Nobody writes bdsm poetry better than you.
Nobody deserves pain to pleasure more than you.
You are the Goddess of Pain.
You're bound with a purpose.
A Sadist's delight.
Picture tells a compelling story.
BIG DESIRE TO BIND .....YOU
RL AWARD
Nobody deserves pain to pleasure more than you.
You are the Goddess of Pain.
You're bound with a purpose.
A Sadist's delight.
Picture tells a compelling story.
BIG DESIRE TO BIND .....YOU
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 8:01pm
Oh how the words, and everything else, bind me tight; often punishing me but eventually becoming pleasure. Ah, the Goddess of Pain... I do feel like that sometimes. I have experienced more than my share of both pain and pleasure it would seem. Always bound with a purpose, something the sadist enjoys so much and the masochist as well; who perhaps gets even more out of it. She has a look of defiance. Makes it all that much more fun doesn't it? ;) BIG DESIRE... that's a new one. BIG LIKE!
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17th Dec 2022 12:15pm
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18th Dec 2022 2:36am
20 minutes... that's quite a challenge.... :p Transformed into what I wonder...
Re. Look how easy it is for you
I totally get vampire vipes from this. Your dark master that you see as a Godly lover to fulfill his cold desires. That's my take away from it at least hehe
Wonderful read, friend. Has to be one of my top favorites from you 😁
Wonderful read, friend. Has to be one of my top favorites from you 😁
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Re: Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 10:23pm
You definitely get it DC. ;) I was absolutely thinking vampire when I wrote it. I corrected leaving the theme off now. Originally I thought I had it but I guess I ran out of themes. lol But you definitely get it, yes a dark master and Godly lover, in fulfilling his cold desires it totally ignites the burning desires inside me even more. Oh the sweet torture and pain that elicits such incredible pleasures. It's quite the dichotomy. ;) A top favorite, hell yeah! now I love that!!!
Re: Re. Look how easy it is for you
16th Dec 2022 11:41pm
I was thinking vampires too, so many bloody references.
Made me want a bloody KristinaX in lieu of a bloody mary.
Made me want a bloody KristinaX in lieu of a bloody mary.
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Re: Re. Look how easy it is for you
17th Dec 2022 1:16am
You know how much I love vampires, and blood. lol Definitely another series (started a while ago actually)... ;)
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17th Dec 2022 3:25am
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18th Dec 2022 3:06am
Now that sounds like a great title for one of us; Bite me: What a way to go...
Re. Look how easy it is for you
17th Dec 2022 1:36am
Very nice Christina ❤️I love when it feels good, but we don’t have to finish my way every time. 🔥im never selfish when it comes to sharing candy,I’m a good boy 🥰
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18th Dec 2022 2:42am
Your way, my way, every way... ;) It's all good to me. But I love being the candy. Not with multiple people mind you, more of a one-on-one type of person. That's not to say with the right third party there is some fun to be had. Although it would have to be another girl for me. Not really into two guys at the same time. I know that breaks your heart. lol I am sure you are a very bad boy. They are always the ones that say they are good boys. lol
Re. Look how easy it is for you
17th Dec 2022 1:40am
You are beautiful sexy Vampire woman. Vampire love is hot. Keep on writing.
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18th Dec 2022 2:49am
Oh yes! I am definitely ready to suck... some blood that is... ;) well at least bringing some blood to the surface in pulsating lust and passion. Beautiful and sexy is definitely the way to get the blood flowing, isn't it? ;) Vampire love is so hot. Those ancient dark desires persist through the ages. Just waiting to be taken...
Re. Look how easy it is for you
Anonymous
17th Dec 2022 2:22am
Really, really enjoyed!
Big LIKE!
Nice stuff, KristinaX.
Good line integrity, good movement through different aspects of the lovemaking.
Very nice stuf!!
Big LIKE!
Nice stuff, KristinaX.
Good line integrity, good movement through different aspects of the lovemaking.
Very nice stuf!!
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18th Dec 2022 2:58am
Well, hey Mark, it's really nice to see you. I adore 'Really, really enjoyed!' That makes me happy and a Big LIKE! too. I feel like I accomplished something. ;) I really appreciate your analysis and sharing your thoughts. I really like that you feel there was really good line integrity and could see the movement through the different aspects of lovemaking contained in this one. There is definitely a lot to it both on and under the surface.
Re. Look how easy it is for you
17th Dec 2022 10:58am
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18th Dec 2022 3:03am
Oh yes! you know it RT. The climax is on the edge, at the edge, and beyond the edge. But it builds so intensely as you find yourself in all of those places and positions. I love being pushed beyond the edge over and over, but I love pushing someone beyond the edge over and over also. Boundaries were made to be pushed ever further, and deeper... Oh how I love pushing them and being pushed. It's one of the most exciting things in the world. ;)
Re. Look how easy it is for you
17th Dec 2022 8:43pm
Hot damn that was intense. Vivid descriptions through and through.
Gotta love the submissive state of mind and how it fills the need, it's really a rapturous emotion that only that special someone can fulfill.
Superb write.
Gotta love the submissive state of mind and how it fills the need, it's really a rapturous emotion that only that special someone can fulfill.
Superb write.
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Re: Re. Look how easy it is for you
18th Dec 2022 3:10am
Hell yeah Wally! I love Hot damn! and always too intense it seems. ;) (or so I am told lol) I love that you could see it vividly. Ah, the submissive state of mind gets what it wants doesn't it. :p Definitely fills the need, and gets filled in the process. Indeed it takes a special someone to fulfill both roles. For me, I can be submissive, dominant, and everything in between. And I am quite happy with that. Variety is the spice of life. So if you want to be whipped I am girl, but if you want to whip then I am girl. :p Damn! I definitely need some of that right now. ;)
Re. Look how easy it is for you
18th Dec 2022 11:04am
Bonus 29 on the road to Hell 30
Luxuriously castigated
Sumptuous affair of the senses
Can't get enough
Luxuriously castigated
Sumptuous affair of the senses
Can't get enough
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Re: Re. Look how easy it is for you
18th Dec 2022 2:29pm
I know the road to Hell all to well. Even have a poem reading titled The road to Hell. :p Ah yes castigated, a sumptuous affair. I am so glad you like it enough to find your way back again. ;)
Re. Look how easy it is for you
18th Dec 2022 2:41pm
Are you playing with 'The Boss' now? What happened about the GP? Billy's just being cheeky, ignore him! 🤣
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18th Dec 2022 6:57pm
But... I have to do what the boss says right? and he keeps telling me to... * nevermind, innocent look * So hard assignments but I like to be challenged, over and over again. On the desk, in the meeting room, in the parking lot, at lunch, and everywhere else too. The GP called me for another appointment too. It's just so busy around here damnit! :p
Re. Look how easy it is for you
20th Dec 2022 5:42am
First thought, the song "Freeze Thraw", by Basia but it doesn't really apply here. I congratulate you on keeping the metaphor of cold poignant for the bulk of the write!
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Re: Re. Look how easy it is for you
20th Dec 2022 5:35pm
I don't know that one so I will definitely be listening soon. I am very interested to see if it applies here. I do love the cold! You feel so alive when you are hit by those frigid gusts against a naked body. I am glad you were able to follow the metaphor and all that it means... I will have to get back to you on the song. ;) I bet I will definitely find a lot of meaning in it.
Re. Look how easy it is for you
20th Dec 2022 10:15pm
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Wow, damn! I love the Goddamn. And I love cycling so I have strong legs, and I can definitely kick the words into you Daniel. ;p I really love that you could feel the intensity too. Oh how exciting submission can be, especially when someone is dominant and really knows what they want. The sensation of the cold can be so intense... Fulfilling all of those deep dark desires for him, for yourself. mmmmm....
Re. Look how easy it is for you
22nd Dec 2022 2:46am
It ain't all bad. I will say please and thank you! (No, I won't. Not when I'm being ornery. Lol)
Dang girl, you can bring the coldest fire when you're motivated! I had to re-read mine and saw how you intertwined them so fluidly. But with your own tantalizing version of course. I admit I like the pic you used (well, duh) and I like the eroticism of yours making mine more impactful. Impacts are great, ain't they?
I'm impressed with yours! And I'm humbly thankful of you propping mine up so well.
Killer write. Don't be so deadly with us older guys!
Dang girl, you can bring the coldest fire when you're motivated! I had to re-read mine and saw how you intertwined them so fluidly. But with your own tantalizing version of course. I admit I like the pic you used (well, duh) and I like the eroticism of yours making mine more impactful. Impacts are great, ain't they?
I'm impressed with yours! And I'm humbly thankful of you propping mine up so well.
Killer write. Don't be so deadly with us older guys!
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22nd Dec 2022 1:11pm
Haha, please, thank you, and yes maam... oh the manners. ;) But I like ornery, just take what you want and need without the politeness sometimes. ;)
I love the coldest fire. It's like going into the sauna and then the arctic cold plunge and back in a European spa. Getting all sweaty, needing to lick it off, and then the total shock of frigid temperatures closing every pore instantly. mmmmmmm.... I am glad you re-read yours and were able to see how intertwined they are. Especially considering this one would not exist without the inspiration I got from reading yours. Oh yeah, the pic - that look of defiance is priceless. lol Oh yes! the eroticism does add something to the impact I think. Impacts are awesome. So many impacts and jolts. ;) So happy you are impressed and I love bringing attention to yours as best I can. But but... I love being deadly. lol
I love the coldest fire. It's like going into the sauna and then the arctic cold plunge and back in a European spa. Getting all sweaty, needing to lick it off, and then the total shock of frigid temperatures closing every pore instantly. mmmmmmm.... I am glad you re-read yours and were able to see how intertwined they are. Especially considering this one would not exist without the inspiration I got from reading yours. Oh yeah, the pic - that look of defiance is priceless. lol Oh yes! the eroticism does add something to the impact I think. Impacts are awesome. So many impacts and jolts. ;) So happy you are impressed and I love bringing attention to yours as best I can. But but... I love being deadly. lol
Re. Look how easy it is for you
22nd Dec 2022 2:40pm
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22nd Dec 2022 2:56pm
I bet you do. She is totally ready to be watered and make you grow. All with those defiant fuck you, fuck me eyes. lol Yeah nefarious purposes, that's the best present. That's what I want, to be unwrapped, but bound, for nefarious purposes. :p Oh yeah! my mind is all on being a Christmas present now. One that you show how hard it can be to fully open it up.
Re. Look how easy it is for you
28th Jan 2023 1:45pm
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28th Jan 2023 3:15pm
Oh yes a gloriously cold morning... I am sad to think that the heat will be coming before you know it. I have my own heat source I don't need any more from nature. But a hardon can always warm the soul and so I am very happy and excited to provide those. lol I mean what woman doesn't love the excitement of a man. That's so damn sexy!