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Re. If you lived close by
Anonymous
13th Dec 2022 3:20pm
I don't have a green thumb so I don't have plants to water. I'll bring a pen and a notebook though
This is awesome!!!
This is awesome!!!
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13th Dec 2022 7:49pm
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13th Dec 2022 3:44pm
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13th Dec 2022 7:51pm
I’d like some Joe right now .
Took a few days off my front my meager 1/2 cup in the morning.
BIG LIKE YOUR BIG LIKE WALLY
THX w
Took a few days off my front my meager 1/2 cup in the morning.
BIG LIKE YOUR BIG LIKE WALLY
THX w
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13th Dec 2022 4:18pm
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13th Dec 2022 7:52pm
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Re: Re. If you lived close by
13th Dec 2022 7:53pm
Had been feeling writers block hit this hit me this morning so out it came
Thx Keliani
Appreciate
Thx Keliani
Appreciate
Re. If you lived close by
13th Dec 2022 6:29pm
Ooooh, pastry porn... now you've really got my attention!
There's a sweet & gooey heart hidden in there.
❤k
There's a sweet & gooey heart hidden in there.
❤k
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Re: Re. If you lived close by
13th Dec 2022 7:55pm
Re. If you lived close by
13th Dec 2022 6:47pm
This is a really great poem. It’s brief but descriptive. An instant favorite.
Xx
Xx
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13th Dec 2022 6:54pm
Dear PS,
I was just wondering where you were and then what do my wondering eyes should appear is an eight layered pastry with tea and some cheer!
You had me at the picture and then came the words. Great piece!
H🌷
I was just wondering where you were and then what do my wondering eyes should appear is an eight layered pastry with tea and some cheer!
You had me at the picture and then came the words. Great piece!
H🌷
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Re: Re. If you lived close by
13th Dec 2022 7:57pm
Dear H,
Believe it or not this cowboy was feeling the writers block but shook it off with gooiness and here I be
Many thanks H
🤠
Believe it or not this cowboy was feeling the writers block but shook it off with gooiness and here I be
Many thanks H
🤠
Re. If you lived close by
13th Dec 2022 7:00pm
Love this. How the simple act of watching her watering the plants can be the beat & pulse of intimacy. Oo, that picture found me scurrying to the kitchen for a Portuguese Tart (not a euphemism for a lady from Portugal. lol). Do you get them in NY? Delicious.
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This was based on a female conversation and next thing I knew a poem was born.
I had a Portuguese girlfriend for a spell way back when. She broke my heart but I had some phenomenal meals with her in Portuguese restaurants. Had some other phenomenal moments too. She was quite a sensual beauty.
She was my pastry for quite a awhile.
Now I’m hungry again …
Thx Rob
I had a Portuguese girlfriend for a spell way back when. She broke my heart but I had some phenomenal meals with her in Portuguese restaurants. Had some other phenomenal moments too. She was quite a sensual beauty.
She was my pastry for quite a awhile.
Now I’m hungry again …
Thx Rob
Re. If you lived close by
13th Dec 2022 9:13pm
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Re. If you lived close by
14th Dec 2022 00:02am
As long as you don't extract her teeth, ay poet? That pastry looks so tempting, waiting to be eaten, I'd say.
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14th Dec 2022 00:10am
Will leave the dentistry to those more qualified Billy.
Funny comment tho brother ...
Funny comment tho brother ...
Re. If you lived close by
14th Dec 2022 1:45am
I've lived in seven states. I so wish I had all my family and friends in one place. Nothing like the nuances close proximity brings.
I liked this. Got me thinking.
I liked this. Got me thinking.
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14th Dec 2022 1:55am
Yes, nuances, I kinda live for that.
Only 3 states for me.
I love city life
Don't think I would do well elsewhere
Thx PD
Only 3 states for me.
I love city life
Don't think I would do well elsewhere
Thx PD
Re. If you lived close by
14th Dec 2022 1:46am
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14th Dec 2022 1:56am
Re. If you lived close by
14th Dec 2022 3:46am
All I keep thinking about is “gooey”
My mind instinctively goes there…
Loved the simplicity and depth.
See, there I go again.
This really is an excellent write. Congrats on conquering the block.
My mind instinctively goes there…
Loved the simplicity and depth.
See, there I go again.
This really is an excellent write. Congrats on conquering the block.
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2022 9:23am
LOL like mind's
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2022 9:23am
LOL like mind's
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Re: Re. If you lived close by
14th Dec 2022 11:41am
Yes
It took the word gooey to blast me out of writers block.
You know what affect a word like that can be with sexual outlaws like us.
Sugary, sexy, well you know ....
Keep it simple I say !!
Thx M
It took the word gooey to blast me out of writers block.
You know what affect a word like that can be with sexual outlaws like us.
Sugary, sexy, well you know ....
Keep it simple I say !!
Thx M
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14th Dec 2022 11:44am
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14th Dec 2022 11:48am
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14th Dec 2022 11:55am
Yes, of course you are Mary
My comment would not go under yours, I tried several times to correct it. Glad you saw it anyway ....
Tequila and sleep gummies finally got me some shut eye.
Now, if I can only get some gooey ....
My comment would not go under yours, I tried several times to correct it. Glad you saw it anyway ....
Tequila and sleep gummies finally got me some shut eye.
Now, if I can only get some gooey ....
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14th Dec 2022 4:47am
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15th Dec 2022 00:06am
Like you told me once about eating bacon and eggs. I was afraid to tell you about the bacon part and you gave me the green light. That was over 6 months ago. Ironically I just had bacon and eggs a few days ago but it was only the second time in 6 months.
Translation: cheat a little or eat the bad stuff in the dark.
Nobodies watching
Translation: cheat a little or eat the bad stuff in the dark.
Nobodies watching
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18th Dec 2022 00:46am
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Re. If you lived close by
9th May 2023 5:25pm
Hoi hoi
Congratulations on fighting and winning over the block.
I overlooked this one when you posted it. I apologise!
And look at the amount of people who resonated it with (is this English at all???)
A wonderful write, honestly!
I’m with @Her. Truly a compass to sail by.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
Congratulations on fighting and winning over the block.
I overlooked this one when you posted it. I apologise!
And look at the amount of people who resonated it with (is this English at all???)
A wonderful write, honestly!
I’m with @Her. Truly a compass to sail by.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re. If you lived close by
9th May 2023 7:01pm
That is a tasty picture and there are many tasty women whom I'd like to eat or help me eat this..
Many thanks for going back to this one ...
Regards,
Poetspeak
Many thanks for going back to this one ...
Regards,
Poetspeak
Re. If you lived close by
Anonymous
29th Nov 2023 2:02am
The epitome of intimacy
Plainly spoken
Plainly spoken
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Re: Re. If you lived close by
29th Nov 2023 2:20am
I like to get it done with minimal word invasion...
Appreciate the comment on this older entry..
Appreciate the comment on this older entry..