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What I woke up with ....
Be elegant
Be kind
Put up with my sexual desires
Create
Make bacon and eggs, toast
Drink whiskey with me
That's about it
Be kind
Put up with my sexual desires
Create
Make bacon and eggs, toast
Drink whiskey with me
That's about it
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Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. What I woke up with ....
19th Nov 2022 1:34pm
Oh my goodness. LOVE the painting. So vibrant and can see you in this. I’m digging the simplicity of the poem.
Excellent write.
Excellent write.
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19th Nov 2022 1:53pm
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19th Nov 2022 3:18pm
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20th Nov 2022 10:21am
Re. What I woke up with ....
19th Nov 2022 1:38pm
How wonderful to have us read through painting, art, so many things
And also the words of your poem guide us to the meaning of the painting
And also the words of your poem guide us to the meaning of the painting
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19th Nov 2022 1:55pm
Sometimes I wake up with this stuff
Painting was from a few years ago but universal in situations
Thx MP
Painting was from a few years ago but universal in situations
Thx MP
Re. What I woke up with ....
19th Nov 2022 2:26pm
The need for intensity sometimes makes us discount the simple joys.... this is a calming morning reflection, with just enough growl in the art to keep the brain entertained.
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19th Nov 2022 3:36pm
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19th Nov 2022 4:17pm
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19th Nov 2022 7:52pm
Re. What I woke up with ....
19th Nov 2022 7:35pm
Nice.
Hey dude, I'm with ya except for the sexual desire stuff! I'm fairly good at poker...
instead?
Keep being who you are. If it ain't broken, there's nothing to fix.
Hey dude, I'm with ya except for the sexual desire stuff! I'm fairly good at poker...
instead?
Keep being who you are. If it ain't broken, there's nothing to fix.
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19th Nov 2022 7:54pm
Yeah
You and I can keep our sexual desires to ourselves.
That path shalt not cross …
Thx Styx
You and I can keep our sexual desires to ourselves.
That path shalt not cross …
Thx Styx
Re. What I woke up with ....
20th Nov 2022 00:36am
Hey PS!!
I'm digging this little morning write.
As someone who is in charge of cooking breakfast I can relate somewhat - hahaha
And the hat!! Love it!!
Keep styling amigo:)
I'm digging this little morning write.
As someone who is in charge of cooking breakfast I can relate somewhat - hahaha
And the hat!! Love it!!
Keep styling amigo:)
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20th Nov 2022 2:06am
I’m a total morning man A,
These poems come early and dashed this one out.
Glad you like the hat, it’s one of my favorites.
Part cowboy and part mystery man.
Incognito all the way.
Stylin’ rules
Thx A
These poems come early and dashed this one out.
Glad you like the hat, it’s one of my favorites.
Part cowboy and part mystery man.
Incognito all the way.
Stylin’ rules
Thx A
Re. What I woke up with ....
20th Nov 2022 2:31am
Men are good cooks because two eggs and a sausage can feed a woman's belly for nine months. Keep on writing.
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20th Nov 2022 2:50am
Re. What I woke up with ....
20th Nov 2022 6:15am
Dear PS,
I’m feeling the big Bukowski in this write. I enjoy these dash poems. To me they represent a moment in time of your thought process.
I’d like my eggs over medium please.😊
H🌷
I’m feeling the big Bukowski in this write. I enjoy these dash poems. To me they represent a moment in time of your thought process.
I’d like my eggs over medium please.😊
H🌷
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20th Nov 2022 10:30am
Dear H,
I like the Bukowski reference. He probably ate a lot of bacon and eggs. I'll bet sausages too. Bukowski probably didn't worry about diet or cholesterol laden foods. Probably part of his allure.
I like my eggs over easy or just sunny side. I like them kind of runny. Definitely kind of sexual. Like mopping up the yoke with whole wheat toast. Also enjoy poached eggs. That all said I only eat eggs maybe 3 or 4 times a year, mostly in the summer for unknown reasons.
I love bacon but same gig, don't eat it often but enjoy it when I do.
I like it fatty and slightly undercooked.
Now you have my bacon and eggs resume.
Always a pleasure to see you H...
X
I like the Bukowski reference. He probably ate a lot of bacon and eggs. I'll bet sausages too. Bukowski probably didn't worry about diet or cholesterol laden foods. Probably part of his allure.
I like my eggs over easy or just sunny side. I like them kind of runny. Definitely kind of sexual. Like mopping up the yoke with whole wheat toast. Also enjoy poached eggs. That all said I only eat eggs maybe 3 or 4 times a year, mostly in the summer for unknown reasons.
I love bacon but same gig, don't eat it often but enjoy it when I do.
I like it fatty and slightly undercooked.
Now you have my bacon and eggs resume.
Always a pleasure to see you H...
X
Re. What I woke up with ....
20th Nov 2022 11:45am
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20th Nov 2022 12:10pm
Re. What I woke up with ....
reminds me of a friend of my grandfather in NJ back in the 1960's who had been a cowboy out west
he lived to about 100
he was known in town as Old Man Singer
every day after his breakfast of steak & fried eggs
he had a shot of whiskey and a cigar
somewhere i might still have a photo of him in cowboy town saloon
the bar was but a plank of wood supported by two wooden barrels
i liked him .....he was a great storyteller
silent lotus
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he lived to about 100
he was known in town as Old Man Singer
every day after his breakfast of steak & fried eggs
he had a shot of whiskey and a cigar
somewhere i might still have a photo of him in cowboy town saloon
the bar was but a plank of wood supported by two wooden barrels
i liked him .....he was a great storyteller
silent lotus
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20th Nov 2022 5:22pm
This is a great comment
I really like the sound of Old Man Singer
I call myself a cowboy but live in the big bad city and the only cowboy stuff I do is polite stuff like holding doors for people. I always pictured cowboys as being chivalrous....
Would love to see his picture
Thx SL
Appreciate
I really like the sound of Old Man Singer
I call myself a cowboy but live in the big bad city and the only cowboy stuff I do is polite stuff like holding doors for people. I always pictured cowboys as being chivalrous....
Would love to see his picture
Thx SL
Appreciate
Re. What I woke up with ....
20th Nov 2022 10:22pm
Explosive! You really split the atom with this. I want this to hang on my wall. Love it.
regards
James
regards
James
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20th Nov 2022 10:30pm
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23rd Nov 2022 8:07pm
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23rd Nov 2022 8:12pm
Indeed that is true Wally
Keeping it simple and tight !!
Happy T day my good Man !
Thx W
Keeping it simple and tight !!
Happy T day my good Man !
Thx W