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Life will not end this way
Trapped.
Trapped in an overcrowded sea of thoughts.
Thoughts that make me feel claustrophobic.
Claustrophobic anxiety.
Anxiety that stems from walking on eggshells around you.
You are completely in control of my life.
Life isn’t suppose to be like this.
This is my last chance to escape.
Escape to the independent life that I deserve.
Deserve to not be trapped.
Trapped.
Trapped in an overcrowded sea of thoughts.
Thoughts that make me feel claustrophobic.
Claustrophobic anxiety.
Anxiety that stems from walking on eggshells around you.
You are completely in control of my life.
Life isn’t suppose to be like this.
This is my last chance to escape.
Escape to the independent life that I deserve.
Deserve to not be trapped.
Trapped.
Published 23rd Oct 2022
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- Edited 29th May 2023 7:45am
23rd Oct 2022 6:51pm
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24th Oct 2022 00:24am
23rd Oct 2022 8:34pm
You fight hard to escape, you are in control of your life. Keep on writing.
24th Oct 2022 00:24am
7th Nov 2022 00:51am
It's never easy to get away or let yourself be free of this. It's like a mental prison as well, being told certain things to keep you in fear. Your piece is relatable, a warning to others who may be in the same position, thinking they have no way out.
Excellent work. Thanks for sharing.
Excellent work. Thanks for sharing.
