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Who Should I Be ?
Undefined
Friend
Father figure
Uncle
Lover
Cold sore
Desperado
Reporter from the edge
Milk Man
Remember them ?
I didn't think so
Who should I be
Tell me
I'll try
Friend
Father figure
Uncle
Lover
Cold sore
Desperado
Reporter from the edge
Milk Man
Remember them ?
I didn't think so
Who should I be
Tell me
I'll try
Published 18th Oct 2022
Author's Note
Short Thoughts Series #1
Reflection and definition
Reflection and definition
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18th Oct 2022 00:34am
I feel the edge of this write I think all we can do
is be our three dimensional selves
and all that encompasses...
great write dearest Poet ❤️
is be our three dimensional selves
and all that encompasses...
great write dearest Poet ❤️
18th Oct 2022 00:38am
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18th Oct 2022 1:16am
18th Oct 2022 1:03am
Love the sincerity and vulnerability in this.
You surely will never be forgotten, Gary.
You surely will never be forgotten, Gary.
18th Oct 2022 1:18am
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18th Oct 2022 12:05pm
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18th Oct 2022 1:40pm
18th Oct 2022 2:36pm
You should be yourself.................That discovery, as you know, comes after a long time of meanderings.
18th Oct 2022 2:38pm
Be yourself. Those who stick, will stick. Those who dont
well, they are clearly the cold sores.
Xx
Xx
18th Oct 2022 6:00pm
Good advice
Was going to add a paper cut as well but already wrote that poem żears ago
Thx E
❤🧡
Was going to add a paper cut as well but already wrote that poem żears ago
Thx E
❤🧡
19th Oct 2022 3:14am
Dear PS,
No limits.
Be everything.
Most of all have a blast in whichever persona you choose.
H🌷
No limits.
Be everything.
Most of all have a blast in whichever persona you choose.
H🌷
19th Oct 2022 4:04am
7th Nov 2022 00:24am
It's like wearing many hats, and whatever fits and feels right for the moment.
Nice spill Poet.
Nice spill Poet.
7th Nov 2022 00:39am
