a dew development (haiku)

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I appreciate it.

Just beautiful
Love and light
Ron xx

Just like you.... (Awww)
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts with me, Ron

I always enjoy having you stop in!

🌹💙-⚔️
xoxo

I got hope for you and me.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Anything is possible when you keep hope alive!! ;p
Thanks for the lovely comments, Francisco!
I appreciate it.

🌹-B

This is oh so lovely, dear beautiful BV.😊
Thank you for sharing 🥀

Awww....much thanks, dear lady!
Glad you enjoyed and even more glad to have had you visit!

Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 💙
-B

Dear BV,

That’s really lovely. I truly enjoyed the hope and balm this piece has cast today. It’s made me feel very calm. Almost pleasant. Omg who am I? 🤷🏻‍♀️😉
H🌷

Dear, H
To put you in a calm, pleasant state is more than I could of hope to achieve with this piece. I thrilled you found it to be of a soothing nature and that you took the time to leave that wonderful information with me.

Your visits are extremely meaningful to me and always such a great comfort, themselves.

Much thanks and love sent your way,
🌹 💙
B

light on light
Everything is beautiful
Get creative with Haiku
ty sharing with us

Thanks for stopping by and for leaving me such lovely feedback, MP.

It's a pleasure to have you take the time; I'm delighted that you enjoyed my little haiku.

Much love and appreciations,
🌹💙
B

It is an honor for me to read your poems, which bring joy and happiness to the hearts of its readers

⑅✩♡ᵗʱᵃᵑᵏઽ*♡♬＊°

So damn beautiful! Thank you!

You honor me with such warm kind words, LV.
My deepest thanks and love...

🌹 💙
B

Dew drop in....

lol.... cute, RT

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You are such an incredible poet. Drips of hope is what we need for sure.

Wonderful ink, friend 😁

(blushes)
Deep thanks and appreciation for the amazing kind sentiments, DC. Your opinion means a lot to me; I'm happy you enjoyed this little haiku and it's attempt at fostering a bit of hope... ✨

A pleasure to have you here...
Much obliged, my friend
🌹B

I think I shed my own tear reading this! Exemplary work as always.

Ohhh my... You're too kind and very sweet.
Thank you so much for taking the time to stop in; I adore your comments.... and just love that you found something that spoke to you within my 17 syllables

Always a pleasure to see you and to know your thoughts....

Much love sent your way ✨
🌹💙
B

one of the better haikus i have read

Thanks so much, James!

I appreciate that very much
🌹💙
B

My lovely friend,
There's a true smile on my face currently, one that was put there by your comments here, so it's all yours... 😁  

Thank you!!  

For being here and for seeing a bit of magic ✨ 💫  
It's meaningful to me and it's a lovely reminder that a little goes a long way...

I hope you are doing well and aren't working too hard.

Have a wonderful weekend,
🌹 💙
xo
-B

Sweet teardrops.
❣️❣️❣️
🙏🏽

Ohhh the absolute sweetest.... ;p
Thank you for thinking so, KP

Have a wonderful weekend, my friend
🌹 💙
B

Your evocation of the tears of the night shed coats my heart with sacred drops of hope.  You said so incredibly much in this small space.  It is a ball of energy that touches my being with sacred power that dazzles with the dream of hope. I loved immersing myself in your inner sea held in this dewdrop. There is faith enough to move mountains in your iridescent micro-universe of wisdom.  
 
Xo  
John

My darling,  
Your comments bestow such richness and true warmth... I don't ever want to know what it's like to be without them.

Thank you for making me feel special and worthy. I am beyond grateful and truly filled with love and appreciation.

-Always
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Susan

I too, think haiku, senryú are on a whole other level of poetic appreciation. There's something about being able to capture the brevity of a given emotional space within such minimal confines that really is much harder than it might seem and which fully entices and thrills me. I absolutely LOVE trying to find those "perfect" 17 syllables.... I have practiced and practiced, so your comments hold special meaning and tremendous weight with me.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts ... it's a kindness, one sincerely I'm grateful for.

🌹-B

Outstanding dear one

Thank you so much, Tim.  
 
I'm totally thrilled you think so and adore that you've stopped in to leave that thought.  
It's moving and profoundly meaningful to me on many levels.    
   
Haiku/senryú have been a style of poetry that I very much enjoyed and revered after falling in love with the intensity and enormous impact that such a little poetic vehicle could have.    
   
I was so so awful at writing them when I started my journey here on DUP but decided that I wanted to learn or at least TRY to get better; so I practiced and practiced them. There is a valuable lesson in understanding that certain things shouldn't just flow instantly like collecting rain. Plus, the purposeful structure and history of the format lends itself perfectly to the ethos of practice, along with lessons of trial and error.  
   
Since educated myself I feel I've (hopefully) come a long long way; hidden the worst of those early haiku/senryú but kept them for my own eyes. The rereading of one's beginnings is essential in keeping perspective I think! As is reminding myself that writing is in large part, (sort of) about the documenting of one's own learning and the stumbling along the way, called growth...  
   
My attachment to this format almost personifies my time on DUP and that's the biggest part as to why comments like yours, though tiny, affect me so very much.    
   
Again, thank you, dear poet.    
(sorry to drone on!)    
🌹💙    
B

The haiku as you so eloquently show is an excellent tool for personification.

I couldn't agree more, Jazz.

Thanks for the visit and reminder!
Hope you are doing well

🌹-B

Awww... Thank you for such kind words.
I so appreciate it.


It's nice to meet you - 💙I hope you enjoy your time here.

🌹B

Her tears part of the life-blood hydration cycle. Providing moisture for future growth and sustaining life.  Tears not of sadness but joy as they provide hope.

Eloquently depicted by your haiku.

Dew (moist) a prelude to “more things to come”.

Your thought process is one that I enjoy immensely, dear Leo.

I lounge blissfully within each and every word.
Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving me such insightful comments.... I'm delighted you did.

Much love, my dear
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Excellent in every way...

Awww... As is this truly kind comment.


Thank you, LilD.. That means the world
Hope you are doing well... Thinking about you and Jade! Is she dressing up for Halloween?
Maybe we'll see her in a new avatar!?... Lol

Take care, my friend
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With a contribution of this calibre, I think a new category of award should be introduced, but as no feedback is proffered and the lack of awards, apart from the joy composition the incentive to post a drawback. Respectfully my take in public post

Your comments are stunningly extraordinary, slip! I can't thank you enough for the care and consideration you've taken in leaving them with me.

Your thoughts and insights are truly welcomed and much revered.

I hope you're doing well and looking forward to all that fall has in store, my friend.

Much love and respect from across the pond ✨
🌹-B

Hoi hoi
After reading someone’s oh so sad poem, you’ve no idea what it means that I can trust you/your poem to make my whole day beautiful again!
Thank you so much!
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi
Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such encouraging and positive feedback, dear Gus.

It's not often that someone tells you you've brought a bit of beauty into their day, so I'm very grateful and appreciative you found that here.

It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
Much love and well wishes sent your way ✨
🌹 💙
B

A little hope goes a long way and so does a most needed haiku in today's  society and current climate.
Love the word sacred, that for me, really added something special to your poem.
And speaks volumes in your capacity as a writer.
Thanks for sharing BlueVelvete and enjoyed very much.
Sjhaun.x.

Senryú and haiku are total favorites for me. I fell in love with the ability to take 17 syllables and to try to make something uniquely meaningful and gut punch worthy!

That brevity within the minimalistic constraint, is a total euphoric high for me... If captured!

Thanks for picking up on a bit of found worth, here. Your feedback hits a good nerve and means a lot, because I've really spent time trying to up my game within this format.

You're a good guy and an excellent source of motivational morale!

Much obliged, Shaun... much obliged!

-Susan

Each to their own and I must admit I'm not really a fan.
But, I can spot a duffer anyday.
I know the process and all that and I am a big fan of less is more especially in thyme, stripped down, bare bones, cut the chase, no long winded arty farty pretentious  poetry bullshit and all that.
But for me ancient Japan has a lot to answer for...

By Shinto's old bones
Japan's ghosts haunt the Welshie
Until he sees sense

Guess I was asking for that one.
Still respect for writing it and writing it so well.
And for me one word, just one unique word in a poem, albeit haiku can tip the balance in favour of,
Yes, I enjoyed reading that.

Shaun.x.

It's so pretty, classic and elegant.
Outstanding.

Thanks so much for that kind nod, Walter.
Glad you enjoyed it!

🌹💙
B

Sounds like a long night full of loneliness, but also a transformation.

I understand the meaning of hope in people lives. It provides determination to go on, move forward, but for myself, hope is like walking alongside a foggy, foggy river bank where one can easily lose their footing and before they know it they are in over their heads ( this is my age talking I guess).

hugs,
buddhakitty.

I can see that outlook and relate to your perspective, bk. Sometimes, what life has taught us is exactly that... What you said, to be aware of yourself and your surroundings so that you're not knocked off kilter by the sometimes boomerang effects that having too much hope can smack you down with.  

Your thoughts remind me of several folks in my life, that I know would have that same personal inkling and attitude of potential worst case scenario.... I am often one of them, so no judgements whatsoever .. yet, my nature is also to be a glutton for punishment, I suppose, because I try and try.... haha...

You are masterful at getting my wheels to turn and  affording me the killer opportunity of seeing things from your life's experience/perspective.

I can't tell you how much that means to me...
Glad you are here.... can't say it enough.

🌹 💙
xo

I am here as long an you want me here, my dear. I hope that is for years to come.


hugs/love
buddhakitty.

Awww, thanks!
Haiku and Senryú are some of my favorite forms of poetry, too! I try to write a few a month. I find them way more challenging because I hope that I can make them impactful, which is often hard for me to do with 17 syllables!... ☺  

Glad you enjoyed! I very much appreciate you stopping by.  

Much love and warm wishes,
🌹💙

So lovely and peaceful!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!
Thanks so much, Jennifer
I appreciate you-
🌹B