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Violent Lovely Passion
I took you as a lover
And we were good at it
The lust, the love, the gateway
To every fantasy I ever had
Conquering fear
Going beyond
Swimming in waters that others
Could only dream about
Violent lovely passion
Where only the edge makes sense…
And we were good at it
The lust, the love, the gateway
To every fantasy I ever had
Conquering fear
Going beyond
Swimming in waters that others
Could only dream about
Violent lovely passion
Where only the edge makes sense…
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Violent Lovely Passion
2nd Oct 2022 10:04am
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Re. Violent Lovely Passion
2nd Oct 2022 3:27pm
Dear PS,
This is an amazing write because it made me think of past relationships that had no fear. Only futures with endless opportunities. I love the closing line. True cliff hanger. Really enjoyed this write. H🌷
This is an amazing write because it made me think of past relationships that had no fear. Only futures with endless opportunities. I love the closing line. True cliff hanger. Really enjoyed this write. H🌷
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2nd Oct 2022 3:38pm
Dear H,
This was a remarkable relationship. We both had intense needs and executed those desires. It was truly the kind of relationship that has lasted in memory for years. It spurred many of the poems I write here that have an edgier theme.
You comments and RL are a thrill
Thx so much
X
🤠
This was a remarkable relationship. We both had intense needs and executed those desires. It was truly the kind of relationship that has lasted in memory for years. It spurred many of the poems I write here that have an edgier theme.
You comments and RL are a thrill
Thx so much
X
🤠
Re. Violent Lovely Passion
2nd Oct 2022 4:01pm
Excellent word pairing: violent and lovely. I like the Georgia O'Keefe touch in the art
Great write.
Great write.
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2nd Oct 2022 4:10pm
I was trying to find find a painting to match this poem when I came upon my mixed media electronic digital futuristic vagina …
But I’ll take the Georgia O’Keefe reference for sure !!
You always see the poems I want you to see !
BIG THANKS
But I’ll take the Georgia O’Keefe reference for sure !!
You always see the poems I want you to see !
BIG THANKS
Re. Violent Lovely Passion
2nd Oct 2022 6:54pm
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2nd Oct 2022 7:29pm
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2nd Oct 2022 8:56pm
Many thanks on the futuristic vagina art and write.
A lot of when on and it defined me and taught me …
Appreciate your comment !
A lot of when on and it defined me and taught me …
Appreciate your comment !
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Re: Re. Violent Lovely Passion
3rd Oct 2022 4:40pm
That edge means different things to different people but many can agree that it's a wondrous place.
This was quite a time in my life ...
Thx Ted !
This was quite a time in my life ...
Thx Ted !
Re. Violent Lovely Passion
3rd Oct 2022 9:46pm
Poetspeak is a Beast!
I can absolutely feel the sharp cut of passion from this 'Edgy' masterpiece.
Poet your electronic futuristic digital vaginal art is the perfect "Portal" to revisit and reminisce love, lust and seduction.
Your masterstroke of ink and art is transcending Sir Poet!
COLOSSAL Like!!!
I can absolutely feel the sharp cut of passion from this 'Edgy' masterpiece.
Poet your electronic futuristic digital vaginal art is the perfect "Portal" to revisit and reminisce love, lust and seduction.
Your masterstroke of ink and art is transcending Sir Poet!
COLOSSAL Like!!!
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Re. Violent Lovely Passion
4th Oct 2022 1:30am
FEET !!!
YOU'RE BACK
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN SON ??
So good to see you
Hope things are well
Appreciate Tyr COLLASSAL LIKE, never had one of those before
Word up
Hope you're back for awhile
THANKS
YOU'RE BACK
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN SON ??
So good to see you
Hope things are well
Appreciate Tyr COLLASSAL LIKE, never had one of those before
Word up
Hope you're back for awhile
THANKS
Re. Violent Lovely Passion
4th Oct 2022 7:16pm
Violent lovely passion, oh yes! I definitely get that.
That turbulent thrill whipping through your soul.
A gateway that leads to the outer edges, and beyond
The deepest and darkest fantasies are found there
No fear and all inhibitions are left at the gate
Swimming in the deep, coldest waters against the tide
This will always make the most sense to me...
That turbulent thrill whipping through your soul.
A gateway that leads to the outer edges, and beyond
The deepest and darkest fantasies are found there
No fear and all inhibitions are left at the gate
Swimming in the deep, coldest waters against the tide
This will always make the most sense to me...
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Re. Violent Lovely Passion
4th Oct 2022 7:23pm
Swimming in the deep, coldest waters against the tide ..
I love that line and that's definitely me. Then the reward, that twisted free fall moment when everything spins out of control.
You get it, I get it
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I love that line and that's definitely me. Then the reward, that twisted free fall moment when everything spins out of control.
You get it, I get it
Intrinsic comment
BIG LIKE THANKS
Re. Violent Lovely Passion
6th Oct 2022 2:18am
Its a wild ride. I have 1 gozillion tickets for said ride! Im all in! <3
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6th Oct 2022 2:26am
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Re. Violent Lovely Passion
12th Oct 2022 6:02pm
"To every fantasy I ever had" if that doesn't do it, I don't know what would.
BIG LIKE Poet.
BIG LIKE Poet.
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12th Oct 2022 6:48pm
Wow, we did everything and some things she taught me that I hadn't thought of yet.
Years of memories
Thx Wally
Years of memories
Thx Wally