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Pioneering Response
(ˇ)
unyielding harmonies
sparse
indecorous
ornaments
rise of dreamt conquest
merging intersections,
.... shapes
folds... .
her tapestry of minutiae
overflowing an instant
rages hard
turbulent waters
swelling arcs
entangling
seducement
in profound pierces
thin, is the veil
of absent or never was
(ˇˇ)
intense rapturous
punctuations
exclaim!
reclaim...revive
flesh and bone
pressing
palpitating
life and loving... into response
into meaning
responding
becomes will
and sweaty communion
(ˇˇˇ)
monochromatic
bursts
phantasmagoric
colors convulse
release,
freedom flows
. .. of dewy 'morn
burning new discovery....
where wild urgencies
are sweetest tastes
torn
honed,
tightened
well worn
sowed of wicked want
wonderment
(ˇˇˇ-ˇ)
snared upon
torment and sensuality
we concave hearts
contract—
restrict
perfectly (r)tight
.... responding
responding....
{whispers}
responding.
/.
slow.
breaths.
.\
(ˇˇˇ-ˇˇ)
foreshadowing
the way
feeding oxygen
sucking...
gulping deep . . . to excite
O'vicious air
of
You
(ˇˇˇ-ˇˇˇ)
hints
permeate being
to blood
blowing through me-
my hair - my soul
dusting my tongue
flavored in delicate destiny
like a horde
of fallen angels
erupting in sacred
erotic hymns
savory sacrilege
dangles dare
tantalizing
temptation
rallying
hearts
into
a
convergence
with minds
in
ultimate.
discovery.
.
.
.
.
we, pioneers.
~~~
unyielding harmonies
sparse
indecorous
ornaments
rise of dreamt conquest
merging intersections,
.... shapes
folds... .
her tapestry of minutiae
overflowing an instant
rages hard
turbulent waters
swelling arcs
entangling
seducement
in profound pierces
thin, is the veil
of absent or never was
(ˇˇ)
intense rapturous
punctuations
exclaim!
reclaim...revive
flesh and bone
pressing
palpitating
life and loving... into response
into meaning
responding
becomes will
and sweaty communion
(ˇˇˇ)
monochromatic
bursts
phantasmagoric
colors convulse
release,
freedom flows
. .. of dewy 'morn
burning new discovery....
where wild urgencies
are sweetest tastes
torn
honed,
tightened
well worn
sowed of wicked want
wonderment
(ˇˇˇ-ˇ)
snared upon
torment and sensuality
we concave hearts
contract—
restrict
perfectly (r)
.... responding
responding....
{whispers}
responding.
/.
slow.
breaths.
.\
(ˇˇˇ-ˇˇ)
foreshadowing
the way
feeding oxygen
sucking...
gulping deep . . . to excite
O'vicious air
of
You
(ˇˇˇ-ˇˇˇ)
hints
permeate being
to blood
blowing through me-
my hair - my soul
dusting my tongue
flavored in delicate destiny
like a horde
of fallen angels
erupting in sacred
erotic hymns
savory sacrilege
dangles dare
tantalizing
temptation
rallying
hearts
into
a
convergence
with minds
in
ultimate.
discovery.
.
.
.
.
we, pioneers.
~~~
Author's Note
Inspired by the poem:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/459929-power-exchange-begins-within/
©Blu2022
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Re. Pioneering Response
Re: Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 9:04pm
I was listening and using my keenly attune intuition!!
;p
Glad you enjoyed reading, MS
Thank you for partaking in my responsiveness
🌹💙
B
;p
Glad you enjoyed reading, MS
Thank you for partaking in my responsiveness
🌹💙
B
Re: Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 9:09pm
Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 10:23pm
Hi B:)
Such attention to word choice. They were sprinkled perfectly.
I loved the part about the air and breathing. Pioneering into
anything is exciting. The slow breathing brings calmness - To savor the air in a way.
Collecting oneself to push through - absorb and focus. You might enjoy and you might not.
But you'll never know until you try it.
On a totally different note - I must address the pic. LOL
That tongue!! hahahah
I kept glancing at it when reading. If there was ever a seductive
tongue you just found it. It's so shiny and perfect. hahaha
Such attention to word choice. They were sprinkled perfectly.
I loved the part about the air and breathing. Pioneering into
anything is exciting. The slow breathing brings calmness - To savor the air in a way.
Collecting oneself to push through - absorb and focus. You might enjoy and you might not.
But you'll never know until you try it.
On a totally different note - I must address the pic. LOL
That tongue!! hahahah
I kept glancing at it when reading. If there was ever a seductive
tongue you just found it. It's so shiny and perfect. hahaha
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 11:28pm
☆.。.:*・°☆.。.:*・°☆.。.:*
Hey, A ;)
Your thoughts and impressions are so beautifully felt and received. I love that there are these tidbits you savored /ruminated upon while enjoying the whole. I'm so stoked that you found what it was that spoke to you, dear lady. It really does spark this internal ember of motivation and inspiration when I'm lucky enough to have feedback like yours. Thanks for taking the time you do and putting it all out here....
Omg, That pic!!... heh heh heh 😈
I couldn't resist! It looked like she was wearing this blindfold that reminded me of a tapestry and it was just felt too perfect.... deliciously alluring, provoking without being so in your face blatant!
I know... that tongue though!! 😝
I don't know it kind of gives me goosebumps... haha...
Thanks for finding it seductive I do too!!
(It was a lark!)
🌹 💙 - 👅
xo
-B
Hey, A ;)
Your thoughts and impressions are so beautifully felt and received. I love that there are these tidbits you savored /ruminated upon while enjoying the whole. I'm so stoked that you found what it was that spoke to you, dear lady. It really does spark this internal ember of motivation and inspiration when I'm lucky enough to have feedback like yours. Thanks for taking the time you do and putting it all out here....
Omg, That pic!!... heh heh heh 😈
I couldn't resist! It looked like she was wearing this blindfold that reminded me of a tapestry and it was just felt too perfect.... deliciously alluring, provoking without being so in your face blatant!
I know... that tongue though!! 😝
I don't know it kind of gives me goosebumps... haha...
Thanks for finding it seductive I do too!!
(It was a lark!)
🌹 💙 - 👅
xo
-B
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
11th Sep 2022 00:36am
Thank you for taking a little gander, Os.
I'm increasingly curious as to how you'll respond to my ink, so thank you for keeping me in that space... it's a sweet painful allure... trust me, it's the very the good kind. ;p
Much love,
🌹 💙
I'm increasingly curious as to how you'll respond to my ink, so thank you for keeping me in that space... it's a sweet painful allure... trust me, it's the very the good kind. ;p
Much love,
🌹 💙
Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 10:30pm
Hope you enjoyed orgasmic bliss. You make me want to do naughty things to you to give you orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 10:33pm
hahaha... Well, that's definitely a comment!! Be good you naughty charmer, you!!
Thanks for finding the bliss... heh heh...
You're a gem, Francisco
🌹 💙
Thanks for finding the bliss... heh heh...
You're a gem, Francisco
🌹 💙
Re: Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 10:40pm
If you let the sexy thong/panties drop then I will be very naughty to you, LOL. I want to give a wild ride to orgasmic bliss my smart beautiful strong sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 11:30pm
Re: Re. Pioneering Response
11th Sep 2022 2:59am
But our golden sexy hotness bring the naughty in me. You need to be given orgasmic over and over again. So please that wild animalistic side out. Be the beautiful strong smart sexy tigress.😘😘😘😘
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Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 10:38pm
Another smash piece, superb write absolutely awesome read. Go girl
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
10th Sep 2022 11:37pm
I can't think of any smile I like better than the one that I have on my face whenever you tell me I have written something that is superb or a smash!! It's a smile only you can conjure, my brave knight.
{Thank you for thinking so, btw}
I am so very glad you enjoyed the thought process of how hopeful hearts and minds come together to integrate into something sacred, willingly wanted and beautifully shared.
Much love and respect from across the pond ✨
🌹 💙-⚔️
{Thank you for thinking so, btw}
I am so very glad you enjoyed the thought process of how hopeful hearts and minds come together to integrate into something sacred, willingly wanted and beautifully shared.
Much love and respect from across the pond ✨
🌹 💙-⚔️
Re. Pioneering Response
The slide of your tongued words
licks my libido
With the reverence of lust
for the extra virgin olive oil
of your womanly wok
that steams me into tempeh heaven
with the emboldened heat
of a consort before her king
who knows her wiles like his decrees
for her naked kneeling
when democracy is a myth
before his throne
made of ivory tougher than teak
his signet hand leaves its signature
on her barren derriere
painted pink with his royal flush
Your poem is a decadent delight for my nether package.
Love you my darling,
John
licks my libido
With the reverence of lust
for the extra virgin olive oil
of your womanly wok
that steams me into tempeh heaven
with the emboldened heat
of a consort before her king
who knows her wiles like his decrees
for her naked kneeling
when democracy is a myth
before his throne
made of ivory tougher than teak
his signet hand leaves its signature
on her barren derriere
painted pink with his royal flush
Your poem is a decadent delight for my nether package.
Love you my darling,
John
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
11th Sep 2022 3:54am
Your decadent poetic splendor
adorns my soul in an awakening
such a plethora of potent outpouring
leaves me blushing
the beautiful crimson red
that fascinates with it's perfect accentuating
on delicate cheeks of all kinds, my dear.
*wink
I'm thrilled and so excited that you found enticements among my written charms.
Returned love and more...
🌹 💙
-Susan
adorns my soul in an awakening
such a plethora of potent outpouring
leaves me blushing
the beautiful crimson red
that fascinates with it's perfect accentuating
on delicate cheeks of all kinds, my dear.
*wink
I'm thrilled and so excited that you found enticements among my written charms.
Returned love and more...
🌹 💙
-Susan
Re. Pioneering Response
11th Sep 2022 4:13am
a real pleasure to join you in your taste for language...your tongue here exhibiting its awesome power
Lawrence
Lawrence
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
11th Sep 2022 8:02pm
Thanks for feeling the heat and devotional energies to acquiesce power
Lovely to see you, Lawrence 🦋
🌹 💙
Lovely to see you, Lawrence 🦋
🌹 💙
Re. Pioneering Response
11th Sep 2022 2:51pm
Hoi hoi
Ray Charles & Steve Marriott (Humble Pie) sang: I don’t need no doctor!
And right they were.
(I don’t need no harem too).
All I need is a regular dose of beauty like this, to light up my whole week.
Thankyou so much!
Kind regards, Gus
Ray Charles & Steve Marriott (Humble Pie) sang: I don’t need no doctor!
And right they were.
(I don’t need no harem too).
All I need is a regular dose of beauty like this, to light up my whole week.
Thankyou so much!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
12th Sep 2022 2:09am
Hoi hoi
I love your clever use of Humble Pie to segway into your approval of my little poem, Gus that was awesome... thank you - 🙏
It makes me smile with the warmth and joy to know you found such beautiful here. I can't thank you enough for being here with me and taking the time you do.... It means so much to me, dear friend.
Have a wonderful week ahead....
Much love and well wishes sent your way ✨
🌹 💙
I love your clever use of Humble Pie to segway into your approval of my little poem, Gus that was awesome... thank you - 🙏
It makes me smile with the warmth and joy to know you found such beautiful here. I can't thank you enough for being here with me and taking the time you do.... It means so much to me, dear friend.
Have a wonderful week ahead....
Much love and well wishes sent your way ✨
🌹 💙
Re. Pioneering Response
Anonymous
11th Sep 2022 9:08pm
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
12th Sep 2022 1:56am
Hey there, Philis ;)
You really made me smile with your amazing upbeat and super exciting energy, dear lady!
Thanks for that, it was much needed.
I love that you enjoyed yourself reading like you did. I too, Hope there will be more in store!!
It's a pleasure to have you visit 🦋
Please don't be a stranger...
Much love and appreciation,
🌹 💙
B
You really made me smile with your amazing upbeat and super exciting energy, dear lady!
Thanks for that, it was much needed.
I love that you enjoyed yourself reading like you did. I too, Hope there will be more in store!!
It's a pleasure to have you visit 🦋
Please don't be a stranger...
Much love and appreciation,
🌹 💙
B
Re. Pioneering Response
12th Sep 2022 1:24am
WOW! ...that is just Rock and Roll...it pushes and pulls, wants and needs, gives and takes...Boom ♥
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
Yesss!
I love a good 'WOW', Hashman... thank you!!
I'm glad you got the best of it and felt that convergence of need and want along with the integration of hearts and minds. It's finding that harmony which allows for such a pleasurable explosion 💥
Thank you so much for stopping by and taking the time to leave your thoughts with me, H
Its lovely to see you 🦋
🌹 💙
B
I love a good 'WOW', Hashman... thank you!!
I'm glad you got the best of it and felt that convergence of need and want along with the integration of hearts and minds. It's finding that harmony which allows for such a pleasurable explosion 💥
Thank you so much for stopping by and taking the time to leave your thoughts with me, H
Its lovely to see you 🦋
🌹 💙
B
Re. Pioneering Response
12th Sep 2022 11:13pm
Re: Re. Pioneering Response
13th Sep 2022 1:15am
Re: Re. Pioneering Response
13th Sep 2022 2:00pm
You have the ability here to question and follow through the process of gaining the answer.
It's the method.
"Education" means to bring out that which is within.
You show that process. That IS the answer.
It's the method.
"Education" means to bring out that which is within.
You show that process. That IS the answer.
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
14th Sep 2022 9:05pm
I think I've (maybe) figured out in my head how to potentially find the answer... not that I've acquired it as of yet... To me, the process is the road to the answer.... traveling that stretch, becoming educated and ultimately finding that it all soaks in, so that I have the ability to comprehend and fully appreciate that journey my "thought process road" had me travel... .
Ultimately that means understanding my responses to him and his to me...
.....
are my thoughts.
🌹
Ultimately that means understanding my responses to him and his to me...
.....
are my thoughts.
🌹
Re: Re. Pioneering Response
14th Sep 2022 10:20pm
The universe is a diamond and we are all facets of that diamond. We have our unique perspectives. Our education is our learning to communicate that unique perspective. We are the blindspot for the rest of the world, just as the universe is the vision of us that we are blind to...and these are my thoughts.
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
14th Sep 2022 10:23pm
and don't your thoughts shine just as brilliant... 💎
Thanks for the ear, turtle.
x
Thanks for the ear, turtle.
x
Re. Pioneering Response
17th Sep 2022 5:00am
If you're ever stopping by Os, please know that your presence will be greatly missed and was undoubtedly cherished while you were here with us. I hope you do consider returning to DUP eventually.
My disappointment is vast and of course, I am deeply saddened to not have you here but understand we all have our different reasonings as to what we works best for us in any given moment.
I'll keep an open....
Much love and many thank you's for sharing your voice and poetry while you did.
🌹💙
-B
My disappointment is vast and of course, I am deeply saddened to not have you here but understand we all have our different reasonings as to what we works best for us in any given moment.
I'll keep an open....
Much love and many thank you's for sharing your voice and poetry while you did.
🌹💙
-B
Re. Pioneering Response
20th Sep 2022 6:56am
Re: Re. Pioneering Response
25th Sep 2022 6:50am
Wow, thanks so much, SS!
That's truly an awesome compliment; I'm glad you enjoyed taking a dive into my quest to become more intuitive and better evolved... personally and physically.
Lovely seeing you!
🌹 💙
That's truly an awesome compliment; I'm glad you enjoyed taking a dive into my quest to become more intuitive and better evolved... personally and physically.
Lovely seeing you!
🌹 💙
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29th Sep 2022 6:06am
Re. Pioneering Response
23rd Sep 2022 6:12pm
"like a horde
of fallen angels
erupting in sacred
erotic hymns"
Amazing Blue. Each line felt like a breathless expression, gasping with poetic inspiration and rhythmic lust.
Bravo.
Now I gotta pick up all these skittles from off the floor again.
of fallen angels
erupting in sacred
erotic hymns"
Amazing Blue. Each line felt like a breathless expression, gasping with poetic inspiration and rhythmic lust.
Bravo.
Now I gotta pick up all these skittles from off the floor again.
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
25th Sep 2022 8:00am
Hey there, Walter!
I hope you find all those skittles, my friend... lol... (that always makes me giggle!!! ;p)
I am thrilled you found some breathless rhythmic lust within this piece that was a bit of a soul search and ode to hearts and souls aligning..
It's always a pleasure, my friend!
Much love and many thanks,
🌹 💙
B
I hope you find all those skittles, my friend... lol... (that always makes me giggle!!! ;p)
I am thrilled you found some breathless rhythmic lust within this piece that was a bit of a soul search and ode to hearts and souls aligning..
It's always a pleasure, my friend!
Much love and many thanks,
🌹 💙
B
Re. Pioneering Response
8th Oct 2022 10:15am
Delirious, imaginative, intense! I loved every line. The whole poem has a rhythm that makes one feel excitement and wonder. Well done!
Mundus
Mundus
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
8th Oct 2022 11:35am
Your very and considerate comments were a lovely addition to my morning. I'm thrilled you found some excitement and wonder here, Mundus
Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me and for the generous RL add.
I'm appreciative and happy to have you with us.
Much love,
🌹 💙
B
Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me and for the generous RL add.
I'm appreciative and happy to have you with us.
Much love,
🌹 💙
B
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9th Oct 2022 9:51am
Re. Pioneering Response
6th Nov 2022 3:01pm
Re: Re. Pioneering Response
6th Nov 2022 3:06pm
You don't know how much that pleases me! This piece was a labor of love, pain and revelation... taking me through some true self introspection, probably even still.
I'm glad you enjoyed enough to let it marinade a bit, what a beautiful compliment, KP
Thank you 🙏🏻
-💙
I'm glad you enjoyed enough to let it marinade a bit, what a beautiful compliment, KP
Thank you 🙏🏻
-💙
Re. Pioneering Response
17th Dec 2022 8:49pm
We are forever in search of ever greater pleasures. We are only limited by what we are to afraid to admit to ourselves.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Pioneering Response
17th Dec 2022 9:50pm
Sometimes being that candid and honest with ourselves is the biggest hurdle to jump!
You rock, bk
Thank you.
xoxo
You rock, bk
Thank you.
xoxo