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the shed
Nature taking over space
where someone once worked building something
maybe children played inside
creating a world of their own
a small ship
that could take you anywhere
it's windows, wings
now draped softly with ivy and moss
it has a new story to tell
carrying the weight of Nature
on its tilted back
it's only weakness
time
where someone once worked building something
maybe children played inside
creating a world of their own
a small ship
that could take you anywhere
it's windows, wings
now draped softly with ivy and moss
it has a new story to tell
carrying the weight of Nature
on its tilted back
it's only weakness
time
Published 31st Aug 2022
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31st Aug 2022 10:43am
2nd Sep 2022 10:56am
Thank you so much buddhakitty for your wonderful comments .. greatly appreciated, as is the taking for your RL
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JeJe
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JeJe
31st Aug 2022 10:43am
Dear J,
I love stories from buildings that just sit quietly holding their memories until someone comes along and pries open the tales. I really enjoyed this piece for its wistful nostalgia and sweet gentleness. Lovely write. H🌷
I love stories from buildings that just sit quietly holding their memories until someone comes along and pries open the tales. I really enjoyed this piece for its wistful nostalgia and sweet gentleness. Lovely write. H🌷
2nd Sep 2022 10:59am
Thank you so much Honoria for your lovely comments, very much appreciated.
I love these old structures, the stories they could tell. Sometimes, I can feel pieces of them.
Honored by the taking for your RL
🦋
JeJe
I love these old structures, the stories they could tell. Sometimes, I can feel pieces of them.
Honored by the taking for your RL
🦋
JeJe
31st Aug 2022 2:07pm
Maybe the shed's history will be absorbed into Nature's memory - every built thing comes from Mother Nature, and returns to Her. Nice write.
2nd Sep 2022 11:04am
Thank you so much Josh, for your nice comments. Yes, I love to think that all the good it holds returns.. everything we touch carries energy that gets absorbed in some form.
31st Aug 2022 6:26pm
I often look at things in this light as well Jeje, beautifully rendered. 💖
2nd Sep 2022 11:05am
10th Sep 2022 3:04pm
I love the concept and how many memories this shed holds. May the moss be torn away one day.
15th Sep 2022 11:16am
