Delectable Sounds of Silence (+Spoken Word)

The first time, that moment of anticipation
Fantastic write gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx

Absolutely... along with a zillion other varying emotions! It's the potential and possibility that have me waxing romance and passion!

Just added a quick first draft audio... hopefully it'll do.

Thank you, my lovely knight
I adore seeing you 🦋
🌹 💙
xo

You live for the moment and you have a great ride of orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

That and many other possibilities, too dear Francisco!

Hope you enjoy the audio just added, too ;)

I appreciate you... and your charms ;)  
🌹

I'm your sexy charmer and I want to charm the panties/thong off you 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘    you are always my strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

hahaha... You wouldn't be you without that panty line......Those stay on but I'll definitely bask in your nonstop abundance of charm.

Thank you for the encouragement.
You bad boy!  ;p

Hey there, S

I like bliss... that's a bit dreamy... Mmmm!

It's the possibility of all that you covered that leaves me riddled with ache.... that very very good kind!! 😈

To feel the answer so clearly... connected... knowing.... when skin touches skin... lips to lips...

only each other... only acceptance ... only love


Thank you for being here with me.  
What a pleasure, to share this with you.
s/s
🌹 💙
x

The read made this even more brilliant it's a fantastic piece made better by your brilliant reading
Love and light
Ron x

You're far too kind.... bumbling... maybe... lol.

Thanks for the confidence... I'm relieved it's ok for one take... which isn't my usual... by far!

Hugs and kisses 💋
xo

a most seductive reading of most seductive visualization....done seductively...loved every line....L >3

I think you're saying it was possibly seductive? 🙆🏻‍♀️
.. Hee hee...

Thank you, my dear L.

I'm elated you enjoyed the audio and hopefully the  poem worked a little magic, too...

Much love,
🌹 💙
B

oh it did work its magic...you have a real knack at that...wonderful!!

Thank you, my dear
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As the ambiance of your reading kept me rapt I felt the magic of love in its nascence.  When inquiries ebb the mystery of romance finds its waxing into dreams of a future. I adored hearing you read this. Your voice complemented your words to the perfection of a grace that enveloped me. Your poetry is one of the wonders of the literary world.

Xo
John

My Dear,  
It's within our dreams that all is possible. Where we can will into being with one thought, whatever it might be that strikes our fancy in any given flash microsecond. To be King or Queen of that secret dreamscape is a wish come true. I think that a part of me visits that little place of wonder, when I write and especially when I record. I aspire to feel/capture that wonder and the hope is, to take along those willing and wanting, too.... ✨ 💫 ✨  
 
I am so incredibly lucky and flattered that you enjoy my spoken word style. I worked hard to improve it over the years and feel so thrilled that you were enveloped within this reading.  This one was stripped back and hopefully more casually connected.  
 
I can't thank you enough for all your feedback and the deep care and consideration you lavish.  
I'm awed and full of gratitude.  
 
Much love,  
🌹 💙  
-Susan

The lines that got me most:
“You traced my lips
With a fingertip”

Such a loving gesture. Perfection.

Love this poem in all of it’s comfortable yet anticipatory spaces.

Hey there, lovely lady ✨  
It's a pleasure to get some truly wonderful insight and perspective from other keen minds into what works within a particular poem and what might need tweaking.  Even more so (and especially) when it comes from a strong women's point of view.... like yours! Needless to say, I adore seeing you and love that you had a line which resonated and that you could feel that anticipation commingling with a slow progression of ease. Takeaways, that are a true motivation and potent fuel to help feed my inspirational aspirations going forward.... thank you!!  
 
You're a much welcomed visit, and I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts, it's hugely meaningful to me to support and be supportive. I thrive on lifting each other up as often as I can, here on DUP ... and I just sparkle when I feel like I am, in return!!  
 
You've made huge smiles, here! 😁  
Much thanks for that, Mary  
 
I look forward to seeing you again; you're always so very welcome🦋  
Warmest regards,  
🌹 💙  
B

Hoi hoi
I’m with Her (sounds a bit wrong, doesn’t it?) where her remarks are made about the tracing of your lips… For me, the soft exhale of breath does it.

What a wonderful poem you’ve given us. From what beautiful well in you is all this bliss coming?
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi
Thanks for listening and reading, Gus
I appreciate the thoughtful feedback and kind words... it's often up in the air how work might be received...

As far as where it comes from, It's not up to me, it flows forth whenever it does.... lol.

I too, like the little hitches in my breaths... it was only one recording attempt (which is extremely unusual for me) and I thought about taking it out, then listened to it again... it felt natural, so I left it as is....

Your visits are so uplifting, not to mention truly lovely. .. I appreciate you showing me some DUP lovin's!!  👍🏻

Warmest regards,
🌹 💙
B

Hoi hoi
This is the normal/warm Dutch greeting. It’s kept for someone you like. Or like a lot.

If you think it’s nosey (Apple Mafia controller doesn’t approve nosey….)
Please don’t pay attention.
So, I hope it’s Ok if I tell you what I think about this ‘one recording’ type of thing.

When I was 11, I was invited to get to work by a prominent Dutch Painter.
He absolutely believed that the first brushstroke is always tapping the child like purity in us. As far as I know, he never tried to alter/better his first stroke.
‘Don’t even attempt to do it, you’ll smudge it’, was what he had to say about it and he was right.

I put this advice to use.
All I write is in a stream of consciousness or automatic writing as it is called here.
All my music is done the same. Completely improvised fusion of lyrics and melody. And each track is done in a one take only way.

Maybe I can lure you into trying that more often and chances are that you will find that very rewarding.

Plus nobody loves a robot. It’s the tiny irregular things that change a sentence into emotion.

And I love your work all the more because of it.
If you think it’s too personal and you want me to erase this, I will.
Kind regards, Gus

I loved this... it absolutely stays, Gus
Thank you so very much!
🌹 💙
xo

That fear with need is inked so well in this. Wonderful, friend 😁

Hey there, DC
It's anticipation, want, need... the newness of it all ... an amalgamation of heady passions, really ... mixed with the romance of dreams
Was my hope.... casual but eruptive underneath...

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feeling my vibe, my friend

Means a lot that you stopped in
🌹-B

This is beautiful and erotic without being direct. You're a wonderful writer.  

Awww... You're a gem, LV
Thank you for taking a moment to be here, (I deeply enjoy seeing you 🦋) and for leaving me with such a warm and gracious compliment. 🙏  

The hope was to try to capture enough hinted desire that the erotica would naturally play out in the reader's imaginations... I am glad it kind of worked that way.... at least for you!! Yay ;)  

It's always a pleasure ✨  
Much love and many well wishes your way,  
🌹 💙  
B  

this has and honest warmth to it.
regards
James

High praise, dear friend
Thank you...very much.  
 I had hoped to try to convey that very type of essence/feel... you know, nothing fancy, no video or music... just casual, raw, and open. Like I was talking or reading aloud directly to the reader, one on one.... I did my recording in one take, which isn't usual for me (by far) and left it, despite some little hiccups.... but it's truer, I feel... small nuanced mistakes, only I hear, probably!!. lol..  

Wonderful to know the genuine warm intent came through!

I appreciate the visit, James
Yours are thoughts I very much value.
Much love, my friend
🌹 💙
Susan

Thank you for sharing a read. One always wonders, not about the poem, but the poet hidden just beneath. Now I know your voice and your pacing of this piece. The pleasure was all mine. 🌼

Hi there, J ;)
Thank you for sharing in my poem and yes, the little peek of myself that I hope to try to weave into the spoken word performance... Some attempts work better than others, it's all a learning curve!

I loved that you found some pleasure, that makes me genuinely smile.
🌹 💙
B


(btw, there're are many readings amongst my poems, if you're curious... link below)

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/sort/poems-by/Bluevelvete/spoken-word/

I'll be sure to look. Perhaps on a lazy Sunday afternoon 🌼😉

No rush no worries... just put it out there for you.
-but that does sound like the perfect time, methinks

Enjoy!

Dear BV,

I love those moments of profound silence. Just simple acts of touch that set the mind at ease and the soul ablaze. What I found very cool in this piece is reading it from top to bottom as we’re taught I had to scroll up to find something I wanted to read again the poem read just as beautifully from bottom to top! Now, to find that other soul who can match and appreciate without speaking. I think words can so often get in the way. Love this piece. H🌷

Hey there, H
Yeah, those unspoken spaces are where you can sometimes find real truth and understanding.

How cool, about the backwards forwards... I didn't even notice!

hahaha... yes finding that elusive 'White Buffalo'!!

Words are deeply powerful and when new and not quite on solid footing, the silence can be a relief and allow for better physical discoveries! *wink

Thank you for your always impressively keen and unique insight. I know I'm probably spoiled but I don't feel fully accomplished with a successful piece until you've taken a gander and left your thoughts.

Much love, dear lady
🌹 💙
B

Thanks, Tim
Those are very considerate comments.
I'm glad you found something to enjoy and I appreciate you taking the time to leave those thoughts with me.
🌹-B

thank you for stopping by to take a looksee
Glad you found something you enjoyed

🌹💙
B

"giving in or maybe giving away  
secrets and untold dreams  
filling the space" the way your worded this is stunning, not so much for it's intricacy but for it's honesty, pulling us in and seeing how vulnerable it could be.

Beautiful work.

Thanks for being along with me for this one, Walter.

It's a personal favorite of mine and has a special place in my heart. I was hoping it would be received well, since I'm so attached to it. I hadn't mentioned anything like that until now, as to not jinx anything or have to give away my secrets but because you're usually my final visit (the headliner!! hahaha!) I thought it would be an OK admission. I am glad and extremely heartened for the lovely sentiments you shared. Vulnerability isn't easy to convey or to show, period. It's like music to my ears that that is what you felt....
Thank you so much!

It's always a terrific pleasure ✨
🌹 💙
B

Dear Bluevelvet,

     This piece was relaxing to me, as thy voice upon the speech. It got me ah caught up deep within the strength of this penned ah strong. The closeness of the two within the write and the tease. This is the pleasure of the hurt for each and the pain they both ah please. Humility within each other's arms being each's ah strength. Lost within each's translation how I aluv ah this. And, the lust and it's curiosity said to the other. Gave the will of the two to encourage both of the luvas. And, they healed each other's hurt for the other the most. Brilliantly ah penned! 🌽🥬🥦🍜🍄🧅🥥👍👁️🌈🤍🍺🍹🥂🥃🤜🤛🤎🍑👅💋

Ohhh my lovely friend, Birchel.
I am delighted you took advantage of listening. Thanks for that, it makes me sincerely happy that you did and that you found some special moments while listening. Pleasure, strength, lust curiosity and ultimately a way to aid in healing one another...Wow!! That's the joy of sharing our works with one another.. discovery!!

Thanks for finding all those beautiful emotions.
It was meaningful, my friend.

Take good care of yourself 💙

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U are welcome Velvety and thank u too.👄🍑💋👅🌷💎🎶🛳️🍺🥂🍹🍻👁️🌈🥃🤎🤍🤜🤛🥥🍜

your voice is both soothing and sexy, expressiveness renderd in sensual blue shades of love and want. Your writing and narration are both beautiful and delicate with notes of steely inner strength peeking though. What an absolute delicacy you are.

I am enraptured.

There's no better feeling, no other joy nor any other type of accolade needed... when someone's heartfelt beatific truth beats passionately and wise of their heart's chosen desire...

I am in awe of you and wrap you up within all my sincerest warmth and appreciation.

We need more honest, giving and worthy souls like you, amongst us.

Thank you, D
for everything.
🌹 💙
B

I do listen to the voice here.
When I am traveling, especially. I admit to being very much taken with it.

Beautiful.

Well, welcome back then... and I am glad you enjoy what you hear.

Thank you for stopping by to say so.
🌹 💙
B

Your words (written and melodious vocal) do justice to the anticipation, tenderness, discovery, curiosity, uncharted, nervousness, insecurity, need, fright, compatibility and acknowledged unspoken permission as two lovers explore and prepare to take the gamble of the next step,

I love that you extrapolated every last ounce of emotional description.... Mmmm, how utterly decadent.... and true. It's the slow steadiness of need that drives that exquisite exploration.

You've a keen eye, my dear poet
Love seeing you 🦋.... and reading your thoughts.
🌹 💙 💙
x