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Luna
Baptized by midnight moonshine
Shedding skin with distant howls
Echoes casting majestic spells
Imprinting her stamp into the ether
Ripples traveling through forest
Caressing grey lightening clouds
Same color as her amplified fur
In tune with murky elements
Anticipating her hunt
That’s been heaven sent
Thousands of years and broken love cycles
From natures vault of immortal curses
The same smell
The same aura
The same taste
Traveling in silver laced air
Beaming like a pulsing beacon
Feeling him close and unaware
His growling soul will remember
To bend the knee
To invite
And let her bite
Shedding skin with distant howls
Echoes casting majestic spells
Imprinting her stamp into the ether
Ripples traveling through forest
Caressing grey lightening clouds
Same color as her amplified fur
In tune with murky elements
Anticipating her hunt
That’s been heaven sent
Thousands of years and broken love cycles
From natures vault of immortal curses
The same smell
The same aura
The same taste
Traveling in silver laced air
Beaming like a pulsing beacon
Feeling him close and unaware
His growling soul will remember
To bend the knee
To invite
And let her bite
Author's Note
I love Game of Thrones
And John Snow with his wolf!!
And the catch phrase of "bend the knee" which he totally did!!!!
Made me love him even more!!!
Just started House of Dragons!!!
Listening to
Puddle of Mudd - Moonshine
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YZ7ANPZFNXU
Puddle of Mudd - Thinking about You
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0COzNewSkE
And John Snow with his wolf!!
And the catch phrase of "bend the knee" which he totally did!!!!
Made me love him even more!!!
Just started House of Dragons!!!
Listening to
Puddle of Mudd - Moonshine
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YZ7ANPZFNXU
Puddle of Mudd - Thinking about You
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0COzNewSkE
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Re: Re. Luna
27th Aug 2022 00:48am
It's sooo good Relic.
If you like that genre it can be addicting. It can be harsh though.
Lots of death and gore - but balances out with great creativity and
hot sex scenes. LOL
Thanks for your snaps on my wolf poem.
Kinda struggled with it for a bit.
If you like that genre it can be addicting. It can be harsh though.
Lots of death and gore - but balances out with great creativity and
hot sex scenes. LOL
Thanks for your snaps on my wolf poem.
Kinda struggled with it for a bit.
Re. Luna
27th Aug 2022 00:45am
We love this piece of darkness, ot comes with a hunger. The sound and smells of the night intensifies you hunger and the hunter becomes a need. Tight work Lady
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Re: Re. Luna
27th Aug 2022 00:53am
I wanted it to come across like she was ancient and looking
for her mate in modern time. Night does amplify with a blind
awareness. Hope that makes sense. Glad you enjoyed this.
Big toothy smile right now!! hahaha
for her mate in modern time. Night does amplify with a blind
awareness. Hope that makes sense. Glad you enjoyed this.
Big toothy smile right now!! hahaha
Re. Luna
27th Aug 2022 1:28am
A fantastic read, a brilliant series it's HOUSE OF DRAGONS next
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Luna
27th Aug 2022 1:34am
Hi Ron!!
Thanks - talk about changing the course of writing in my opinion.
Think you're the hero - nope - your dead. LOL
Who's next?
John Motherfucking Snow - that's who!!! hahahaha
Thanks for your snaps on my poem buddy!!
Thanks - talk about changing the course of writing in my opinion.
Think you're the hero - nope - your dead. LOL
Who's next?
John Motherfucking Snow - that's who!!! hahahaha
Thanks for your snaps on my poem buddy!!
Re. Luna
27th Aug 2022 2:01am
Dear A,
You totally set the scene with this. The huntress is feral and cunning. With a haughty sex appeal. Heightened awareness and tingling senses…she knows what she’s after and won’t stop until she’s made her kill. I totally had GoT as I read this and then felt very smart when I read your author’s notes! 😃
Terrific write. H🌷
You totally set the scene with this. The huntress is feral and cunning. With a haughty sex appeal. Heightened awareness and tingling senses…she knows what she’s after and won’t stop until she’s made her kill. I totally had GoT as I read this and then felt very smart when I read your author’s notes! 😃
Terrific write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Luna
27th Aug 2022 2:07am
Hi H!!
Thank you!!! Thank you!!!
I've been wanting to do a wolf themed poem for a while.
Blending poems and scenes into a vision is my favorite kind
of writing. So happy you enjoyed!!!
Love me a piece of John Snow!!! hehehehe
Thank you!!! Thank you!!!
I've been wanting to do a wolf themed poem for a while.
Blending poems and scenes into a vision is my favorite kind
of writing. So happy you enjoyed!!!
Love me a piece of John Snow!!! hehehehe
Re. Luna
27th Aug 2022 5:08am
Dear, your cheekbones are too feline for you to be wolfien. Lol.
But, creative writing it is!
You had me howling at the moon!
Great details built this throughout. And yes, it has a flare of olden times to me.
As for GOT, I didn't care for the Dragon queen character much. I'm glad she died. Lol.
Her looks didn't fit the role at all. Actually, the character was miscast completely to me.
She looked, and carried herself, too fluffy. Almost cartoonish.
A dragon queen should be bad ass. The one who played the witch (that turned into an old woman at the lake bed) would have been a better match for the role.
Her character had more appeal to me, and should have had a bigger role.
Or even that redhead from the north, that your hunk Jon was with originally, would have been better than that eye candy chick they had as Dragon queen. Seriously.
But, creative writing it is!
You had me howling at the moon!
Great details built this throughout. And yes, it has a flare of olden times to me.
As for GOT, I didn't care for the Dragon queen character much. I'm glad she died. Lol.
Her looks didn't fit the role at all. Actually, the character was miscast completely to me.
She looked, and carried herself, too fluffy. Almost cartoonish.
A dragon queen should be bad ass. The one who played the witch (that turned into an old woman at the lake bed) would have been a better match for the role.
Her character had more appeal to me, and should have had a bigger role.
Or even that redhead from the north, that your hunk Jon was with originally, would have been better than that eye candy chick they had as Dragon queen. Seriously.
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Re: Re. Luna
28th Aug 2022 4:54am
Hey Mark:)
You and my cheekbones. Too funny.
What was it - yes - they were going to poke my eyes out. hahahah
I love all of that cursed love stuff. Love me a good wolf story.
All that kind of stuff. Was also a huge fan of The Originals on WB
also had werewolves in it.
But John Snow is the king!! And yes - I know he wasn't a werewolf.
But the allure was there for me:)
As for GOT, I get what you're saying. I think they did it on purpose.
Wanted to see her character grow through out the seasons.
Visually she was cartoonish. I think it was for shock value in a way.
So when she does end up losing her shit - it went against what you saw and how she carried herself in all of the other seasons.
She did look like a power puff girl. Too funny.
And you are happy she died? You have a very dark sinister
soul Styxian:( hahahaha
You wanted to see a more edgy and spicy female.
Looks like My John Snow got all of that instead:)))
Finally - some great casting for the females!!!
Look at us all Siskel & Eberting.
We need to have our own podcast!!
You and my cheekbones. Too funny.
What was it - yes - they were going to poke my eyes out. hahahah
I love all of that cursed love stuff. Love me a good wolf story.
All that kind of stuff. Was also a huge fan of The Originals on WB
also had werewolves in it.
But John Snow is the king!! And yes - I know he wasn't a werewolf.
But the allure was there for me:)
As for GOT, I get what you're saying. I think they did it on purpose.
Wanted to see her character grow through out the seasons.
Visually she was cartoonish. I think it was for shock value in a way.
So when she does end up losing her shit - it went against what you saw and how she carried herself in all of the other seasons.
She did look like a power puff girl. Too funny.
And you are happy she died? You have a very dark sinister
soul Styxian:( hahahaha
You wanted to see a more edgy and spicy female.
Looks like My John Snow got all of that instead:)))
Finally - some great casting for the females!!!
Look at us all Siskel & Eberting.
We need to have our own podcast!!
Re. Luna
28th Aug 2022 2:57pm
Although I must catch up on my GOT...
You wove this one in vivid, electric style..
A pleasure to absorb into the senses, A...
You wove this one in vivid, electric style..
A pleasure to absorb into the senses, A...
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Re: Re. Luna
29th Aug 2022 2:00am
Hey Cipher,
I was in a wolfie state of mind. LOL
Watching the first episode House of Dragons, I can't help but hope
they bring in some wolves. Dragons are awesome but
I'm hoping to see man's best friend descendants come into
the story line somehow. They are just so beautiful to me:)
I hope you do catch up to GOT. I just loved all the creativity
in it - and all the story plot twists.
So glad you enjoyed this little scene I wrote:)
Thanks for the RL and comment amigo
I was in a wolfie state of mind. LOL
Watching the first episode House of Dragons, I can't help but hope
they bring in some wolves. Dragons are awesome but
I'm hoping to see man's best friend descendants come into
the story line somehow. They are just so beautiful to me:)
I hope you do catch up to GOT. I just loved all the creativity
in it - and all the story plot twists.
So glad you enjoyed this little scene I wrote:)
Thanks for the RL and comment amigo
Re. Luna
29th Aug 2022 5:22am
I am an enormous GoT fan (I once went to a Comic convention and got to sit in on a panel headed up by Jack Gleeson the actor who played horrid King Joffrey... yeah, I'm a total nerd! 🤓) and animal lover so the Direwolves from GoT have always been some of my favorite scenes/chapters of the show. Ghost (Jon's direwolf) was a scene stealer with some of the most heart wrenching storylines!! Talk about beautiful and loyal,. he always chokes me up! That scene right before charging into The Battle Of Winterfell!... Ghost is lined up with everyone and fights like a damn warrior shoulder to shoulder!! I 😭 bawl... lol... such total softie when it comes to animals but people, meh some of them absolutely deserve what was coming and the dead 💯 needed to be extinguished... period! I think the wolves were/are really expensive to add into the filming budget, (one of the reasons they were so limited in GoT) so I doubt we'll see any on House of Dragons... sadly. Plus, I know the creation of the Dragons aren't cheap either but admittedly, they're pretty badass as well... and at least we get a lot of them!
Can't wait to compare notes on the new show once you catch up! Tonight's episode was pretty impressive! 🐲👀🐉
This poem was a truly wonderful 'ode' to your love of wolves and the inspiration from which you drew. I was terrifically captivated, A.
Great work ;)
🌹-🐺-⚔️
-B
Can't wait to compare notes on the new show once you catch up! Tonight's episode was pretty impressive! 🐲👀🐉
This poem was a truly wonderful 'ode' to your love of wolves and the inspiration from which you drew. I was terrifically captivated, A.
Great work ;)
🌹-🐺-⚔️
-B
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Re: Re. Luna
30th Aug 2022 1:30am
Hi B:)
Thank you so much. I've been wanting to do a wolf poem for a while.
Just felt that excitement build up when I watched the first episode of House of Dragons. Just watched episode 2. Loved how she ( forgot her name - dang) rolled up with her dragon and confronted her uncle. If you're going to kill me now is your chance -do it now!! Loved it!!! Favorite scene so far.
I'm going to miss my John Snow:(
Had a serious crush on that guy from the very beginning.
Can't wait to meet all the new cast members and characters as it goes along.
Thanks for the RL and commenting!!
Thank you so much. I've been wanting to do a wolf poem for a while.
Just felt that excitement build up when I watched the first episode of House of Dragons. Just watched episode 2. Loved how she ( forgot her name - dang) rolled up with her dragon and confronted her uncle. If you're going to kill me now is your chance -do it now!! Loved it!!! Favorite scene so far.
I'm going to miss my John Snow:(
Had a serious crush on that guy from the very beginning.
Can't wait to meet all the new cast members and characters as it goes along.
Thanks for the RL and commenting!!
Re. Luna
31st Aug 2022 7:15pm
Beautiful thank you for sharing with us. I am reading A Song of Ice and Fire now, the last published book, A Dance With Dragons, is quite different from the show. I am looking forward to the new series.
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Re: Re. Luna
1st Sep 2022 00:39am
Well hello Daniel:)
Thanks for your snaps on my poem. So happy you enjoyed!!
Love that show. Can't wait to see what they come up with on this
prequel. I'm hoping for the best. It's got a high bar - hope they can pull it off.
Later gator!!
Thanks for your snaps on my poem. So happy you enjoyed!!
Love that show. Can't wait to see what they come up with on this
prequel. I'm hoping for the best. It's got a high bar - hope they can pull it off.
Later gator!!
Re. Luna
1st Sep 2022 1:10am
I thought of the other moonshine first...
Yeah been baptized in that at midnight. lol
But this so screams werewolves...
Shedding skin transforming with distant howls.
The supernatural is my catnip. ;)
I can imagine stomping into the ether.
Cursed to roam the darkness, always searching.
Definitely can relate to that.
Your incredible imagery glows like the full moon.
It's so captivating and beautiful.
"Natures vault of immortal curses"
"Traveling in silver laced air"
Your mind is magical Chica! And so sexy.
Showing that even the cursed can find love.
Or at least some very wild doggy style.
You know he is dying for her bite...
And she is dying to bite him.
Passion unrestrained in the night...
Wondering "Oh my God" what did I do last night. lol
Love GoT, I have not started House of Dragons yet but so looking forward to it.
And wolves are so beautiful, just amazing majestic creatures. Like all animals. ;)
I was able to see some close up when I was in Europe. Really big ones...
Now I need to go listen to the songs... Love ya girl.
Yeah been baptized in that at midnight. lol
But this so screams werewolves...
Shedding skin transforming with distant howls.
The supernatural is my catnip. ;)
I can imagine stomping into the ether.
Cursed to roam the darkness, always searching.
Definitely can relate to that.
Your incredible imagery glows like the full moon.
It's so captivating and beautiful.
"Natures vault of immortal curses"
"Traveling in silver laced air"
Your mind is magical Chica! And so sexy.
Showing that even the cursed can find love.
Or at least some very wild doggy style.
You know he is dying for her bite...
And she is dying to bite him.
Passion unrestrained in the night...
Wondering "Oh my God" what did I do last night. lol
Love GoT, I have not started House of Dragons yet but so looking forward to it.
And wolves are so beautiful, just amazing majestic creatures. Like all animals. ;)
I was able to see some close up when I was in Europe. Really big ones...
Now I need to go listen to the songs... Love ya girl.
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Re: Re. Luna
1st Sep 2022 1:41am
Hey Kristina!!
Been wanting to do a wolf theme poem for a while
just hadn't put it to paper till the other day.
My mind and paper is the one place I can honestly
create what I see & share with people.
So happy you enjoyed my moonshine.
Love the adventure of searching like a wolf
for your mate. In wolf society the female pretty
much runs the show. I thought that was bad ass!!
Doggy style!!! hahahaha. You are crazy!!! LOL
Thanks for calling my mind sexy:)
Coming from you I take that as high praise!!!
Hope you enjoy the music.
One of my favorite bands back in the day.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
Been wanting to do a wolf theme poem for a while
just hadn't put it to paper till the other day.
My mind and paper is the one place I can honestly
create what I see & share with people.
So happy you enjoyed my moonshine.
Love the adventure of searching like a wolf
for your mate. In wolf society the female pretty
much runs the show. I thought that was bad ass!!
Doggy style!!! hahahaha. You are crazy!!! LOL
Thanks for calling my mind sexy:)
Coming from you I take that as high praise!!!
Hope you enjoy the music.
One of my favorite bands back in the day.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
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Re: Re. Luna
17th Oct 2022 1:42am
Hey Ted:)
Glad you enjoyed this.
Love werewolves. haha
As I'm sure you can tell.
Always try to open with something eye catching.
Keep the reader intrigued. LOL
Thanks commenting and the RL amigo:)
Glad you enjoyed this.
Love werewolves. haha
As I'm sure you can tell.
Always try to open with something eye catching.
Keep the reader intrigued. LOL
Thanks commenting and the RL amigo:)
Re. Luna
22nd Jul 2023 6:51pm
I am an old fart, not so much into werewolves, but I jusy loooooooove the world of witches. Close enough. PS: Your poem is nicely written. Regards, Robert.
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Re: Re. Luna
22nd Jul 2023 9:08pm
Hey, old farts have opinions too!! hahah
It's always a vampire thing on here. Thought I'd try something different.
thanks so much taking a read amigo:)
It's always a vampire thing on here. Thought I'd try something different.
thanks so much taking a read amigo:)