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i was thinking today how much i love you
it's not necessarily sexual
even though everything is sex
it's a massive gravitational pull
you fill me till my cup runneth over
even though everything is sex
it's a massive gravitational pull
you fill me till my cup runneth over
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Painting by Poetspeak
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24th Aug 2022 11:37pm
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
24th Aug 2022 11:44pm
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 00:39am
When you tell her you love her and mean it the sex will be hot as hell. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 2:47am
Keeping a fire extinguisher nearby in case of an inferno which I totally expect ....
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25th Aug 2022 00:58am
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 2:48am
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 1:01am
Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 2:50am
Kind of a combustion volcanic effect
Thrills me that you approve Brenda
Thx
❤
Thrills me that you approve Brenda
Thx
❤
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 1:15am
Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 2:51am
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 1:42am
Hi PS
The title sings amigo:)
Love the painting as well - especially the light blue at the very top and that spec of red
on the side. So interesting to me. Lots of movement and boldness.
The title sings amigo:)
Love the painting as well - especially the light blue at the very top and that spec of red
on the side. So interesting to me. Lots of movement and boldness.
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 2:53am
That spec of red really attracts the eye
Only an art lover would grab onto that key point
Love the comment Amiga
BIG THANKS A
Only an art lover would grab onto that key point
Love the comment Amiga
BIG THANKS A
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 2:03am
Aw, lovely sentiment. The art is like an intense running-over tidal wave... gravitational indeed. Love that red accent, of course.
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 2:55am
Of course on the red ...RED
Glad you like
Words wrote themselves
Love when that happens
Thx ❤
Glad you like
Words wrote themselves
Love when that happens
Thx ❤
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 6:40am
Dear PS,
I love the focus of appreciation in this poem not only for the sex part but for all the other things surrounding it. That, for me, intensifies the beauty of everything given and earned in life. The painting is beautiful also. Is that watercolor? I can’t tell on my device. The colors are so vivid. Fantastic piece (poem and painting) H🌷
I love the focus of appreciation in this poem not only for the sex part but for all the other things surrounding it. That, for me, intensifies the beauty of everything given and earned in life. The painting is beautiful also. Is that watercolor? I can’t tell on my device. The colors are so vivid. Fantastic piece (poem and painting) H🌷
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 12:54pm
Dear H,
I'm glad you like the painting and art !
It's a true mixed media combo of gouache, watercolor and acrylic.
It's one of those organic paintings that happens on its own. Kind of like a poem that writes itself. Anyway it's always a thrill when you like it !!!!
Hard to argue with love. Came to me the same way.
BIG THANKS
PS
❤
I'm glad you like the painting and art !
It's a true mixed media combo of gouache, watercolor and acrylic.
It's one of those organic paintings that happens on its own. Kind of like a poem that writes itself. Anyway it's always a thrill when you like it !!!!
Hard to argue with love. Came to me the same way.
BIG THANKS
PS
❤
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 1:47pm
Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
25th Aug 2022 3:12pm
Yeah
I mix it up
Don't have to be rough and tumble all the time ...
That's the secret
Flexibility
Thx !
I mix it up
Don't have to be rough and tumble all the time ...
That's the secret
Flexibility
Thx !
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
26th Aug 2022 00:35am
Love the painting. Love is not all sexual but a constant dose of sex and intimacy sure does make everything better in my book. You definitely want more in your cup than just sex though.
Or perhaps not. lol
Or perhaps not. lol
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
26th Aug 2022 00:42am
Had a waterfall in mind when I wrote this poem.
Didn't you have a poem by that title ?
Wow, you should repost that sometime ....
I want overflow all the time
Sex, love, intimacy and sensation
Love your comment and RL
I dipped a toe in and then dove headfirst into nirvana...
Didn't you have a poem by that title ?
Wow, you should repost that sometime ....
I want overflow all the time
Sex, love, intimacy and sensation
Love your comment and RL
I dipped a toe in and then dove headfirst into nirvana...
Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
26th Aug 2022 00:58am
Oh yeah, I have one called 'Waterfall' and that would be a good painting for it. ;)
That was one of the first, if not the first, erotic one I posted.
That was one of the first, if not the first, erotic one I posted.
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
26th Aug 2022 1:16am
I might have commented on that one several times. I know you about 2 years now and you keep blowing me away with astonishing writes. Always a thrill in Kx box ....
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
27th Aug 2022 4:00pm
Not to take away from your wonderful write, but this led me to thinking how everything about love is NOT sex.
I don't need to elaborate on why, we all know already, about the simple awe and joy of being with that certain someone, and just appreciating the time with them. The nuances being noticed within that time.
That is what fills our cups, yes?
I don't need to elaborate on why, we all know already, about the simple awe and joy of being with that certain someone, and just appreciating the time with them. The nuances being noticed within that time.
That is what fills our cups, yes?
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27th Aug 2022 5:35pm
Totally agree Styx
Nuances are a beautiful thing
I was just thinking about that a few minutes in an unrelated matter to love. If you have people in your world who understand the beauty of nuances, that's a person to have and hold near and dear .....
Thanks Mister
Nuances are a beautiful thing
I was just thinking about that a few minutes in an unrelated matter to love. If you have people in your world who understand the beauty of nuances, that's a person to have and hold near and dear .....
Thanks Mister
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
27th Aug 2022 4:56pm
Sex came first, love followed. Was all about procreation. I am sure there was some kind of a caring between early humans that evolved into love as we know it today. What a wild ride though.
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
27th Aug 2022 5:37pm
A wild ride indeed elsiesan
I'm the last person to explain it, only know about my own big bang theory. Probably different
Thx !
I'm the last person to explain it, only know about my own big bang theory. Probably different
Thx !
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28th Aug 2022 8:44am
Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
28th Aug 2022 10:38am
Appreciation for love between 2 people fascinates me more as I get older. I'm long into my marriage. Some things remain incredibly fresh and others difficult as they always were. I try, because I love love ....
Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
30th Aug 2022 3:28am
Those gravitation pulls have been known to pull galaxies together for big bangs, ya know.
Excellent choice of words, superb choice of color.
BIG LIKE
Excellent choice of words, superb choice of color.
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. i was thinking today how much i love you
30th Aug 2022 3:53am
Needed a BIG BANG painting for this one so went deep into my well.
So appreciate the honor on this one.
Love is to be taken seriously
Thx
W
So appreciate the honor on this one.
Love is to be taken seriously
Thx
W