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All night bed springs chime
I am young, such a sweet taste
And you want everything from me
Very greedy for my body,
So eager to start
I'll help, don't worry
Clothes fall away soon
You handle me so easily
Not one to be shy
First caresses smoothly,
Breasts, hips and the whole body ...
Ah-hh! You are naughty,
This intense need to drink me
Your tongue penetrated so boldly...
Now I'm sliding to pleasure,
As you take sips deeply
That's why I'm uncontrollable...
Struggling against the sensation
Enter me deeper,
I crave this eternal inspiration,
And squeeze your hair tighter
At the peak of lust...
Such an intense outpouring.
"Oh my god" are the only words.
All night the bed springs chime.
And even falling asleep,
I will not let you pull out.
Feeling so completely, filled...
And you want everything from me
Very greedy for my body,
So eager to start
I'll help, don't worry
Clothes fall away soon
You handle me so easily
Not one to be shy
First caresses smoothly,
Breasts, hips and the whole body ...
Ah-hh! You are naughty,
This intense need to drink me
Your tongue penetrated so boldly...
Now I'm sliding to pleasure,
As you take sips deeply
That's why I'm uncontrollable...
Struggling against the sensation
Enter me deeper,
I crave this eternal inspiration,
And squeeze your hair tighter
At the peak of lust...
Such an intense outpouring.
"Oh my god" are the only words.
All night the bed springs chime.
And even falling asleep,
I will not let you pull out.
Feeling so completely, filled...
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Re. All night bed springs chime
22nd Aug 2022 9:25pm
Now I'm sliding to pleasure....loved the idea of being held inside...wonderful stuff...xo
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22nd Aug 2022 10:49pm
Oh yes! the funnest slip and slide a tongue can have. ;) Well that and passionate French kissing because oh yeah, I love that. When your mind is being blown so to speak you don't know if you are pulling away or pulling closer. Pulling you in but so overwhelmed by that sensation struggling uncontrollably to pull away. To have that control over someone is magical. I absolutely love using my mouth to torture someone with ever intensifying sensations until ... no not yet... :p
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23rd Aug 2022 2:19am
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23rd Aug 2022 2:28am
It sure is... I love torturing like that, get you right to the point... over and over again... until it is pure agony and the explosion is going to rock my world and definitely yours too. ;)
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23rd Aug 2022 5:40am
listening to you in my head, savouring each syllable in the relentless climb to release....superb stuff Kristina
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22nd Aug 2022 9:40pm
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22nd Aug 2022 10:49pm
Definitely, what could be better... To share yourself with someone completely and in every way is the best thing in the world. I want to feel those strong hands handling me so easily, oh to feel my face against shoulders overwhelmed by that masculinity. Needing to be filled by it completely.
Re. All night bed springs chime
22nd Aug 2022 9:40pm
Absolutely wonderful read, desires in stanzas
Fantastic job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
Fantastic job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
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22nd Aug 2022 10:50pm
You know me Ron, a infinite vessel of desires. And when the tongue sails those seas, Oh my God I definitely lose the plot. That's one struggle I love and it will be rewarded in every way imaginable. No boundaries or limits just endless amounts of passion being exchanged. And I will make you lose the plot too, that's for damn sure.
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22nd Aug 2022 10:54pm
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22nd Aug 2022 9:45pm
hello lovely Kristina correct if I'm wrong but you have a Dominatrix quality to me which all though I've never tasted a woman's flesh I have tasted her soul
this is darkly erotic I enjoyed it very much
you bring the heat lovely one ❤️
this is darkly erotic I enjoyed it very much
you bring the heat lovely one ❤️
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22nd Aug 2022 11:08pm
Oh yes! There is some Dominatrix for sure. ;) Actually I wrote one from a more Dominatrix perspective I have yet to post. I love to torture especially things like edging, truly drive someone out of their mind. ;) An impure mix of chaos, either submission or domination or both, I don't believe you have to be one or the other. I think to be both is the ultimate in fully exploring everything in every way. To taste the soul, now that is truly special. And when you make love to someone's soul so often everything else follows. I know you always get the dark tones and shades, even if they might not be so apparent. I love that. And you always bring the heat so that's is definitely an incredible compliment. Thank you. ;)
Re. All night bed springs chime
22nd Aug 2022 10:06pm
Let's not talk about my greed, we'd be here all night.
But all night is what you desire
Phenomenal Kx style writing
Abstract contingencies of lust and fulfillment
Drinking your bath water, kissing your feet in duets
BIG ETHEREAL LIKE
But all night is what you desire
Phenomenal Kx style writing
Abstract contingencies of lust and fulfillment
Drinking your bath water, kissing your feet in duets
BIG ETHEREAL LIKE
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22nd Aug 2022 10:58pm
Oh yeah! I know you are greedy one. :p
All night, all day, and anything that creeps in-between too.
Do I have a style? :p Or is it just branded chaos?
Abstract and literal, no limitations on lust and fulfillment.
Think of all those fantasies just waiting to be lived again and again.
Drinking my bath water. lol Well you will definitely get something extra
because I don't take a bath without... * nevermind, innocent look *
Oh my feet is sensitive, kissing them is definitely going to send tingling up the spine.
And all kinds of stuff happens from there. ;)
ETHEREAL, Oh yeah! I love that... Even making love during an out of body experience. Damn!
All night, all day, and anything that creeps in-between too.
Do I have a style? :p Or is it just branded chaos?
Abstract and literal, no limitations on lust and fulfillment.
Think of all those fantasies just waiting to be lived again and again.
Drinking my bath water. lol Well you will definitely get something extra
because I don't take a bath without... * nevermind, innocent look *
Oh my feet is sensitive, kissing them is definitely going to send tingling up the spine.
And all kinds of stuff happens from there. ;)
ETHEREAL, Oh yeah! I love that... Even making love during an out of body experience. Damn!
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24th Aug 2022 1:39pm
A Lotta action on this one, it's like vagina sci-fi..
I'm done with your bath water, now going right to your spout ..
Cash back
MORE LIKE
I'm done with your bath water, now going right to your spout ..
Cash back
MORE LIKE
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24th Aug 2022 2:40pm
Vagina sci-fi lol Oh yeah, extraterrestrial for sure. The bath water is lovely... I always let my fingers do the walking in the bath tub. So much sexual anxiety to work through always. ;) Love MORE LIKE.
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10th Sep 2022 2:44pm
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10th Sep 2022 3:09pm
I always loved the number 7... I suppose a lot of people do. There is just something attractive about it. :p
70 wow...
70 wow...
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22nd Aug 2022 11:40pm
Damn right! hell yeah!
But I did crawl into your mind, didn't you know that... I am camping out in the darkest places. The place where the fantasies you won't tell anyone live; that's where I live too. ;)
Lust and greed speak without words. But "Oh my God" three words that say more than just the words.
Tortured for my sins.
I have my ways of making you want to me even naughtier. :p No limits...
Ready to serve the heat and intensity always. ;)
So long as the bed doesn't fall... been there. lol
Have to keep those sweet fiery juices flowing always. I can be a bartender, or anything else.
That's why I am camping in there to provoke all kinds of thoughts. The ones that make you go did I just think that... Is that even legal? lol
But I did crawl into your mind, didn't you know that... I am camping out in the darkest places. The place where the fantasies you won't tell anyone live; that's where I live too. ;)
Lust and greed speak without words. But "Oh my God" three words that say more than just the words.
Tortured for my sins.
I have my ways of making you want to me even naughtier. :p No limits...
Ready to serve the heat and intensity always. ;)
So long as the bed doesn't fall... been there. lol
Have to keep those sweet fiery juices flowing always. I can be a bartender, or anything else.
That's why I am camping in there to provoke all kinds of thoughts. The ones that make you go did I just think that... Is that even legal? lol
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Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
22nd Aug 2022 11:59pm
Just imagine all those textures, yum. ;) And so much sexual energy waiting to be exploded in every way all night long. I have so many somatic emotions to share, so it's great when they appeal to the reader. ;) And even better when you can feel them... I am definitely not typical, a whole of strange and chaos though; lust and passion too. :p If you cannot wait for the next line Ted then that definitely makes me happy. I hope you could hear the bed springs chime too, what a symphony that is along with all the other sounds. Often when I write I cannot wait for the next line because I get myself worked up so easily. lol
Re. All night bed springs chime
23rd Aug 2022 00:12am
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23rd Aug 2022 1:27am
I suppose that starts with 'you want everything from me' ;) I have seen how some musicians treat their instruments. It definitely seems to vary a lot. lol Sometimes it's handle with care and other times it's jam as much as you can on it. Yeah, I can definitely see some commonalities now that you mention it. ;) Are you a musician Jazz? how do you treat your instruments? You reminded me of one of my past ones "You play me boldly". Oh the fingers of a musician or artist certainly know how to make the instrument or canvas moan, scream, and sing. All that creative energy just dying to play in someone, for someone. What a beautiful expression that is.
Re. All night bed springs chime
23rd Aug 2022 1:19am
I wish that was you and me, LOL. The fire burning between us. Keep on writing my sexy lady.
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23rd Aug 2022 1:56am
Haha, that's very sweet Francisco. I like it when someone feels themselves in the poem with me. ;) You know how much I love to start fires. A little arsonist hiding out underground. lol Always making the bed springs chime in a symphony that echoes throughout. And if there is no bed that's another thrill to be had without boundaries and limitations. I love it all. ;) Always keep the fire burning. And I always love when you come by to burn things with me. Thanks so much for the encouragement.
Re. All night bed springs chime
23rd Aug 2022 1:42am
This is filled with lusciousness, decadence and passion.
You take being devoured to a whole
other level amiga. LOL
Got a TempurPedic mattress - no springs. LOL
My boys would have a heart attack. hahahaha
You take being devoured to a whole
other level amiga. LOL
Got a TempurPedic mattress - no springs. LOL
My boys would have a heart attack. hahahaha
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23rd Aug 2022 2:23am
You are filled with lusciousness, decadence and passion too Adel. :p
Haha, oh yeah! If you are going to be devoured then definitely make it one hell of an experience, right? ;) Hit every level and make up some new ones too.
No springs... yeah that's definitely better. :p Still have to keep it down in there I guess though. :( Don't want to give the boys a heart attack. lol You have me wondering how old your boys are. Are they all about girls yet? ;)
You always make me smile and laugh Chica. That's one thing that makes you irresistible. ;)
Haha, oh yeah! If you are going to be devoured then definitely make it one hell of an experience, right? ;) Hit every level and make up some new ones too.
No springs... yeah that's definitely better. :p Still have to keep it down in there I guess though. :( Don't want to give the boys a heart attack. lol You have me wondering how old your boys are. Are they all about girls yet? ;)
You always make me smile and laugh Chica. That's one thing that makes you irresistible. ;)
Re. All night bed springs chime
23rd Aug 2022 4:06am
Dear K,
Oh how I remember these days! (Yesterday, maybe? 🤔) filled with passion and romance (😴) our time spent pleasing one another (apart 🫥)
I loved the the energy in this. So much urgency and raw magnetism the body heat gets turned up immediately (🥵)
May you never lose that high intensity. (😊)
Great write. H 🌷
Oh how I remember these days! (Yesterday, maybe? 🤔) filled with passion and romance (😴) our time spent pleasing one another (apart 🫥)
I loved the the energy in this. So much urgency and raw magnetism the body heat gets turned up immediately (🥵)
May you never lose that high intensity. (😊)
Great write. H 🌷
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23rd Aug 2022 11:59am
Some days are unforgettable. ;) For you, it should be every day Honoria. Filled with passion and romance. Pleasing one another is such an incredible experience. When it's a competition to see who can please the other most and in that you get the most pleasure possible. That's sexual energy is the energy of life. That urgency and magnetism only increasing, definitely turns up the heat... It's unbearable at times so teasing and seductive that you spend every minute thinking about it. That high intensity is definitely a part of me to the very core, I don't think I could ever lose it for better or worse. ;) I love that you like the intensity. Not everyone can handle it. lol
Re. All night bed springs chime
23rd Aug 2022 1:04pm
People go crazy when you write this, you must be on so many people's notification alerts.
Unbelievable, it's not just a drought that's out there but it's exacerbated by starvation.
There you go being a leader of a tribe leading the march.
Unbelievable, it's not just a drought that's out there but it's exacerbated by starvation.
There you go being a leader of a tribe leading the march.
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23rd Aug 2022 1:58pm
I am a whole lotta crazy so just trying to make other people that way too I suppose. :p Yeah, they probably get a warning alert. lol Reading may make you crazy, no lifeguard on duty.
I hate droughts... Drink first then eat. ;) I definitely don't want you to starve... And I always want to keep you hydrated too.
A leader, I like that! Not sure exactly where I am going but definitely can be fun getting there. Wherever a symphony bed springs will no doubt follow. Because that's just something I cannot live without. And I am really happy to have you here Laluma.
I hate droughts... Drink first then eat. ;) I definitely don't want you to starve... And I always want to keep you hydrated too.
A leader, I like that! Not sure exactly where I am going but definitely can be fun getting there. Wherever a symphony bed springs will no doubt follow. Because that's just something I cannot live without. And I am really happy to have you here Laluma.
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23rd Aug 2022 2:11pm
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24th Aug 2022 2:41pm
I take being the leader seriously. ;) I will lead you write down the path of depraved debauchery. ;)
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24th Aug 2022 1:04pm
Oh yeah! A cool mountain breeze shaking the wind chimes like you shake me. That's a rhythm that ripples through the body and soul as bodies intertwine. Youthful creamy thighs were made to be explored, it's the law of nature. This special place just screams to be touched and tasted. Smokey eyes sparkling like diamonds and every facet reflects those intense needs. They reflect your needs too. ;) Forever a special place, and oh God when a tongue finds it's way there... Now that is an incredible sensation that just blows the mind. That struggle to maintain even a semblance of sanity while someone forcefully takes all of the control.
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Such a clever title and line. It was definitely a mouthwatering read. There is definitely something to be said about the taste of a woman. To feel her squirm and grind as your tongue enjoys the slick warmth of her want. Then to feel her moving ever closer to cumming just to back off enough to heighten that need. There is nothing more satisfying then to feel and taste her cum upon your tongue…ecstasy
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24th Aug 2022 1:09pm
I liked the title and line too. ;) It makes a point... And I always want to be mouthwatering. I imagine every woman has a unique flavour and tastes. As do men. To explore that palate so thoroughly is an incredible experience. I know men love to have that control over my body while blowing the mind. Not wanting to release me from that torture. Oh what an insane struggle it is to handle that sensation. But rest assured when it comes to edging, I am the best. ;) So it's definitely all coming back at ya. To keep you right there, where just a breath could cause an eruption but not letting it happen. That build up will cause your soul to orgasm. Certainly more than a mouthful, stealing all the essence but helping make more too. ;)
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24th Aug 2022 1:32pm
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24th Aug 2022 2:43pm
Re. All night bed springs chime
24th Aug 2022 1:48pm
You know I did some prison time, did I tell you about that?
When I was inside this was all I thought about to get me through the lonely nights. Making passionate love to someone like you.
I'm not a bad guy, I just needed love in wrong places.
Always dig your writes Kristina
You make a man like me whole
When I was inside this was all I thought about to get me through the lonely nights. Making passionate love to someone like you.
I'm not a bad guy, I just needed love in wrong places.
Always dig your writes Kristina
You make a man like me whole
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24th Aug 2022 2:48pm
You never told me that. What for? :p
Oh god, I can imagine how lonely the nights would be. That's a horrible thought.
It's that need for an all consuming passion that keeps you going.
I know something about love in the wrong places. :p In so many ways.
I love doing things in the 'wrong' places. Breaking all the rules.
I love that you dig my writes...
"You make a man like me whole" Wow, now that's an incredible thing to say.
I love that!
Oh god, I can imagine how lonely the nights would be. That's a horrible thought.
It's that need for an all consuming passion that keeps you going.
I know something about love in the wrong places. :p In so many ways.
I love doing things in the 'wrong' places. Breaking all the rules.
I love that you dig my writes...
"You make a man like me whole" Wow, now that's an incredible thing to say.
I love that!
Re. All night bed springs chime
24th Aug 2022 4:10pm
Chimes in the night were used to keep evil spirits away and tell people everything is all right. Chimes to celebrate, chimes for festivals, chimes for wedding, births and new life. And now when I hear chimes I will always think of couples celebrating life in a different way. Love becomes a celebration as it always should, this poem makes me horny and elated when I hear the bed springs chime.
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24th Aug 2022 6:17pm
There are so many chimes in life, and so many reasons for them. :) And I love your chime, it's always deep and so full of emotion and wisdom. All things a young witch knows so well, especially when you penetrate her deeply. This burning cauldron of desires. And I love that I could share a different type of chimes with you here. Love and passion is definitely a celebration of life. Oh yeah! I am always horny so you should be too. ;) And I am elated by your comment. I know a true shaman when I see one... searching for the deeper meaning in life. You know the best place to find that, and it's definitely penetrating deeper into someone. The body, mind, and soul. To hear the screams of a witch... tortured just like that.
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24th Aug 2022 7:45pm
Yes, I will take your all in return for my soul in this never ending celebration of life. Deeper and deeper still, I find the heat of the sun as the world chimes out with pleasure and pain. We are born into pain, our lust dripping red, so few finding celebration within the agony of our creation.
mi casa, tu casa
mi sangre es tu sangre
mi dolor es tu dolor
mi alma es tu alma
mi casa, tu casa
mi sangre es tu sangre
mi dolor es tu dolor
mi alma es tu alma
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Re. All night bed springs chime
24th Aug 2022 5:28pm
Falling asleep in some pussy after a good fuck is that extra treat to fill the slimy warmth within. But you have to make sure she came several times also.
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24th Aug 2022 7:11pm
So many extra treats to come. Better be ready not to sleep... taking someone inside just keeps me awake in all the best ways. And I will keep you awake too. So hard you might need treatment after so many hours. Giving a cock the hardest time is my main purpose. Spreading that slimy warmth of the deepest darkest sins. And oh yeah! I will surely come several times, but you will to. I never give up after the first outpouring. That certainly won't absolve you of your sins. And when every orifice is covered, then maybe... you can take a break before repenting again for how you covered me so completely. Dripping... all over... covered. Even the Devil is impressed.
Re. All night bed springs chime
24th Aug 2022 7:58pm
Did you know my cone has a motorized penis head ? Super Dildo XXX.
Did you know I can operate it while in Chamber 44 and watering the stargazer lilies at the same time ? Special floral scents while driving you to OBLIVION
some but not all of my talents…..
See you soon
You need pleasure of the most exquisite caliber
Did you know I can operate it while in Chamber 44 and watering the stargazer lilies at the same time ? Special floral scents while driving you to OBLIVION
some but not all of my talents…..
See you soon
You need pleasure of the most exquisite caliber
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24th Aug 2022 8:12pm
Haha, a motorized penis head... oh yeah, that's going to drive me crazy. lol
Always feed the stargazer lily, she is young and needs so much nourishment. Her wetness always flows.
The scent is irresistible. And when she comes in the chamber it's an experience like no other.
When she comes, it's oblivion. An endless source of pleasure.
And endless source of pain... So many talents.
Always needing pleasure of the most exquisite caliber. And bed springs were made to sing her name.
While you push her further... and she pushes you even more.
And the satins won't wash out ever.
Always feed the stargazer lily, she is young and needs so much nourishment. Her wetness always flows.
The scent is irresistible. And when she comes in the chamber it's an experience like no other.
When she comes, it's oblivion. An endless source of pleasure.
And endless source of pain... So many talents.
Always needing pleasure of the most exquisite caliber. And bed springs were made to sing her name.
While you push her further... and she pushes you even more.
And the satins won't wash out ever.
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24th Aug 2022 8:52pm
Love stains aka permanent wet spots.
You know action of the highest tension took place.
My cousin is an artist, bet he could make something beautiful from those sheets.
Let’s make more …
You know action of the highest tension took place.
My cousin is an artist, bet he could make something beautiful from those sheets.
Let’s make more …
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24th Aug 2022 8:56pm
Exactly, permanent wet spots.
Eventually the entire body will be stained... battered and bruised.
The highest tension played out again and again.
Making art from those sheets. Making art in those sheets.
Sheets of wetness flowing like paint.
You can never wash away the art. And you just need to make more... always.
Eventually the entire body will be stained... battered and bruised.
The highest tension played out again and again.
Making art from those sheets. Making art in those sheets.
Sheets of wetness flowing like paint.
You can never wash away the art. And you just need to make more... always.
Re. All night bed springs chime
25th Aug 2022 3:19am
Why do I have the urge to ground you to your room, your bed, young lady...
Bad, bad, bad girl.
Bad, bad, bad girl.
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25th Aug 2022 1:03pm
That's because you want to punish me. :p On the bed... That's what you do with a Bad, bad, bad girl. Such a strong desire to teach me a new lesson every time, that's what they all want. So how can I be good? Perhaps I like the lessons too much. I guess everyone thinks I need an authority figure, someone strong that can handle me. Searching for the limits to reign me in with bondage ropes. Repenting on my knees but never giving in while bringing you to your knees. Oh yeah, I can teach you some lessons too. On the edge, keeping you on the ledge but not letting you come, or go...
Re. All night bed springs chime
28th Aug 2022 11:21pm
You're only young once, they say! ;-) Said from your geeky friend, Billy.
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29th Aug 2022 00:50am
That's so true, it's so easy to look back with regrets about all the things you did not do or try. I certainly cannot say I have always made good decisions but I have definitely experienced a lot, some of my own doing and some not. Now the bed springs always chime because I have to have that or else I get really crazy. :p
Wait! I am really curious about this 'geeky friend' reference. :p I never saw you as geeky but I like that a lot. ;) lol We should get along famously...
Wait! I am really curious about this 'geeky friend' reference. :p I never saw you as geeky but I like that a lot. ;) lol We should get along famously...
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29th Aug 2022 00:56am
I am sort of geeky & nerdy but if you show me enough encouragement (flesh), I just might wanna pounce on you like we're naked on a bouncy castle or similar, lol. Actually, it's a dream an ex once told me she had about me, lol.
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29th Aug 2022 1:23am
Haha, geeky and nerdy is always ready to pounce. lol Those are some super horny guys. :p Yeah, you know what I am talking about... Naked in a bouncy castle, too cool. You have just added something to my list that I have not tried and that's not easy to do so thanks for that. :p
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29th Aug 2022 1:29am
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29th Aug 2022 1:31am
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29th Aug 2022 1:36am
Oh, there are so many ideas I could give you for your next piece of erotica, lol! (But I won't) ;-)
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29th Aug 2022 1:40am
Okay, now you are just being mean.... yeah dangle that carrot * cough * in front of me and then say I won't... fortunately I have an infinite number of erotic ideas... so be that way... (pouting)
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29th Aug 2022 1:44am
I'll be reading, engaging possibly. Sexiness is not spelling it totally out, remember. A woman once told me I make her legs quake. I even asked her what she meant by that, lol. ;-)
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29th Aug 2022 9:34pm
Oh the nectar of life, how sweet and wonderful it is. It's invigorating and so powerful. We all seek it, like the holy grail.
Amazing work Kristina. Yes, I'm a little late to the party amidst a sea of comments but damn, your verses are fire.
Amazing work Kristina. Yes, I'm a little late to the party amidst a sea of comments but damn, your verses are fire.
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29th Aug 2022 10:48pm
Oh yes, sweet and wonderful indeed. It's intoxicating and we always want it. ;) It is definitely like the holy grail, intimacy is a spiritual journey. Once you have tasted the nectar, there is no coming back from that. You will always need and seek it. I cannot imagine it being any other way. :p
You are never too late Wally. I love that you are enjoying my writing so much. 'damn, your verses are fire' hell yeah! I love that... Been called a little arsonist because I love starting fires. :p
You are never too late Wally. I love that you are enjoying my writing so much. 'damn, your verses are fire' hell yeah! I love that... Been called a little arsonist because I love starting fires. :p
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2nd Sep 2022 9:07pm
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2nd Sep 2022 9:34pm
Hey Daniel, testing the mattress and everywhere else too is one of the best things in life. ;) What a seductive orchestra intimacy makes. Thanks so much for stopping by and the wonderful feedback. I love that!
Re. All night bed springs chime
2nd Sep 2022 9:36pm
Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
2nd Sep 2022 9:39pm
Well I hope the weekend brings you all the best things in life. You know what I mean. ;)
Re. All night bed springs chime
6th Sep 2022 1:22am
Great title.
I sensed a possible slight vampirish parallel: (1) “intense need to drink me” – the thirst for your blood, (2) “I crave this eternal inspiration” – taken from the living to the undead.
But alas, the main motif is two young, fit, attractive horny lovers continuing to explore their sexual desires while pleasuring each other. Feeding off each other’s feedback, to lead to a melodic, mutual crescendo! Even though satisfied (or are you ever) and spent you don’t want to relinquish the feeling; thus, keeping him inside – one whole being – no longer separate pieces or alone. The emptiness gone.
Of course, compared to my prosaic attempt to comment, your words rivals poetry from the ink of Aphrodite.
I sensed a possible slight vampirish parallel: (1) “intense need to drink me” – the thirst for your blood, (2) “I crave this eternal inspiration” – taken from the living to the undead.
But alas, the main motif is two young, fit, attractive horny lovers continuing to explore their sexual desires while pleasuring each other. Feeding off each other’s feedback, to lead to a melodic, mutual crescendo! Even though satisfied (or are you ever) and spent you don’t want to relinquish the feeling; thus, keeping him inside – one whole being – no longer separate pieces or alone. The emptiness gone.
Of course, compared to my prosaic attempt to comment, your words rivals poetry from the ink of Aphrodite.
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Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
6th Sep 2022 3:53pm
You know me, so often there is a creature of the night parallel in there if you look. ;) Always craving blood, perhaps that's why I bite if I get super excited. lol And always ready to be an eternal inspiration. ;)
A vampire can be young, fit, and attractive - forever... :p That sexual exploration and discovery never gets old. That's the most beautiful symphony ever composed every time. That strong attraction lighting up the nerves with the most intense sensations in the body. Never satisfied, never wanting to relinquish those feelings. And although it is an addiction for me, I know the only treatment for me is to have that symphony played in me often and forever. Keeping him inside, oh yes! Filling that emptiness with all the best things in life. Your comments are always marvelous and so perceptive DaVinci. A true genius. 'your words rivals the poetry from the ink of Aphrodite' oh boy, you just doomed me; in mythology Aphrodite is one spiteful vengeful Goddess... But damn! what an absolutely incredible compliment. I do love mythology and such a comparison is so beautiful to me. Thank you!
A vampire can be young, fit, and attractive - forever... :p That sexual exploration and discovery never gets old. That's the most beautiful symphony ever composed every time. That strong attraction lighting up the nerves with the most intense sensations in the body. Never satisfied, never wanting to relinquish those feelings. And although it is an addiction for me, I know the only treatment for me is to have that symphony played in me often and forever. Keeping him inside, oh yes! Filling that emptiness with all the best things in life. Your comments are always marvelous and so perceptive DaVinci. A true genius. 'your words rivals the poetry from the ink of Aphrodite' oh boy, you just doomed me; in mythology Aphrodite is one spiteful vengeful Goddess... But damn! what an absolutely incredible compliment. I do love mythology and such a comparison is so beautiful to me. Thank you!
Re. All night bed springs chime
16th Sep 2022 10:48pm
Damn girl ;) your words are so enticing. I'd like to meet a girl like you and experience a moment like such. Words and thoughts have always been my biggest turn on and these are right there. I'd keep a girl like you up all night, teasing, savoring, and a few other things I can't mention. Then we'd write in the interim. Erotic poetry covering the beauty of to artists exploring each other's minds and body's. That is if I ever met someone like you of course. Regardless, you got this poets attention.
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Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
17th Sep 2022 1:41am
I love Damn! girl - that made me smile. I always want to be enticing, what better feeling is there. ;) Oh yes! those are the moments I live for. How could you not want that right? God knows my thoughts are always on, well, lol * nevermind, naughty look * But I get turned on really easy. lol Words, thoughts, a touch, a look, a kiss, just being awake. lol You know anything really. Teasing and torturing all night long, all day too. Other things you can't mention, huh? Is that really fair to say? Just saying... Writing in the interim now that's an interesting idea... awesome way to handle an intermission. Exploring minds and bodies is certainly the best way to write in my mind. Writing from the heart and soul. Well I think if writing gets a poet's attention then that's an incredible compliment. Thank you. ;)
Re. All night bed springs chime
20th Sep 2022 5:09am
Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
20th Sep 2022 9:08pm
Well it's about time you visited me Trome, damnit! I thought you didn't like me any more. (I am just teasing you, maybe lol) I can use all the blessings I can get right now so thank you! I hope you are doing great and having tons of passionate Latin sex under the stars and by the sea, and everywhere else too. Sorry I haven't been around much recently if I missed anything. I will try to check it out soon. Thanks so much for stopping by and loving this. ;)
Re. All night bed springs chime
Anonymous
20th Sep 2022 9:30am
amazingly woven
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Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
20th Sep 2022 9:08pm
Hi Olivia, it's great to meet you. I love that you found it amazingly woven that means a lot to me. I always write with passion so I am very happy if you could feel it. ;) Thanks so much for stopping by to read and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it a lot. :)
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2022 3:08am
Heyyy
It's a pleasure for me to read you☺️
You have written really well, everything whatever you wrote was looking real in front of my eyes... oomph splendid😍
Keep shining ☺️
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Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
21st Sep 2022 7:40pm
It's a pleasure to get your wonderful thoughts and your oomph too. ;) You make me smile. I would say keep shining but I know I don't need to, it's obvious you will. ;)
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2022 7:45pm
Many thanks for such a great words ❤️
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Re. All night bed springs chime
10th Jan 2023 8:52am
I hear the all night bed springs chime
You make me hard. I'm past my prime
I feel your heat around my rhyme
Fornicate me, just one time
I have the key. You have the lock
I feel your cunt around my cock
My hard erection in a lock
All night to cum, there is no clock
You make me hard. I'm past my prime
I feel your heat around my rhyme
Fornicate me, just one time
I have the key. You have the lock
I feel your cunt around my cock
My hard erection in a lock
All night to cum, there is no clock
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Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
11th Jan 2023 1:03pm
Sorry for the late reply, somehow I missed this one.
Wow, what a rhyme. You nailed it. ;)
If only I could rhyme. lol
Always love it when things get hard. ;)
And so always putting off the heat. :p
I love the idea of key and lock... That's definitely a poem.
'All night to cum, there is no clock' Absolutely...
Ecstasy and intimacy should never be on a clock.
Wow, what a rhyme. You nailed it. ;)
If only I could rhyme. lol
Always love it when things get hard. ;)
And so always putting off the heat. :p
I love the idea of key and lock... That's definitely a poem.
'All night to cum, there is no clock' Absolutely...
Ecstasy and intimacy should never be on a clock.
Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
11th Jan 2023 11:48pm
Thanks for appreciating the rhyme. Please visit my page. All of mine rhyme. It’s what I do. I like your style.
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Re: Re. All night bed springs chime
12th Jan 2023 4:51pm
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13th Jan 2023 3:09am
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12th Jan 2023 4:52pm
Can never have too many moans can you? ;) Love making the bed springs chime.