deepundergroundpoetry.com
Birch
Leaves of Springtime green:
Youth growing respectably old;
Thus, crowned at Summer’s end
In hues of august gold.
Youth growing respectably old;
Thus, crowned at Summer’s end
In hues of august gold.
Published 20th Aug 2022
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 3
comments 13
reads 463
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
20th Aug 2022 9:49pm
20th Aug 2022 11:53pm
20th Aug 2022 11:39pm
20th Aug 2022 11:52pm
21st Aug 2022 00:56am
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Dec 2022 7:45pm
21st Aug 2022 2:29pm
<< post removed >>
21st Aug 2022 3:10pm
27th Aug 2022 9:52pm
So much in so few words: the coming of seasons, youth, growing up, rites of passage (or at least that's what I got from it). Elegant and classy. Well done.
28th Aug 2022 00:01am
Thank you very much. I think I tend to write better with brevity, so your observation is very encouraging :)
28th Aug 2022 11:49pm
A lovely nuanced way to ensure that brevity is super impactful.... which it beautifully is...
Nicely penned
🌹-🍁
Nicely penned
🌹-🍁
29th Aug 2022 1:35am
22nd Sep 2022 12:18pm
22nd Sep 2022 1:55pm
