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I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
Looked like a perfect day.
Did the work, the chores.
Smiled,
good girl.
Kept the chaos hidden.
Today black spots are leaking through.
Angry words
self loathing
Let it rip
Blot out the sunshine bullshit
until the black is spent.
Carry on.
Written by
brokentitanium
(k.)
Published 10th Aug 2022
| Edited 11th Aug 2022
Author's Note
Better out than in
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Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
10th Aug 2022 2:44pm
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10th Aug 2022 2:47pm
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10th Aug 2022 2:50pm
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10th Aug 2022 2:59pm
Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
10th Aug 2022 8:04pm
That chaos always finds a way out... sometimes you just need to say fuck, other times you just need to fuck... whatever the case... Better to get it out for sure because keeping it in is never good. I loved how you let it rip here. ;)
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Re: Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
11th Aug 2022 00:06am
Life is a fucking puzzle and I never get the balance right. Oh well.
Thanks for dropping by and reading my angst!
❤️k
Thanks for dropping by and reading my angst!
❤️k
Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
10th Aug 2022 10:51pm
Dear K,
Sure the f*ck is better out than in! You said it sister. Let ‘er rip as often as you want in my opinion.
F*ck onward!!!! 😊xx
H🌷
Sure the f*ck is better out than in! You said it sister. Let ‘er rip as often as you want in my opinion.
F*ck onward!!!! 😊xx
H🌷
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Re: Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
11th Aug 2022 00:07am
Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
11th Aug 2022 1:19pm
Thanks for using my painting to celebrate angst and more Fuck usage.
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Re: Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
11th Aug 2022 3:56pm
Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
27th Aug 2022 7:05pm
Oh yes, go for it. I find swearing funny. The air turned blue in our house yesterday when 3/4 of a large tin of gloss paint got spilt on the landing carpet. We hate said carpet, and it's ancient... it was an absolutely bugger to clean up though. Fuck indeed.
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Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
27th Aug 2022 7:10pm
There's a little bit left. And I'd painted a door and door frame twice already. Maybe it was more like 2/3? I'll probably write a poem about it later. I'll use whatever fraction works better! :D
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Re: Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
28th Aug 2022 1:00am
Haha! Love your poem and the fact that you turned that situation into poetry!
Thanks for reading and commenting.... I find most days offer at least several opportunities for dropping the F-bomb. Keeping those feelings in doesn't serve anyone well.
❤️k
Thanks for reading and commenting.... I find most days offer at least several opportunities for dropping the F-bomb. Keeping those feelings in doesn't serve anyone well.
❤️k
Re. I didn't say fuck enough yesterday
I did.
It comes and goes.
Maybe tomorrow I will be in fuck-deprivation but today…well, fukkit.
Following.
It comes and goes.
Maybe tomorrow I will be in fuck-deprivation but today…well, fukkit.
Following.
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28th Aug 2022 1:19am