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Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
She passed my way
Just a whisper of time
Paramount beauty
Wrapped in sadness
No matter how I tried
She couldn't shake the darkness
Then one day she receded
Left my ever still life
Moved elsewhere
Destination unknown
I looked at her picture today
Some sad, some not so much
I could find her if I tried
We had just a moment
Maybe one day
Or else just let it be
Just a whisper of time
Paramount beauty
Wrapped in sadness
No matter how I tried
She couldn't shake the darkness
Then one day she receded
Left my ever still life
Moved elsewhere
Destination unknown
I looked at her picture today
Some sad, some not so much
I could find her if I tried
We had just a moment
Maybe one day
Or else just let it be
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
7th Aug 2022 11:04pm
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7th Aug 2022 11:19pm
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7th Aug 2022 11:29pm
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
8th Aug 2022 00:08am
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Wow BK
This one got to you
Haven't written one like this in awhile...
Appreciate
Thx
This one got to you
Haven't written one like this in awhile...
Appreciate
Thx
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
8th Aug 2022 00:17am
Hey PS,
Some people come into our lives for a moment and move on:)
I feel curiosity in this - the what if factor. I agree with Kelani - let it be.
Sometimes it's better not to open that can of worms. But I totally get it:(
If it was meant to be - it would have happened without you even trying.
Again - loving your art!!!
Some people come into our lives for a moment and move on:)
I feel curiosity in this - the what if factor. I agree with Kelani - let it be.
Sometimes it's better not to open that can of worms. But I totally get it:(
If it was meant to be - it would have happened without you even trying.
Again - loving your art!!!
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There are fringe romances where you could but know you shouldn't and this was definitely one of them. Sit on your hands kind of feelings but still holding back knowing someone would get hurt. Neither odds us needed that.
I went through my recent paintings and this jumped out at me.
A lot of blues and some sad reds for emotion.
Thanks so much A
Amazing comment 👏
I went through my recent paintings and this jumped out at me.
A lot of blues and some sad reds for emotion.
Thanks so much A
Amazing comment 👏
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
8th Aug 2022 00:21am
hello dearest Poet
this makes me sad
but I know you are loved...
hugs my friend 💕
this makes me sad
but I know you are loved...
hugs my friend 💕
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8th Aug 2022 00:42am
I am loved
I can't complain
But you know how it is, how minds and bodies pull you from ...
Appreciate you Brenda, you know the vibe
Thanks
💓
I can't complain
But you know how it is, how minds and bodies pull you from ...
Appreciate you Brenda, you know the vibe
Thanks
💓
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
8th Aug 2022 00:22am
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8th Aug 2022 00:44am
Gouache and Watercolor and some mixed media technology.
Spent some time in this one,
Patience paid off
Thx so much
Makes me happy that you like it, artist to artist
🧡
Spent some time in this one,
Patience paid off
Thx so much
Makes me happy that you like it, artist to artist
🧡
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8th Aug 2022 1:14am
It's ironic how one picture can set off a wildfire in your head. All the what ifs ??
That's what happened a few hours ago
Glad I still can write these emotional pieces
Appreciate your comment Ted, always
That's what happened a few hours ago
Glad I still can write these emotional pieces
Appreciate your comment Ted, always
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
8th Aug 2022 1:12am
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8th Aug 2022 1:20am
Hit me hard today
Ton of bricks stuff
Great to see you CF
Appreciate the RL
THX
Ton of bricks stuff
Great to see you CF
Appreciate the RL
THX
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
8th Aug 2022 1:30am
Dear PS,
I enjoyed the wonder of this write. Should I? Or shouldn’t I? I loved the thought process in this piece and how you’ve encapsulated a particular moment. Been there. It’s a conundrum for sure. Terrific write. H🌷
I enjoyed the wonder of this write. Should I? Or shouldn’t I? I loved the thought process in this piece and how you’ve encapsulated a particular moment. Been there. It’s a conundrum for sure. Terrific write. H🌷
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Dear H,
I could of gotten into some BIG trouble. Would have been incredibly deep and joyous. Where did I find the willpower to turn my temperature down and keep on walking ??
You've been there, not surprised, poets are always in trouble and near misses ..l
Love the RL. Made peace, like them again
Thx H😆
I could of gotten into some BIG trouble. Would have been incredibly deep and joyous. Where did I find the willpower to turn my temperature down and keep on walking ??
You've been there, not surprised, poets are always in trouble and near misses ..l
Love the RL. Made peace, like them again
Thx H😆
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
8th Aug 2022 1:57am
Sometimes the tide of life is fickle. It brings you back what you cast aside, as well as what you simply let go of.
When we write things down, it becomes a message in a bottle of time. And thus the winds of fate just may steer that tide along.
When written enough, even myth becomes reality.
Excellent write, Mr Speak. Well written and thought inducing message included within.
When we write things down, it becomes a message in a bottle of time. And thus the winds of fate just may steer that tide along.
When written enough, even myth becomes reality.
Excellent write, Mr Speak. Well written and thought inducing message included within.
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I wondered if I could still write like this ?
I wasn't looking for the poem, just saw the picture and it wrote itself. You know how that goes Styx
Appreciate your comments always brother
Let's have some a few cigs and write all night long in the heartland
Thx
I wasn't looking for the poem, just saw the picture and it wrote itself. You know how that goes Styx
Appreciate your comments always brother
Let's have some a few cigs and write all night long in the heartland
Thx
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8th Aug 2022 2:29am
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8th Aug 2022 2:33am
I'm drinking the bourbon right now,
I made my own blend with 1/2 bourbon and 1/2 rye.
Spicy and fitting...l
I made my own blend with 1/2 bourbon and 1/2 rye.
Spicy and fitting...l
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
8th Aug 2022 3:03am
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8th Aug 2022 4:20am
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8th Aug 2022 8:40pm
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8th Aug 2022 8:44pm
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
8th Aug 2022 9:20pm
Oh boy, do I ever get this feeling... the wondering....
I love this art. Her face (or someone's face) is in it.
Beautiful writing. Of course you can.
❤️❤️❤️k
I love this art. Her face (or someone's face) is in it.
Beautiful writing. Of course you can.
❤️❤️❤️k
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8th Aug 2022 9:41pm
This is a WOW comment
3 hearts too !!
Yeah, I figured could see into this one
True story
I walked on ..
Thx on the writing and art Red
Xxx
3 hearts too !!
Yeah, I figured could see into this one
True story
I walked on ..
Thx on the writing and art Red
Xxx
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
This is really beautiful. So often beauty is wrapped in sadness. It's interesting to think about the evil that beauty can bring attracting the darkness. And so often that darkness has it's own magnetism to it for whatever reason. And it's interesting how sometimes a moment is all it takes to know there is chemistry, attraction, and so much potential to unleash that passion. And we have all met people I think where we wonder why we didn't take it further, or wish we could. Perhaps circumstances or just being shy, in a rush or whatever. It's hard not to wonder what could have been though sometimes. This is definitely another side of you, there is so much emotion in this. I can feel that admiration and a sense of loss; loss of the opportunity to know this person better.
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8th Aug 2022 10:42pm
I'm gratified that you see the beauty of attraction in this poem.
Sometimes you just connect with someone but you know deep down as much pleasure they might bring, the possibility of deep psychological pain is paramount. I chose to walk on and let things be as moment.
Appreciate your comment and RL
Appreciate your serious tone and way of seeing always ...
Sometimes you just connect with someone but you know deep down as much pleasure they might bring, the possibility of deep psychological pain is paramount. I chose to walk on and let things be as moment.
Appreciate your comment and RL
Appreciate your serious tone and way of seeing always ...
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10th Aug 2022 4:13am
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This is beautiful. How older generations would write journal entries, well written with a tinge of poetic flair.
I feel the melancholy in this.
I feel the melancholy in this.
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13th Aug 2022 8:48am
You have to take the high road sometimes when all you want you to do is take the easy road. Then you know where that takes you, right into a ditch. Truth is there are no easy roads. Think enough was said between us where we could part as near friends. I guess that's the best I could and can do and just let it be.
Appreciate your visit on this one. It's good to hear your thoughts.
Thank you for the RL too !
Appreciate your visit on this one. It's good to hear your thoughts.
Thank you for the RL too !
Re. Sadness you Could Cut with a Knife
24th Aug 2022 3:26pm
Damn that was good.
"Paramount beauty
Wrapped in sadness" epic lines Poet.
BIG LIKE (image too).
"Paramount beauty
Wrapped in sadness" epic lines Poet.
BIG LIKE (image too).
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24th Aug 2022 3:30pm
When I have good people to write about, the words come easy.
Appreciate the comment and RL Wally
Means a lot !!
Thx
Appreciate the comment and RL Wally
Means a lot !!
Thx