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Feast For The Devil
Trying to run from the demons
that dance in my head
fondle my inner most parts
feed off me until I feel dead
Screaming at the walls
when no one is around
arguing with the devil no one sees
who feeds me thoughts so obscene
Giving into his legions sexually
my demons appeased
by morning light
begging for mercy feeling diseased
My soul is corrupt
I can't hide it anymore
hell is inside me and below the Earth
I will meet the devil when my body is rotting feeding the worms
that dance in my head
fondle my inner most parts
feed off me until I feel dead
Screaming at the walls
when no one is around
arguing with the devil no one sees
who feeds me thoughts so obscene
Giving into his legions sexually
my demons appeased
by morning light
begging for mercy feeling diseased
My soul is corrupt
I can't hide it anymore
hell is inside me and below the Earth
I will meet the devil when my body is rotting feeding the worms
Published 22nd Mar 2012
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2012 6:38am
The other poem I built around this one, wouldn't be, unless you came up with this first crim. You're an inspiring writer! I really do respect, and admire your talents! :)
your version is so much better..ty Maikeru for working with me..I hope to grow as a writer..ty for such a beautiful comment..peace Crim :)
22nd Mar 2012 11:16am
satan will continue to feast
on all the reminants of your peace
on the happiness for your Soul
on your Beautiful stories never told
on all the happiness in your heart
just until you allow God To Enter at the start....
on all the reminants of your peace
on the happiness for your Soul
on your Beautiful stories never told
on all the happiness in your heart
just until you allow God To Enter at the start....
22nd Mar 2012 6:43pm
i'm doing my best tender Eric
to put my demons to rest
lay them at the feet of our Father
I just pray he forgives his daughter..
ty for a great comment even though I repeated myself from my last poem..peace Crim :)
to put my demons to rest
lay them at the feet of our Father
I just pray he forgives his daughter..
ty for a great comment even though I repeated myself from my last poem..peace Crim :)
22nd Mar 2012 2:19pm
A very insightful piece full of emotional depth. Well done dear crim.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
22nd Mar 2012 6:44pm
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24th Apr 2012 7:55am
I love your work . I just can't read it. You speak like my mom, I fear your demons.. You're one strong women. Don't ever stop writing . You have much to tell and you should. Xoxo.
25th Apr 2012 8:12pm
ty Gg..thankfully the demons are getting quiet..ty for the encouragement hugs Crim :)
22nd Sep 2012 9:37pm
I like how much emotion you were able to portray in this piece. Keep up the astounding work. :)
