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My Muse Cuffed And Collared!
A razor slashes at my heart
you have no talent your
work isn't art.
Demons speak to me with razor like teeth
telling me i'm damned
live in the land of the dead.
You're a mad woman who speaks
from a twisted soul
I have a flush you better just fold.
Stop writing and flee from this site
the DUP is for real writers
my demons bite.
I'm doubled over from each slash of their blade
the pain inside twisting me in knots
should I do as i'm bade?
No I say with much resolve
this is my home
I love all those who stomp these grounds.
So I will ride on
write on wait for my muse
to return i'll see him soon.
When he's done worshipping
at other's alters
I will once again have him in my bed
This time cuffed and collared!!!
you have no talent your
work isn't art.
Demons speak to me with razor like teeth
telling me i'm damned
live in the land of the dead.
You're a mad woman who speaks
from a twisted soul
I have a flush you better just fold.
Stop writing and flee from this site
the DUP is for real writers
my demons bite.
I'm doubled over from each slash of their blade
the pain inside twisting me in knots
should I do as i'm bade?
No I say with much resolve
this is my home
I love all those who stomp these grounds.
So I will ride on
write on wait for my muse
to return i'll see him soon.
When he's done worshipping
at other's alters
I will once again have him in my bed
This time cuffed and collared!!!
Published 21st Mar 2012
| Edited 22nd Mar 2012
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21st Mar 2012 9:13pm
so many have it confused
but truly our words are only as Beautiful as our muse
because they are the reason
our words have a sense of breathing
meaning they come to Life on the page
be they Beautiful or enraged
but it remains the same all along
& idk bout cuffed & collared but i wish i was the muse for this poem....lol
but truly our words are only as Beautiful as our muse
because they are the reason
our words have a sense of breathing
meaning they come to Life on the page
be they Beautiful or enraged
but it remains the same all along
& idk bout cuffed & collared but i wish i was the muse for this poem....lol
21st Mar 2012 9:29pm
ty Eric for such inspired thoughts
you make me smile a mile long
with your keen insight
and humor you're one of the reasons
I keep coming here..peace Crim :)
you make me smile a mile long
with your keen insight
and humor you're one of the reasons
I keep coming here..peace Crim :)
22nd Mar 2012 3:49am
Crims,
yeah, you have a great talent for spilling your heart onto paper and arranging it into poetry.
you have it all right here. space, structure interest.
i like the ending and hope you do indeed have him in your bed soon enough, though bed is soo last year y'know. there are many many other places :)
great stuff Crims
Shine on!
yeah, you have a great talent for spilling your heart onto paper and arranging it into poetry.
you have it all right here. space, structure interest.
i like the ending and hope you do indeed have him in your bed soon enough, though bed is soo last year y'know. there are many many other places :)
great stuff Crims
Shine on!
22nd Mar 2012 4:11am
ty Eamon you made me smile with your comment I should have my muse cuffed and collared to the wall lol..peace Crim :)
22nd Mar 2012 2:27pm
Yes girl hold'um down do what you have to so that muse learns who's the boss!
gypsy red
gypsy red
22nd Mar 2012 6:47pm
lol Gypsy you made my day and put a big smile on my face with your comment.. ty :)
