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The Tattoed Lady And The Bald Headed Man
There they go
They're at it again
Fussing and fighting
All night long because
Neither one will give in
Their story's a sad one
They're off and on again
Living a lie and living in sin
Deep into partying
Doing drugs again
They got arrested together
He got released but
She was held instead
She cursed her totally
bad luck with men
Little did the tatooed lady know
Things were getting worse
Than she could have believed
Her bald headed lover
Turned out to be a terrible thief
She got the shock of her life
When she was released
And got home to find
She'd been abandoned
And left for broke
They're at it again
Fussing and fighting
All night long because
Neither one will give in
Their story's a sad one
They're off and on again
Living a lie and living in sin
Deep into partying
Doing drugs again
They got arrested together
He got released but
She was held instead
She cursed her totally
bad luck with men
Little did the tatooed lady know
Things were getting worse
Than she could have believed
Her bald headed lover
Turned out to be a terrible thief
She got the shock of her life
When she was released
And got home to find
She'd been abandoned
And left for broke
Published 13th Jul 2022
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13th Jul 2022 9:49pm
Not a very nice situation to be in. Hope the bastard ends up in jail again....for a long time....
This happened to someone else but I still hope he is caught and punished. I'm sad to say she wound up in prison on her pending charges.
13th Jul 2022 11:58pm
Hello F,
This is a nice writing with sad end. But it is a lesson itself. I love.the flow of it with skirmishes and conflict. I wrote two poems- An inked girl is about her tatooes and her admiration in the ink. Another poem is about the piercings and their importance and significance. I may post them once. I wrote kinky and erotic stuff but shy to post.
Love,
KS
This is a nice writing with sad end. But it is a lesson itself. I love.the flow of it with skirmishes and conflict. I wrote two poems- An inked girl is about her tatooes and her admiration in the ink. Another poem is about the piercings and their importance and significance. I may post them once. I wrote kinky and erotic stuff but shy to post.
Love,
KS
11th Aug 2022 1:21am
19th Jul 2022 12:47pm
Very interesting couple and story. I think I've known some others like them over the last few years.
11th Aug 2022 1:23am
Thank you very much. I'm glad you found my poem interesting. I appreciate your letting me know.
10th Aug 2022 11:27pm
11th Aug 2022 1:26am
11th Aug 2022 4:59am
Dear F,
When I say "contemporary", I don't mean the (dreaded) Rupi Kaur kind of contemporary. I meant creative and readable.
:-)
-Ted
When I say "contemporary", I don't mean the (dreaded) Rupi Kaur kind of contemporary. I meant creative and readable.
:-)
-Ted
11th Aug 2022 7:59am
