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Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
I continue taking his direction, bending over deeply and low. Letting him see my curves accentuating and swearing he might be able to detect that eager engorgement of my feminine essence centered between my legs. I am certain those spasms can be seen as rubbing against my tight shorts I am so excited and throbbing in my own right. The young depths of my soul needing to be plunged into. I am surely dripping now, I can feel it running outside of me seeking a marathon where he finishes in me violently. I am such a slut but these hormones cannot be denied. I need to be taught a lesson by a mature cock that has seen so much. Youngs guys are desperate to feel my heat and fluids flowing but not able to hold out against such an assault. I need the long game, shoved deep inside torturing me not to cum first. I am becoming a little whore so fast and I continue to try and hide this from the onlookers but they sniff around like they know that this young pussy is desperate to be taken. My innocence destroyed in a flurry of fantasies that would have me committed trying to fix me. But there is only one fix for me and it's bulging between his legs waiting to shove between mine. Mark says 'hey' startling me from my daydream as he put his hand on my ass again and says like this. You are fucking right, like this... geezus there is no stopping the seeping now and I see it on his face that he needs to instruct me deeper. So much deeper. Apparently my fuck me eyes totally give me away. Suddenly he grabs me and says that's enough. I look up at him with doe eyes... tearing up. 'I'm sorry, hanging my head' yeah, not sorry... I still want that cock and I will cry for it. I will beg for it. Just teach me all the exercises you know. He is still throbbing but he kneels next to me, perhaps painfully and says it's okay. His hand on my shoulder as I lean back breathing so close to his mouth that he can taste it. And it tastes like a young girl's desire, the most powerful thing in the world. You are thinking this girl is way too young... and I am thinking I just want that cock. Which thought is stronger? I know the answer and you will too soon because I am not leaving until you press me and I build your muscles bigger... So much bigger. This little slut just needs to be taken by strong mature hands with the staying power I need so much.
This climax is building and this eager slut needs the finale. Without it I am not sure I can see tomorrow... But I have total faith in my young pussy to attract the rooster's call, still I want to feel it inside me. Claws and all... pecking at me relentlessly. My Mom always said I am an old soul and I suppose this old soul needs to be taught a lesson or two or three quickly. I know my parents would not approve but I cannot help it. Perhaps I am just an eager slut but does that make me bad, probably. I deliberately run into him again forcing him to grab me around the waist, my eyes closed taking in that grasp. I put my hand behind me grabbing him and stroking, he is startled but leans in anyway. I slip my hand upward and down into his pants grabbing him. He sighs 'wait' but doesn't stop me as I start stroking up and down. Oh god, how the pulsing ripples through me to the clit and beyond. Will he teach me a lesson or not, I hope so. My innocent look, head looking to the side staring with big dreamy eyes just invades his brain and I feel him weakening under my resolve. I of course lean down and place my mouth near his cock gazing up submissively. This is simply irresistible, I know this already at my young age. I suppose I am a fast learner, they always said so - an A student and in this I will be too. What good is a physical trainer who does not push into you is my thought. Like any schoolgirl fantasy, or maybe that's just me. I want to be taken forcefully with masculine power. I want to cum uncontrollably on a hard cock like I have masturbated to so many times. I feel like all my time at home is spent locked in my room stroking myself, trying to calm myself and these hormones. But there is only one calm to be had in me and that is a hot cock pouring out while eager hands grasping my hips tight. One thing is for certain and that is I am ready to explode on myself, on him, on everyone.
This climax is building and this eager slut needs the finale. Without it I am not sure I can see tomorrow... But I have total faith in my young pussy to attract the rooster's call, still I want to feel it inside me. Claws and all... pecking at me relentlessly. My Mom always said I am an old soul and I suppose this old soul needs to be taught a lesson or two or three quickly. I know my parents would not approve but I cannot help it. Perhaps I am just an eager slut but does that make me bad, probably. I deliberately run into him again forcing him to grab me around the waist, my eyes closed taking in that grasp. I put my hand behind me grabbing him and stroking, he is startled but leans in anyway. I slip my hand upward and down into his pants grabbing him. He sighs 'wait' but doesn't stop me as I start stroking up and down. Oh god, how the pulsing ripples through me to the clit and beyond. Will he teach me a lesson or not, I hope so. My innocent look, head looking to the side staring with big dreamy eyes just invades his brain and I feel him weakening under my resolve. I of course lean down and place my mouth near his cock gazing up submissively. This is simply irresistible, I know this already at my young age. I suppose I am a fast learner, they always said so - an A student and in this I will be too. What good is a physical trainer who does not push into you is my thought. Like any schoolgirl fantasy, or maybe that's just me. I want to be taken forcefully with masculine power. I want to cum uncontrollably on a hard cock like I have masturbated to so many times. I feel like all my time at home is spent locked in my room stroking myself, trying to calm myself and these hormones. But there is only one calm to be had in me and that is a hot cock pouring out while eager hands grasping my hips tight. One thing is for certain and that is I am ready to explode on myself, on him, on everyone.
Author's Note
This is exactly how it came out of my mind, no editing whatsoever so I hope it represents my thoughts well. I really appreciate any feedback. X
Part 2... of more. ;)
Part 2... of more. ;)
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Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
12th Jul 2022 10:09pm
There fucking better be a 3. You can't leave me like this lol
Awesome read you minx
Love and light
Ron xx
Awesome read you minx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
12th Jul 2022 10:19pm
lol, for you Ron I promise a third now, okay? ;) Would I leave you like this? Don't answer that, I am a sadist and a masochist. lol Some of everything really. Because I love to be tortured but I love to torture. Old school European style, the kind of torture that puts you on your knees, and me too. Always the minx... Sigh, I have so many needs - it's just not fair. What did I do to deserve this punishment? Perhaps my punishment for being an angel... lol I don't know... Punish me.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
12th Jul 2022 10:18pm
This part is different. Much more insight into a young woman's mind. Desperately needing that giant Cock to fill her void merging fantasy and reality. I like the way she describes how she got to this place and how she can't be fixed. The only fixing is fantastic fucking deep and plunging. This is a totally smoldering write showing real erotic skills and diabolical lust.
Poem of the Month
Sizzling BIG LIKE
Poem of the Month
Sizzling BIG LIKE
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12th Jul 2022 10:28pm
Every part of me is different. It requires one hell of a work out to explore this. A young woman's mind is far worse than you can understand. At least mine... I want my fantasies to be reality and I am willing to push the issue, for you to push the issue into me. lol 'She' lol yes... That's me. lol I cannot be fixed but I would love it if you try hard. Deep comments I love so much... Poem of the month, I love it...
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 00:27am
Letting a young girl down would be tragedy, at least in my mind. lol That is a wetness that soaks your soul and everything else too. But the tongue, oh god... It was designed for me. I want to cause discomfort, perhaps that's terrible but everywhere I go I want to feel life throbbing around me. Hardened hands definitely got this. Soft hands are just not enough... Decadent, that's what I always to be... So rich that you will never need anything more... ;) ever...
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Anonymous
12th Jul 2022 11:14pm
A strong continuation of the story! The piece has continuity and the kind of honest, highly descriptive, raw emotion that appeals to both sexes. Excellent!
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 00:30am
I really hoped it would be a strong continuation, God knows it was for me but maybe I'm easy. lol Not that easy damnit. Honest, highly descriptive emotion, that is definitely me... I love that you feel it and that it would appeal to both sexes. All about equal opportunity pleasure. I very much appreciate both and all the passion they bring in different ways. But really yeah, I am into guys.... It's just a preference but I can be convinced otherwise, I am sure.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 3:16am
Oh Lord....
Me: Type type type. Delete delete delete.
I don't need a gym to work you out!
Me: Type type type. Delete delete delete.
I don't need a gym to work you out!
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 3:51pm
Haha. Type type type. Delete delete delete. I love distracting your mind, causing mayhem and thoughts of... What a great physical trainer I make. Training the trainer. ;) I am the best workout you can get so you don't need a gym with me around. Just work me out... constantly... Show me that masculine strength, bench press me. Curl me, and anything else you want to do adding new exercises all the time.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 6:58am
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 3:52pm
I am made of so many contradictions, and any position is good for me. Including Juxtaposition. lol So glad you could share in my sexy thoughts. Just trying to give a glimpse into my mind when at the gym, and everywhere else. ;) So many needs that have to be worked out. It would definitely be a waste to not take as many sessions as possible. To work out a young body thoroughly... to really work up a sweat. Working myself up now. lol
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 7:11am
Very hot and sexy. I like the line "I am such a slut but these hormones cannot be denied". Something very freeing about that.
Great follow up, friend 😁
Great follow up, friend 😁
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 3:55pm
I am really you happy you liked the follow-up... so far. ;) Oh yes! when those hormones override all inhibitions there is definitely something freeing about that. It's so thrilling to be bad. The best excuse ever to get into 'trouble'. lol I just couldn't help it... 'hor'mones... Yes I need that so much. Internal dialogue is not enough. I need someone to train hard with me. Really be a phenomenal workout. I love it when I feel small next to a guy... that's such a turn on for me. ;) But I am one hell of a workout. Just saying. :p
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 11:19pm
Xinaskirt,
The mystery of suspense within this story is the sweetness. How does he feel with this surprise? Can he handle it within her hands? Is the joy of the dick sick within his mind? This is what the story presented to me as I read it. This is truly a eye catcher. Basic written brilliance.
The mystery of suspense within this story is the sweetness. How does he feel with this surprise? Can he handle it within her hands? Is the joy of the dick sick within his mind? This is what the story presented to me as I read it. This is truly a eye catcher. Basic written brilliance.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
14th Jul 2022 00:54am
More suspense to come my dear Birchel. ;) I love that you think it's the sweetness, that's very sweet indeed. So many great questions, how would you feel with this surprise? ;) I can definitely imagine what is in his mind too. I know what will be soon. lol I want you thinking what would I do?... So happy it caught your eye and thank you for the wonderful thoughtful comment. Basic written brilliance is awesome. High five... ;)
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14th Jul 2022 6:23am
High Five as well and thank u. Byituraszawyadiwer! And, I would find it a shocker, but, so much that the worthy.
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14th Jul 2022 3:42pm
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14th Jul 2022 8:40pm
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15th Jul 2022 2:24am
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
13th Jul 2022 11:43pm
Dear X,
The flow of your story with your feelings and excitement is of high pressure. You build up the heat and behave like a little hot baby to be fucked hard and exert all her heat. You are a great storyteller. The story I wrote is of a 26-year-old girl in heavy-weight exercise. She had tough hard muscles. I don't know what was going on. Her coach knew her better. She got interested in me. He mentioned that she is full of energy and spirit after. exercise. she is someone who needs a guy like you to help her to take her off the heat and give her the best time to satisfy her to the core of her heart. She also wanted matter guy than her to handle her and keep her in her shoes. I love your story. I am sure it has the third part also. I look forward.to it.
Hugs and kisses,
KS
The flow of your story with your feelings and excitement is of high pressure. You build up the heat and behave like a little hot baby to be fucked hard and exert all her heat. You are a great storyteller. The story I wrote is of a 26-year-old girl in heavy-weight exercise. She had tough hard muscles. I don't know what was going on. Her coach knew her better. She got interested in me. He mentioned that she is full of energy and spirit after. exercise. she is someone who needs a guy like you to help her to take her off the heat and give her the best time to satisfy her to the core of her heart. She also wanted matter guy than her to handle her and keep her in her shoes. I love your story. I am sure it has the third part also. I look forward.to it.
Hugs and kisses,
KS
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
14th Jul 2022 00:56am
So much feeling and excitement. I had to take multiple breaks writing this one. lol That's all I am going to say about that. 'little hot baby' I love it. That sounds so cute but super sexy. I love that you like the story so much, especially being very much a stream of consciousness write with no real planning at all. Just my thoughts... :p There is always tons of heat in them. 'She needs you to help her to take her heat off and give her the best time to satisfy her' Now how exactly did you do that KS? Inquiring minds want to know. lol 'to the core' Oh yes! always hit the core... just watch out for love bites in the heat of passion. Can't help it sometimes, it definitely means you are doing something right though. There is a third, fourth, fifth... :p Hugs and kisses back. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me. I love that.
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14th Jul 2022 3:04pm
My dear X,
I must appreciate your writing skills that are spontaneous and passion to express as first hand. I agree one have to take breaks to write as sometime hand, mind, heart and spirit don't synchronize as body might be playing in its own coherent way. I am the same way, I write what I do, observe and feel without any garnishing. This is what my friend used to tell me that work out infuses so much passion, heat and excitement, I have to take it off to be normal. I want a man who can really take care of me after work out. She was in heavy weight with strong muscles and stamina as well. She had her own ways to take the heat off. She would be either pro-sexual, pan-sexual or submissive to find out the outlet to her built-up heat. My role was to find my happiness and satisfaction in her contentment. She on the driver seat to lead to her needs. It was much of fun with Rhonda, her name. Rhonda's satisfaction was my goal. She is happy, I am happy and we are very happy. We didn't have sense of competition. We were not envy rather than complementary to appreciate and compliment each other. I can answer your Question- "Now how exactly did you do that KS?" in PM. Please pm me with more details what exactly you would like to know.
Hugs, kisses and love bites,
KS
I must appreciate your writing skills that are spontaneous and passion to express as first hand. I agree one have to take breaks to write as sometime hand, mind, heart and spirit don't synchronize as body might be playing in its own coherent way. I am the same way, I write what I do, observe and feel without any garnishing. This is what my friend used to tell me that work out infuses so much passion, heat and excitement, I have to take it off to be normal. I want a man who can really take care of me after work out. She was in heavy weight with strong muscles and stamina as well. She had her own ways to take the heat off. She would be either pro-sexual, pan-sexual or submissive to find out the outlet to her built-up heat. My role was to find my happiness and satisfaction in her contentment. She on the driver seat to lead to her needs. It was much of fun with Rhonda, her name. Rhonda's satisfaction was my goal. She is happy, I am happy and we are very happy. We didn't have sense of competition. We were not envy rather than complementary to appreciate and compliment each other. I can answer your Question- "Now how exactly did you do that KS?" in PM. Please pm me with more details what exactly you would like to know.
Hugs, kisses and love bites,
KS
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14th Jul 2022 3:46pm
Or perhaps they synchronize too well getting you all worked up and needing relief then and there. That's the kind of breaks I am talking about. ;) There are so many different roles to take in getting rid of that built up heat. And making someone else happy has so many rewards. The joy you can get from that is profound. And it's so beautiful to be complementary with someone. Definitely love bites. ;) Hugs and kisses...
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14th Jul 2022 5:29pm
Dear X,
We never worked out to follow each other. She would come around me to find out about me and work out. She always liked me because I was open and admired her tough muscled body. She liked me being a sprinter. She mentioned that she doesn't want a muscle man since she is with muscles. We used to have Friday evening or Saturday morning to spend a good amount of time on work out. Go in the pool for some time. Come home after working out and give her a massage while being on the floor with her minimal clothes. Gradually, she would get rid of clothes and ask for a good massage. That builds up the heat and share, care and indulge in wild playfulness on Saturday with no rush and dedicate our Saturday to each other. It depends on her needs. Sometimes, she would want to go down on her to give her dedicated cunnilingus. She would get a few orgasms and then ask me to pound her hard until she is as dead as a door nail. Then she would be more sweet, loving and caring. She becomes a true woman rather than an amazing woman. I can see the change before, after work out and her aggressive approach after work out and them docile woman after a good session of love-making. Such extensive sessions used to be on Saturday. Generally, on Friday we meet in the evening in the gym, go for walk or drink at the pub. Have just one drink. Come home and play music with wine. Take shower together and indulge in intimate movement. That time, she was more like a giver. Flatio and them riding playfully. She plays as a pro. We used to meet once a week or for two weeks. She liked that I wasn't selfish, where I seek my orgasm. She liked to show the care to her and take her to the peak for her orgasm. The more orgasms she had, more she was docile, sweet and loving. She was a wonderful woman. I have great sweet memories of her. I hope you find a vivid picture of our relationship. I tried not to be steamy here. I hope your understand better. Do you want to be my co-pen to share my other stories too?.
Love and hits with deep bites.
KS
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We never worked out to follow each other. She would come around me to find out about me and work out. She always liked me because I was open and admired her tough muscled body. She liked me being a sprinter. She mentioned that she doesn't want a muscle man since she is with muscles. We used to have Friday evening or Saturday morning to spend a good amount of time on work out. Go in the pool for some time. Come home after working out and give her a massage while being on the floor with her minimal clothes. Gradually, she would get rid of clothes and ask for a good massage. That builds up the heat and share, care and indulge in wild playfulness on Saturday with no rush and dedicate our Saturday to each other. It depends on her needs. Sometimes, she would want to go down on her to give her dedicated cunnilingus. She would get a few orgasms and then ask me to pound her hard until she is as dead as a door nail. Then she would be more sweet, loving and caring. She becomes a true woman rather than an amazing woman. I can see the change before, after work out and her aggressive approach after work out and them docile woman after a good session of love-making. Such extensive sessions used to be on Saturday. Generally, on Friday we meet in the evening in the gym, go for walk or drink at the pub. Have just one drink. Come home and play music with wine. Take shower together and indulge in intimate movement. That time, she was more like a giver. Flatio and them riding playfully. She plays as a pro. We used to meet once a week or for two weeks. She liked that I wasn't selfish, where I seek my orgasm. She liked to show the care to her and take her to the peak for her orgasm. The more orgasms she had, more she was docile, sweet and loving. She was a wonderful woman. I have great sweet memories of her. I hope you find a vivid picture of our relationship. I tried not to be steamy here. I hope your understand better. Do you want to be my co-pen to share my other stories too?.
Love and hits with deep bites.
KS
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
14th Jul 2022 8:08pm
I must admit I try not to get muscular in the sense that it really shows. I am very fit and quite strong, but I think there is femininity in not taking that too far. The pool is lovely... and to give or receive a massage is divine. Especially a body-to-body massage. One where every part of you touches every part of the other person. Pound her hard till she is dead as a door nail. lol Boy you would have your work cut out for you. ;) Cunnilingus is great way to get her more sweet, loving, and caring... Oh definitely... The more... the more she was docile, sweet, and loving. Yes... amazing how that works isn't it? :p I think I understand all too well, except the trying not to be too steamy part... I don't understand that at all. ;) I am sure you have many stories; I know I do...
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Dear X,
Well, I always appreciate the feminine side of the woman barring some occasions when she is dominant and needs to be controlled to balance her to the feminine ground. It happens when she is in extensive workouts and her feminine energy is very high but her appearance is masculine. It was kind of a contrast. She implores for help. I had to soothe her by getting in the pool and showering together. Massage her then body-to-body massage where we have the magic touch, run and feel every part without apprehension. The oil smoothens us. Our bodies wrap around like snakes, and our hardwood floor gets. like glass as our bodies dance around. Our breaths cross and follow in tandem. Our relentless kissing evokes passion. Well oiled body and our initial body parts are very inviting where we end up in foreplay and 69ing for a good amount of time. She surrenders for multiple orgasms and then she would ride to get her pleasure or spread her legs wide like eagle wings to enter and stroke deep and hard. It resulted in her screams and orgasms. She would crave to have me fill with my cum and then she stretches herself and kisses me accordingly to award me for the moment of accomplishment. We end up sleeping in that mode. when we wake up we just hug, smile and have deep sighs of appreciation. Silence is our best communication. Her womanliness is above par and her sweetness is beyond imagination. That was a most hilarious moment for me. She wasn't aware of her that side. I never told her about it also. The feminine nature flows in unconsciously. When I say steamy, I mean to keep our conversation more erotic than porno with unpleasant comments. She was a tall white skin girl with red hair and an interest in dark and brown skin. Are you on any other platform or website where you subscribe to your erotic stories? I don't know what destiny is holding but we may share a lot without being physically present with each other. Certainly, I look for a co-pen. I wait for the next parts of the story.
Hugs and love bites.
KS
Well, I always appreciate the feminine side of the woman barring some occasions when she is dominant and needs to be controlled to balance her to the feminine ground. It happens when she is in extensive workouts and her feminine energy is very high but her appearance is masculine. It was kind of a contrast. She implores for help. I had to soothe her by getting in the pool and showering together. Massage her then body-to-body massage where we have the magic touch, run and feel every part without apprehension. The oil smoothens us. Our bodies wrap around like snakes, and our hardwood floor gets. like glass as our bodies dance around. Our breaths cross and follow in tandem. Our relentless kissing evokes passion. Well oiled body and our initial body parts are very inviting where we end up in foreplay and 69ing for a good amount of time. She surrenders for multiple orgasms and then she would ride to get her pleasure or spread her legs wide like eagle wings to enter and stroke deep and hard. It resulted in her screams and orgasms. She would crave to have me fill with my cum and then she stretches herself and kisses me accordingly to award me for the moment of accomplishment. We end up sleeping in that mode. when we wake up we just hug, smile and have deep sighs of appreciation. Silence is our best communication. Her womanliness is above par and her sweetness is beyond imagination. That was a most hilarious moment for me. She wasn't aware of her that side. I never told her about it also. The feminine nature flows in unconsciously. When I say steamy, I mean to keep our conversation more erotic than porno with unpleasant comments. She was a tall white skin girl with red hair and an interest in dark and brown skin. Are you on any other platform or website where you subscribe to your erotic stories? I don't know what destiny is holding but we may share a lot without being physically present with each other. Certainly, I look for a co-pen. I wait for the next parts of the story.
Hugs and love bites.
KS
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
15th Jul 2022 2:15pm
Everyone has the potential to be dominant. I actually wrote something on that recently, perhaps I will post. Pool and shower are both lovely. Nothing like oil and hard wood in my mind to get things going, and relentless kissing. Screams and orgasms, I am thoroughly distracted now. :p 'fill with my' there is no better way to complete such a time together. I have not really posted anything anywhere else. Kind of still surprised I do here. :p Red head, uh oh... lol You are doing very well with story, do you need a co-pen? ;)
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17th Jul 2022 5:57am
Well, the story goes well you. Yes, I do need a co-pen. I have written about 500pcs of poetry. I have written over erotic 100 stories. I want a co-pen or editor to get them all published. I plan to write three biographical books. One on my friend, she was a product of one night stand, my grandma, my father and my autobiography. And few.historical stories on human relation.
Let's see.if I can find one in you.
Love
KS
Let's see.if I can find one in you.
Love
KS
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Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
14th Jul 2022 2:24am
You might be writing these primarily for the guys, but I'm just gonna add a little female "hell yeah!" here... 🔥
Ok, time for me to go have a workout now. 😉 Carry on.
❤️k
Ok, time for me to go have a workout now. 😉 Carry on.
❤️k
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
14th Jul 2022 1:25pm
FINALLY, another female perspective. lol Oh no, I definitely wrote this for you too BT. :p You have made me so happy. Hell yeah, absolutely. It's always time for a workout. :p Just don't hurt him too bad.. (that's a joke, do your worst just don't break the important parts) I love that you liked this and that you stopped by and shared your thoughts with me. That's perfect... ;)
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
14th Jul 2022 3:15am
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14th Jul 2022 1:40pm
'right into your tunnel' yeah, lol... I am definitely thinking about trains now. I love riding the train. It's always a great way to let off some steam. There are so many ways to do bad things on the train. I have done them all. I really need a train right now. :p
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15th Jul 2022 9:36am
just wait right there
my locomotive is powering through!
and gone are the days of "I think I can..."
with the likes of you waiting at the end of my line
"I know i can" "I Know i can" "I KNow i can" "I KNOw i can" "I KNOW i can" "I KNOW I Can" "I KNOW I CAn" "I KNOW I CAN"
torpedoing through hills creating my own tracks just to get to
xinas' underskirt
my locomotive is powering through!
and gone are the days of "I think I can..."
with the likes of you waiting at the end of my line
"I know i can" "I Know i can" "I KNow i can" "I KNOw i can" "I KNOW i can" "I KNOW I Can" "I KNOW I CAn" "I KNOW I CAN"
torpedoing through hills creating my own tracks just to get to
xinas' underskirt
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15th Jul 2022 2:16pm
I love that attitude, 'I know I can' that's how you accomplish anything, it starts with I know I can. ;) Create your own tracks to get to those goals. Ah yes! it's lovely and hot down there under the skirt. Did you notice that xinaskirt is an anagram for KristinaX. ;)
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18th Jul 2022 4:42am
O yes I know its the very badgirl you
KX told me
but one thing I would like to know
is how can she and your superpower be on this site at presactly the same time?
KX told me
but one thing I would like to know
is how can she and your superpower be on this site at presactly the same time?
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
18th Jul 2022 2:50pm
One in the same my dear CI, there is no separation. Perhaps I just need to protect some people from this side because it can be dangerous. lol
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
14th Jul 2022 9:16pm
Well if that doesn't inspire people to go to the gym I don't what does.
This is totally immersive, like those letters to Penthouse (for those of us old enough from a different time).
Insanely hot and titillating (parts 1 and 2).
Time to pump some iron!
Great write.
This is totally immersive, like those letters to Penthouse (for those of us old enough from a different time).
Insanely hot and titillating (parts 1 and 2).
Time to pump some iron!
Great write.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
14th Jul 2022 10:14pm
I am all about inspiring people Wally. ;) Physical fitness is so important, so I want to immerse you into my workout. It will be very hard but I promise to keep you coming again. That's the best way to stay in shape, staying motivated. I love pumping iron, getting pumped. I am sure you see a little bit of that love here in my writing. ;) Thanks for stopping by for a workout with me Wally. I love that.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
15th Jul 2022 00:12am
A tour de force. Inspired and inspiring. You are simply amazing in depth, skill, and feminine erotica. You inspire a wholesome lust that is so incredibly rare, stemming from a purity of spirit that blinds me in orgasm. You have changed me and I find the changes liberating. Your light shines brightest in the dark, mistress of the night.
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I am a really interesting tour to take. ;p I mean I am a great tour guide too, taking you to all the darkest places. Places most won't go, it's just too deep and it's easy to be afraid of going there. I can understand that. :p For me, it's super thrilling going to those places though. Feminine erotica... perfect. Wholesome lust is the best kind for sure, I love inspiring the whole. Purity of spirit but oh so dirty, it does make for a great orgasm. Lighting the way for you Shaman with all my witchcraft. 'You have changed me and I find the changes liberating' Now that is just a beautiful thing to say. I really like that a lot.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
15th Jul 2022 5:35pm
That was a great write.
I loved the way you described your... Lust
One thing is for sure: Gym day will never be the same again.
I loved the way you described your... Lust
One thing is for sure: Gym day will never be the same again.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
15th Jul 2022 5:42pm
Gym day is everyday right? You need to be worked out thoroughly. Ah, my lust, what a subject that is. So much lust - there is no way to contain that. And I want to make you mad, so mad that you will show me just how insignificant I am, how significant I am. I am always in the mood for a workout.... one that makes you wonder how depraved I am really... so very... beyond the acceptable limits for sure. such that anything is not off limits... damn... lol
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
15th Jul 2022 6:06pm
Beyond the acceptable limits you say?
But what are the acceptable limits?
Are there acceptable limits when it comes to pleasure?
Or the question is if this is about power or pleasure?
But what are the acceptable limits?
Are there acceptable limits when it comes to pleasure?
Or the question is if this is about power or pleasure?
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
15th Jul 2022 6:16pm
I would like to think there are no limits but perhaps people are reluctant to explore those limits. I understand that, I know I am crazy... the more restricted, the more I want it... power, pleasure - what's the difference.. I just want to.... okay, that's probably a good point to stop. lol
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
15th Jul 2022 9:35pm
Why is it generally thought that a female that like sex, hungers for it, needs it, that they are a slut, whore, or nympho. There is nothing written in nature that states a male is supposed to be any more hornier or demanding of sex than a female. There is nothing that says a young person can't be as talented as an older one. We was well schooled at a very young age by a lady that took time out and taught us things. She introduced us to like minded people that could separate sex from love. There is a lot to be said about anyone that can simply enjoy sex without the entanglements of a relationship. When a woman acknowledges that they, themselves, get their own version of an erection and we don't mean the drips. It all makes life more interesting and the human experience so much more worth living.. Super tight work Lil X
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
15th Jul 2022 10:06pm
Yes, that's a good question. You can call me a nympho though, I certainly won't get offended because I already know that. :p Girls are plenty horny, more so. lol Well I suppose I can only speak for myself but you get the point. That sounds like a very interesting curriculum you were studying ME. That's my kind of coursework and homework for sure. Introduced you to like minded people, damn she sounds like an awesome teacher. I must admit I do want some kind of connection though before just jumping into sex. Yes, there is definitely a version for sure... With all the throbbing and sensitivity you could possibly imagine. Definitely makes things more interesting and worth living, and how thrilling it is when constantly consumed by passion... at the school, in the park, in the alley, in the cemetery, at church... the list is too long but you get the point. Damn... Trying to calm down now. lol Loving the super tight work always... always keeping it tight. ;)
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
18th Jul 2022 3:22pm
Innocence that was never innocent gone astray.
Much needed smut highly stylized for efficient ejaculation
Much needed smut highly stylized for efficient ejaculation
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
18th Jul 2022 3:50pm
How quickly innocence can go astray. Innocence definitely has expiry date, for some it is much quicker but it always expires in the end. And the death of innocence makes for the most obscene things to play out in every way, at least it did with me. Smut has it's place doesn't it? it certainly does for me... But I have a super filthy mind... and it comes out in so many ways. ;)
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
18th Jul 2022 4:03pm
Dear, Kristina
Oh the places our passionate, sensual, mischievous minds go That sounds like an adult Dr. Seuss title. I enjoy the amount of time spent in the head, fantasizing... it enhances the build...especially when it's one-sided. The reader's left to fill in the blanks as to what the4 trainer may be thinking.
Overall an enthralling write, Brava❣
Oh the places our passionate, sensual, mischievous minds go That sounds like an adult Dr. Seuss title. I enjoy the amount of time spent in the head, fantasizing... it enhances the build...especially when it's one-sided. The reader's left to fill in the blanks as to what the4 trainer may be thinking.
Overall an enthralling write, Brava❣
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
18th Jul 2022 4:15pm
Ah yes Dr. Seuss is proper dirty. Every place the mind can go the body can follow. Live those fantasies always, make them 'come' true. I debated putting in what the trainer is thinking but I think I will revisit that later for sure. That was already in the plans. ;) But I love building things in every way so that the climax can be explosive. I always want an explosive climax that makes me shake and blows my mind. All worked up again... :p
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
18th Jul 2022 4:18pm
I don't think you need the trainers perspective. That's the fun making it up.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
22nd Jul 2022 1:53pm
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
22nd Jul 2022 3:00am
This guy never had a chance at resistance. Neither do I. Your seduction here has the power of Morgana Le Fey with all her magic spells. I loved the cascade of erotic suspense as it built to the point of no return. Just imagining part three has me on the edge of my cock. You really know how to get a guy under your thumb. And having you in a prone position sounds like heaven on earth. On to #3.
Deepening into you,
John
Deepening into you,
John
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
22nd Jul 2022 2:03pm
You know it GM. Definitely never had a chance. lol Morgana Le Fey with all her magic spells, absolutely love that. I have been called a witch here, I guess because I love casting spells. Especially ones that feed my lust and passion, and others too. Oh yes! erotic suspense has a way of building to the breaking point; it feeds on itself and others too. ;) I truly hope part 3 is up to your high standards of lust and passion then. But I like having a man under my thumb, or more appropriately me under his... * nevermind * you get the point. ;) So many positions... so many ways to get to heaven. I look forward to you continuing this journey with me.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
17th Aug 2022 5:38pm
Confident women who know what they want and go after it are so appealing and very attractive.
In this world it's wiser and safer for the man never to assume consent but to wait for the woman to give it before he proceeds.
The man's hesitancy and inaction on his urges is totally understandable because he needed to be cautious.
So since there was no other option but for the woman to take the lead, there was no way for the man to know if she shared his sentiments.
Contrary to the story's title it was him who ended up taking her direction.
The way this played out this guy didn't have a chance to resist.
He must have said to himself: "Did this woman just reach down and grab my ..."
In this world it's wiser and safer for the man never to assume consent but to wait for the woman to give it before he proceeds.
The man's hesitancy and inaction on his urges is totally understandable because he needed to be cautious.
So since there was no other option but for the woman to take the lead, there was no way for the man to know if she shared his sentiments.
Contrary to the story's title it was him who ended up taking her direction.
The way this played out this guy didn't have a chance to resist.
He must have said to himself: "Did this woman just reach down and grab my ..."
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 2 - Taking his direction.
18th Aug 2022 2:20pm
Oh yes! that fiery passion that burns in a woman's soul is so powerful. And that strength shows through so many aspects of femininity. It's different from masculine power and strength but when the two combine it's truly magnificent.
Yes, that's true. These days some assumptions can get you into real trouble. And consent is of course very important but you also want spontaneity and chemistry, and to think you can communicate that consent in different ways whether it be kissing or whatever. So often things move to one extreme or another.
And yes it's understandable...
So yes, the woman had to send some strong signals to communicate her intent and needs. ;)
Haha, yes so true... Absolutely had to get what she needed. It definitely ended up being him taking the direction...
Resistance is futile. He definitely stood no chance. Once you start speaking the language of seduction, it's impossible not to listen. ;)
lol... yeah something like that. What did he think right at that moment... no doubt the thoughts moved much lower. And that hesitation crumbled as that need to be touched and to touch shot up so to speak.
Yes, that's true. These days some assumptions can get you into real trouble. And consent is of course very important but you also want spontaneity and chemistry, and to think you can communicate that consent in different ways whether it be kissing or whatever. So often things move to one extreme or another.
And yes it's understandable...
So yes, the woman had to send some strong signals to communicate her intent and needs. ;)
Haha, yes so true... Absolutely had to get what she needed. It definitely ended up being him taking the direction...
Resistance is futile. He definitely stood no chance. Once you start speaking the language of seduction, it's impossible not to listen. ;)
lol... yeah something like that. What did he think right at that moment... no doubt the thoughts moved much lower. And that hesitation crumbled as that need to be touched and to touch shot up so to speak.