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Paint canvases with me
Not Michelangelo, but ...
You are my mysterious artist,
You paint squares,
But we are in reality, circles.
I don't know your style yet,
cubism, baroque, romanticism...?
But I blissfully freeze,
And in it I lose my consciousness.
Your preliminary sketch
Has touched the secret locks,
In your art is a hidden handwriting,
Captivating heart and soul
Not a Botticelli renaissance,
And not da Vinci, not Monet,
But there is a special darkness
That tells me you died, and you live.
My sheets have long been written on,
On them the abyss of darkness,
Write yours in me, take me there
And paint canvases with me!
You are my mysterious artist,
You paint squares,
But we are in reality, circles.
I don't know your style yet,
cubism, baroque, romanticism...?
But I blissfully freeze,
And in it I lose my consciousness.
Your preliminary sketch
Has touched the secret locks,
In your art is a hidden handwriting,
Captivating heart and soul
Not a Botticelli renaissance,
And not da Vinci, not Monet,
But there is a special darkness
That tells me you died, and you live.
My sheets have long been written on,
On them the abyss of darkness,
Write yours in me, take me there
And paint canvases with me!
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Re. Paint canvases with me
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11th Jul 2022 9:17pm
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
11th Jul 2022 10:17pm
I love art. I wondered who would get all the art references. :)
Of course the body and sex is also a work of art. And somehow vampires made it in too if you look. lol I don't know where to start, you said so many lovely things. I adore getting a Wow and I love that you picked up an old soul feel, perhaps the renaissance period. When the world found inspiration again to push forward in new and exciting ways following some dark history. I often feel like I belong in another time so it can certainly come out in the expression of things. I loved the old world feel in Europe and feel I belong there. I liked the picture a lot, she certainly looks like a work of art doesn't she? I am so happy you understood this one and found it tantalizing. :)
Of course the body and sex is also a work of art. And somehow vampires made it in too if you look. lol I don't know where to start, you said so many lovely things. I adore getting a Wow and I love that you picked up an old soul feel, perhaps the renaissance period. When the world found inspiration again to push forward in new and exciting ways following some dark history. I often feel like I belong in another time so it can certainly come out in the expression of things. I loved the old world feel in Europe and feel I belong there. I liked the picture a lot, she certainly looks like a work of art doesn't she? I am so happy you understood this one and found it tantalizing. :)
Re. Paint canvases with me
11th Jul 2022 10:46pm
A picture paints a thousand words beautiful you would make the perfect canvas
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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11th Jul 2022 11:11pm
I know you love art in it's many forms, Ron. ;) There are so many wonderful ways to paint a picture isn't there? I adore that you think I would make the perfect canvas. That is such a super sweet thing to say, I love that. I always want to be an evolving work of art. Something you would never want to do without and paint in or on forever. ;)
Re. Paint canvases with me
11th Jul 2022 11:02pm
You write often of art and paintings living within you.
Must be be something in your past lives to bring you to this surface.
There is a lot of beauty in this picture, movement and vibe !
I'll paint you a masterpiece one day. I like the challenge of appealing to your discerning eye ..
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Must be be something in your past lives to bring you to this surface.
There is a lot of beauty in this picture, movement and vibe !
I'll paint you a masterpiece one day. I like the challenge of appealing to your discerning eye ..
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
11th Jul 2022 11:25pm
I am passionate about all kinds of art, I cannot imagine a world without it. So much beauty would be lost. Nature is a work of art too but what people have been able to do through crafts, painting, drawing, building, music, song, woodwork, sculptures, architecture, etc. is just incredible too. No doubt I have had many past lives that must have involved art. :) And I always want to be a work of art so I tried to find a picture that would represent that thought in some way. I think it works. ;) Wow, I don't know what to say about the masterpiece. That is such an amazing thing to say. Thank you!
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
12th Jul 2022 00:44am
God created an infinite number of pigments in order to capture the essence of passion and lust. From these he painted the geometry of Darkness perhaps to maintain a balance. She was named Lilith but the light commingling upon her flesh was irresistible. She tempted Lucifer and all the other angels, being cast out with them. She was a flawed creation in the eyes of heaven and her dark desires could not be contained. Still the Devil said you are a masterpiece and she would rather live in passion and pain always, accepted for who she is with all of her flaws; each being another facet with a darker hue. True perfection lies in imperfection, something she needed to be taught. I can think of no better way to paint this masterpiece than with firm strokes and the burning passion that resides in the blood as it courses through every part of the body painting the darkest desires for eternity.
I found this comment to be beautifully poetic. Thank you.
I found this comment to be beautifully poetic. Thank you.
Re. Paint canvases with me
12th Jul 2022 4:33am
I wish that was you in the photo. I wish I can paint your sexy beautiful naked body. Keep on writing.
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12th Jul 2022 1:48pm
I bet you could paint a masterpiece on a hot body Francisco. ;p Never been painted like that perhaps I should try... I don't think I could hold out long enough for it to be finished though. I would have to... * nevermind, innocent look *
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13th Jul 2022 2:36am
I will treat kindness and respect and your painted naked body will be sexy and beautiful.
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Re. Paint canvases with me
12th Jul 2022 4:45pm
“..And not da Vinci,….” Oh! The sorrow of a scorned “artiste”. Never getting the chance to let my wet brush slide along the delicate, smooth, contoured canvas that is KX. Leaving trails of pigments that tantalize the dark art aficionado.
“The most dangerous arrow, is that which hits the heart without a drop of blood.” —Unknown! LOL!
Excellent write. I surmise I would need two small puncture wounds on my neck to meet the basic qualification to convert you into a living dead “piece de resistance” masterpiece, Ms KX. : )
“The most dangerous arrow, is that which hits the heart without a drop of blood.” —Unknown! LOL!
Excellent write. I surmise I would need two small puncture wounds on my neck to meet the basic qualification to convert you into a living dead “piece de resistance” masterpiece, Ms KX. : )
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12th Jul 2022 5:13pm
Lol, oops I forgot about that. Always da Vinci. ;) 'chance to let my wet brush slide along the delicate, smooth, contoured canvas that is KX.' Damn, got really hot in here all of a sudden. That's quite seductive, I like that a lot. Dark art is the best... It leaves trails in the mind and on the body. That quote is so true... No doubt that is the most dangerous arrow. Just keep shooting that arrow and sticking it in until you get the blood. I can make those puncture wounds leading you into parts of the night you have never seen before. Ah yes, the resistance... it's futile. ;) for everyone in this case...
Re. Paint canvases with me
12th Jul 2022 7:06pm
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12th Jul 2022 7:13pm
It's the kind of painting I love the most. One with many colours and hues that are thick and can choke you or fill you to the breaking point. I want the paint to splatter on the wall and everything else. The type of painting you will never forget... Thanks for stopping by RRm1. That name seems so mechanical lol, like an android programmed for ... you know stuff. lol
Re. Paint canvases with me
12th Jul 2022 7:26pm
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12th Jul 2022 7:32pm
The turtle wins the race... When painting on the skin, take your time... Slow and determined can win the race. Ready to mop up the prolonged desire that comes... And covers the bed or floor or table or wherever... Often we run into it but to be slowed down in excruciating pain and ecstasy is really explosive...
Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
12th Jul 2022 11:50pm
The tender touch of a simple brush reduced to single hair to swirl the electric sensation, sensual and personal, is an intimacy of inspiration.
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
13th Jul 2022 00:04am
A single hair can make you come, that's a fact. And in such situations you feel every hair electrified by the current... moving through you. Such a brush is what I always look for in an artist.
Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
13th Jul 2022 1:30am
Ironically, I use non-latex gloves and paint with my hands, including body painting.
I find that loading the colors across the palm of my hand and slightly squeezing it and the opening it again and the waving my hand rapidly to sling the paint, allows me to create micro threads of multiple blacklight colors that interact to show gravity melding into intentionality.
I like intensity and random access as a pattern in an act of free will. Kissing the canvas....
I find that loading the colors across the palm of my hand and slightly squeezing it and the opening it again and the waving my hand rapidly to sling the paint, allows me to create micro threads of multiple blacklight colors that interact to show gravity melding into intentionality.
I like intensity and random access as a pattern in an act of free will. Kissing the canvas....
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
13th Jul 2022 2:01am
Now that sounds very interesting, where do you get these bodies to paint on? ;) I always find that the palm and squeezing is excellent at opening things... so many things with intensity and random access... especially when kissing the canvas. ;) things open real fast...
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13th Jul 2022 2:13am
Local Texas bodies mostly....I do wish the weekend conventions like Ropecraft or B.E.D Dallas would open again.
I've traveled to California, New Mexico, Louisiana, and Florida for participants.
Texas is easier. Local is simpler. In my own dungeon is perfect....I have a 26 x 42 foot art space with a balcony and hardpoints...
But, a travel sheet and a box of supplies can go anywhere....
I've traveled to California, New Mexico, Louisiana, and Florida for participants.
Texas is easier. Local is simpler. In my own dungeon is perfect....I have a 26 x 42 foot art space with a balcony and hardpoints...
But, a travel sheet and a box of supplies can go anywhere....
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Re. Paint canvases with me
13th Jul 2022 00:38am
So much art knowledge, I wonder how would that look in your own art. Seems like you are an experienced artist?
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13th Jul 2022 2:02am
I love art and I know enough to be dangerous I suppose. I used to draw but nothing I would really share. I have done some other art too but nothing I would really think of sharing. Still I been told I have an eye for art and I have many unique things especially from when I lived overseas growing up. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment, stopping by, and giving me your thoughts. I really appreciate it a lot. :)
Re. Paint canvases with me
13th Jul 2022 7:54pm
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13th Jul 2022 8:52pm
So you love art too ABS? That doesn't surprise me at all. I am so glad you enjoyed this one. People are the biggest work of art. Two people can make the most beautiful work of art possible in this world. To love is truly beautiful. It paints the world in more vibrant colours.
Re. Paint canvases with me
15th Jul 2022 2:43am
Awesome words from you! I like it when you delve into an idea (such as this) and work your thoughts around it. It is what stimulates our brains, besides the other parts of course. Lol.
Been a long time since I've played with the edible paints.... some are flavored. Yum.
Been a long time since I've played with the edible paints.... some are flavored. Yum.
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15th Jul 2022 4:00am
You wanted more love right? ;) I aim to please. I have so many ideas to work my thoughts around and I love stimulating brains and definitely other parts too. lol From the most base carnal instincts to the highest forms of art. Flavored edible paints, now that is a perfect art lesson for me. That clean up is going to take a long time, but it's going to be a very good time and intense lesson. ;)
Re. Paint canvases with me
15th Jul 2022 4:01pm
What a wonderful write, dear Kristina❣ In this passage you capture so well, one of my favorite thought exercises when reading poetry.
"In your art is a hidden handwriting,
Captivating heart and soul"
Looking for and basking in the hidden meaning of the poets words...how those words become interwoven into our own life experience. How the verse is imprinted, painted on our own bodies and souls.
I could ponder for days this passage,
"But there is a special darkness
That tells me you died, and you live
The perfect blend of sensuality and profundity.
Bravissima, sevgili şiir ve aşk tanrıçası❣
"In your art is a hidden handwriting,
Captivating heart and soul"
Looking for and basking in the hidden meaning of the poets words...how those words become interwoven into our own life experience. How the verse is imprinted, painted on our own bodies and souls.
I could ponder for days this passage,
"But there is a special darkness
That tells me you died, and you live
The perfect blend of sensuality and profundity.
Bravissima, sevgili şiir ve aşk tanrıçası❣
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
15th Jul 2022 4:14pm
"sevgili şiir ve aşk tanrıçası", bunu ne kadar sevdiğimi biliyorsun. güzel bir dildir. Senin de hissettiğini biliyorum. I have definitely lost of my knowledge some there, thanks for reviving me in ancient words that are so beautiful. I love languages. But the language of love and passion is universal. So many hidden meanings... Interwoven, imprinted, and painted... Oh yes! there is much to ponder. This complicated puzzle that always wants to be art. Perhaps you can see more than the surface, swimming to the depth and touching the soul. And so much to enjoy in the body of another. Sensuality in the profound experience... always coming for the canvas.
Re. Paint canvases with me
22nd Jul 2022 5:09am
There is no greater art than the human body. Love the image you selected and the invitation to paint your desirable canvases is sensually creative! xx
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
22nd Jul 2022 12:37pm
Totally agree NG, being the artist and art that you are I had kind of hoped you would read this one. Interesting enough an image wasn't that easy to find although that is coming from my super impatient perspective of looking for images. lol But that one looked like art, and that demure innocent look is irresistible right? :p But I love being the canvas for so many things. So much perverted art... ;) Thanks for stopping by NG, I really appreciate your thoughts a lot. :)
Re. Paint canvases with me
26th Jul 2022 12:17pm
Wow! Simply breathtakingly beautiful poetry... As gorgeous as you are... 🥀
You are truly an amazing poetess, Kristina.🌹😊
You are truly an amazing poetess, Kristina.🌹😊
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
26th Jul 2022 11:54pm
You left be breathless with your absolutely beautiful comment InDreamz. I don't really know what to say. :) Things have been pretty hard for me lately and you
really made me feel a little better with your amazing comment. So thank you for
giving that nice boost to my mood. I hope you know just how gorgeous you are and what an amazing poetess too. <3
really made me feel a little better with your amazing comment. So thank you for
giving that nice boost to my mood. I hope you know just how gorgeous you are and what an amazing poetess too. <3
Re. Paint canvases with me
31st Jul 2022 4:25pm
It's a lovely worded portrait, inviting that artist to come and create something beautiful, physical and spiritual almost. It's a gentle and lustful spill Kristina, one that fills our imaginations.
Outstanding stuff.
Outstanding stuff.
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
1st Aug 2022 1:43am
Damn Wally, you just know how to keep making me feeling good. Not sure I can handle all these at once. Just kidding, of course I can!!! ;) A worded portrait. I love that so much, that's perfect. But creating something beautiful, physical, and spiritual with someone now that's art. I can be gentle. :) You know LUSTFUL. lol And I love filling the imagination. I thought the girl in the pic was definitely a work of art. Embodies a general feminine almost innocent beauty that inspires lust and passion, right? Thanks you so much for the outstanding. That's amazing.
Re. Paint canvases with me
2nd Aug 2022 10:04pm
My cousin Poetspeak told me that artist's get all the fine quim.
He should know, it must be his art because that dude has them wrapped tight and I do mean tight. His apartment is like a rope store. Damn, I gotta start some of that art shit ....
He should know, it must be his art because that dude has them wrapped tight and I do mean tight. His apartment is like a rope store. Damn, I gotta start some of that art shit ....
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
2nd Aug 2022 10:22pm
Artists and musicians get all kinds of action right? That creative spirit spills over into everything, like sex... A rope store geez, how many girls does he have wrapped tight in there I wonder. Is that legal, I guess it depends on the girl. Get busy making some art damnit. Tied, art, girls, an artist... Yeah... I am all worked up now too. :p
Re. Paint canvases with me
2nd Aug 2022 10:10pm
You ought come visit me my way
Lots to do, food, music, museums and galleries galore.
There's this dude that's becoming pretty popular up here you'll want to catch. Paints and draws box heads. You gotta see them in person. I'll take you. What do you say ??
Awesome write
Lots to do, food, music, museums and galleries galore.
There's this dude that's becoming pretty popular up here you'll want to catch. Paints and draws box heads. You gotta see them in person. I'll take you. What do you say ??
Awesome write
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2nd Aug 2022 10:25pm
Well I do love awesome. Food, music, museums, galleries does sound pretty awesome too. Ah the ambiance of a big city... Oh that dude, I think I might know who you are talking about. Box heads, I definitely know then. :p What can I say... Thanks so much for stopping by to see me and sharing your thoughts. I love that.
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Re: Re. Paint canvases with me
6th Nov 2022 7:20pm
Ah yes! I know it is so I am happy you found this one. Showing some of my own love for art with this one. Ah, I am definitely going to have to look those up and check out the art for sure. You know how I love being creative. And I truly do love all forms of art as well. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me and sharing your thoughts. I love that.