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What A Difference A Day Makes.
Today
I let
words
create doubt
.
.
.
.
tomorrow,
I'll shine
in my truth.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 8th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Inspiration taken from the micropoetry category via the Word Play group
©Blu2022
©Blu2022
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- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
8th Jul 2022 5:37pm
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Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
8th Jul 2022 7:23pm
Would we see any light if it weren't for the shadows?
I don't go out of my way looking for difficulties, but having more good days than bad makes life easier.
Boundaries and letting go...
I don't go out of my way looking for difficulties, but having more good days than bad makes life easier.
Boundaries and letting go...
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It's something I'm truly working on.... Me, being a fucking horrible (epic, really) grudge holder, is so so so tiresome. Yes, I improve my boundary perimeters and desperately try my hand at letting it go.... daily.
Which is by far my hardest self improving /enlightening task I've charge myself with... ever!
'Work in progress... work in progress'...
Thanks, RT
I swear you've burrowed a little spot into my psyche!
🌹 - 💙
B
Which is by far my hardest self improving /enlightening task I've charge myself with... ever!
'Work in progress... work in progress'...
Thanks, RT
I swear you've burrowed a little spot into my psyche!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
9th Jul 2022 2:11am
Ty....
I really hear that. Letting go of the stuff people load us up with is a double burden, right.
I keep repeating, "I am not a victim; I'm a volunteer." I know I do not want to volunteer to carry those weights at all. Convincing myself to abandon my own miseries and walk away ought to be easy. Yet, I torture myself. It's not like their craziness wasn't punishment enough, now I have to match it?
Expectations are an invitation to disappointment, I swear.
If only I would follow my own incredible advice! Lol.
I really hear that. Letting go of the stuff people load us up with is a double burden, right.
I keep repeating, "I am not a victim; I'm a volunteer." I know I do not want to volunteer to carry those weights at all. Convincing myself to abandon my own miseries and walk away ought to be easy. Yet, I torture myself. It's not like their craziness wasn't punishment enough, now I have to match it?
Expectations are an invitation to disappointment, I swear.
If only I would follow my own incredible advice! Lol.
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10th Jul 2022 00:16am
Damn it.... yes..., RT
I think that line has been ringing my head for the last 24 hours "expectations are an invitation to disappointment"... fucking hell... you said it.
btw, yes, your advice is incredible. I eventually think it'll all seep in. From what you've said previously, you're well on the way....
-x
I think that line has been ringing my head for the last 24 hours "expectations are an invitation to disappointment"... fucking hell... you said it.
btw, yes, your advice is incredible. I eventually think it'll all seep in. From what you've said previously, you're well on the way....
-x
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
8th Jul 2022 8:42pm
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I very much appreciate such kind words and I'm truly grateful you enjoyed reading
Thank you for stopping by to say so, that means a lot to me.
Warmest regards,
🌹 B
Thank you for stopping by to say so, that means a lot to me.
Warmest regards,
🌹 B
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8th Jul 2022 9:13pm
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8th Jul 2022 9:38pm
You're the sweetest most delicious bite!!
Yum!!! I appreciate you, so very much!!
and...
Thank you!! ~(◦’ ⌣ ’(’ᴗˉ✿)♡
Yum!!! I appreciate you, so very much!!
and...
Thank you!! ~(◦’ ⌣ ’(’ᴗˉ✿)♡
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
8th Jul 2022 9:40pm
We agree with the previous comments, you always put out top quality pieces. You're a little hard on yourself at times, it's almost maddening. But that maybe why your stuff is so great, you're your own worst critic. Another one to tight Lady
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It's my nature to be self punishing; I'm getting better at acceptance, it's a long learning curve... (for me!)
Thanks for taking the time to stop by and for leaving me your thoughts, it means a lot to me to hear what you think....(it's that whole, I crave approval thing ,I know!!) especially when it comes from someone who I revere, like I do you.... it really is hard hitting and deeply impactful.
I appreciate you, Me.
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks for taking the time to stop by and for leaving me your thoughts, it means a lot to me to hear what you think....(it's that whole, I crave approval thing ,I know!!) especially when it comes from someone who I revere, like I do you.... it really is hard hitting and deeply impactful.
I appreciate you, Me.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
8th Jul 2022 9:53pm
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8th Jul 2022 10:49pm
Hey there, KS ;)
Thanks for the kind words.
Sometimes a little goes a long way...
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks for the kind words.
Sometimes a little goes a long way...
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
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- Edited 23rd May 2024 11:45am
8th Jul 2022 10:26pm
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haha... Yesss!!! 👍🏻
Thank you very for stopping by, ethan.
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your feedback, I have missed it.
Hope all is well,
🌹-🐝
Thank you very for stopping by, ethan.
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your feedback, I have missed it.
Hope all is well,
🌹-🐝
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
9th Jul 2022 00:36am
We can shine together my beautiful strong smart sexy woman. Keep on writing.
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9th Jul 2022 2:01am
You shine on the truth of your thoughts and emotions and feelings just plainly telling it like it is a common blessing of truth and trust and honesty 🙏👊🦋😘
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9th Jul 2022 4:33am
Dearest shaman..
I adore your thoughts and I'm so glad you found the awareness of raw truth an enjoyable blessing.
Sometimes the littlest truths pack big introspection.
Thank you for taking the time to stop by and for leaving with me your insightful feedback, Stoney.
It's always much welcomed and deeply felt.
Much love and respect sent your way,
🌹 - 💙
B
I adore your thoughts and I'm so glad you found the awareness of raw truth an enjoyable blessing.
Sometimes the littlest truths pack big introspection.
Thank you for taking the time to stop by and for leaving with me your insightful feedback, Stoney.
It's always much welcomed and deeply felt.
Much love and respect sent your way,
🌹 - 💙
B
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9th Jul 2022 12:37pm
It's a blessing to have the opportunity to experience the love that you write from your heart and soul as it is worth the effort and understanding that you can come through with honesty and truth and trust telling it like it is worthwhile words of wisdom and integrity are truly inspiring 🙏👊💪😘
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10th Jul 2022 00:40am
Likewise, dear poet!
You are a constant source of inspiration and a great place i go to find understanding.
🌹 - 💙
x
You are a constant source of inspiration and a great place i go to find understanding.
🌹 - 💙
x
Re: Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
10th Jul 2022 00:51am
I appreciate your comment and compliment dear poetess for it is necessary that we inspire each other to our true potential of truth and trust and honesty as we exchange thoughts and emotions and feelings just keeping it REAL 🐺🙏👊🤗
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9th Jul 2022 5:37am
Dear BV,
Now this is a thought I can get on board with. I really like the shining in my truth. I realize I’ve been hiding mine under a cloak of anonymity. I think I won’t be doing that anymore. This sweet write is a powerful push. Plus I love how you’ve formatted this. But! Can I still flip people off? I’d really miss that. 😏
Lovely piece of writing! H🌷
Now this is a thought I can get on board with. I really like the shining in my truth. I realize I’ve been hiding mine under a cloak of anonymity. I think I won’t be doing that anymore. This sweet write is a powerful push. Plus I love how you’ve formatted this. But! Can I still flip people off? I’d really miss that. 😏
Lovely piece of writing! H🌷
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Hey there, lovely lady
I'm still all giggles at your closing request.... 🤭
I desperately hope that Honoria shine is on high and in full effect whenever and wherever you need it.
Thanks for feeling this one and being on board!!
and...
of course!!
just some you i thought you'd enjoy and can possibly can copy and paste =
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I'm still all giggles at your closing request.... 🤭
I desperately hope that Honoria shine is on high and in full effect whenever and wherever you need it.
Thanks for feeling this one and being on board!!
and...
of course!!
just some you i thought you'd enjoy and can possibly can copy and paste =
╭∩╮(> ε <)╭∩╮
┌∩┐(◕_◕)┌∩┐
╭∩╮(◡ ‿ ◡ ❁)
ᶠYͧoͨᵏu
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10th Jul 2022 5:06am
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
9th Jul 2022 6:00am
Self improvement takes so much courage and fortitude...
Just so you know tho...
I happen to like every part of you... :)
I will serenade your yesterday, today, and tomorrow... :p
Just so you know tho...
I happen to like every part of you... :)
I will serenade your yesterday, today, and tomorrow... :p
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I'm like fifteen shades of blushing but I love every fucking word here and totally and unapologetically relish in every one of them... without 1 iota of regret!!!
You're a brilliant lovely soul...damn I'm 🍀
hugs and kisses aplenty
xoxo
Ty, dear P
(◍•ᴗ•◍)♡ ✧*。
You're a brilliant lovely soul...damn I'm 🍀
hugs and kisses aplenty
xoxo
Ty, dear P
(◍•ᴗ•◍)♡ ✧*。
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
9th Jul 2022 7:07am
I usually tell myself they all can't be good days. But yeah, tomorrow is another day. Wonderful ink, friend 😁
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10th Jul 2022 00:13am
That's what I try to say to myself as well.... some days are much easier than others to put behind us....
I appreciate your thoughts, DC. It's nice to know there's others of the same mindset.... not being alone.
I deeply appreciate you, the visit and the generous list add... it means a lot to me, friend.
Thank you.
🌹 - B
I appreciate your thoughts, DC. It's nice to know there's others of the same mindset.... not being alone.
I deeply appreciate you, the visit and the generous list add... it means a lot to me, friend.
Thank you.
🌹 - B
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
9th Jul 2022 5:35pm
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Thanks for understanding, Daniel.
It's nice to see you 🦋
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.... I'm always left with a smile and feeling the kind of loveliness only you leave on the page.
i hope things are improving on your end and that life is treating you well. Nothing but the best wishes sent your way... ✨
I'm keeping my fingers crossed when We on DU get to partake in some of your poetry again soon. No pressures or undo stress with my query. I'm only meaning that I deeply convet listening, learning and reading your work. So I continually keep an eye open for you and it to be posted ... lol. I know I tend to avoid leaving comments on your pieces; strictly out of concern that it would be this huge massive comment that would look so self-indulgent, when it would only be my real unedited earnestness. So I opt to RL and save you the long scroll down the page that you'd have to make in the event I did comment...I hope that makes sense. You've been a great influence and motivator...
Anyway, point is, I always look forward to you and your work....🦋 and I'll still continue to always keep an eye out...
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B
x
It's nice to see you 🦋
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.... I'm always left with a smile and feeling the kind of loveliness only you leave on the page.
i hope things are improving on your end and that life is treating you well. Nothing but the best wishes sent your way... ✨
I'm keeping my fingers crossed when We on DU get to partake in some of your poetry again soon. No pressures or undo stress with my query. I'm only meaning that I deeply convet listening, learning and reading your work. So I continually keep an eye open for you and it to be posted ... lol. I know I tend to avoid leaving comments on your pieces; strictly out of concern that it would be this huge massive comment that would look so self-indulgent, when it would only be my real unedited earnestness. So I opt to RL and save you the long scroll down the page that you'd have to make in the event I did comment...I hope that makes sense. You've been a great influence and motivator...
Anyway, point is, I always look forward to you and your work....🦋 and I'll still continue to always keep an eye out...
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B
x
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
10th Jul 2022 6:23pm
Hoi hoi
A lovely and quirky poem. Really surprising.
Thank you!
It’s a lovely song as well, if you don’t mind my saying so. As an after thought.
Kind regards, Gus
Of course I like this poem! Why bother asking?
A lovely and quirky poem. Really surprising.
Thank you!
It’s a lovely song as well, if you don’t mind my saying so. As an after thought.
Kind regards, Gus
Of course I like this poem! Why bother asking?
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10th Jul 2022 10:43pm
lol...
Love that, Johnny!
Your feedback / comments bring me smiles and so much joy to read. I can't thank you enough for stopping by, it's a pleasure to see you and read what you're thinking!!
Don't be a stranger... You're always welcome.
🌹-💙
B
Love that, Johnny!
Your feedback / comments bring me smiles and so much joy to read. I can't thank you enough for stopping by, it's a pleasure to see you and read what you're thinking!!
Don't be a stranger... You're always welcome.
🌹-💙
B
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
11th Jul 2022 4:34am
Wow, I had to scroll a mile...wonderful to see the acclaim. You are a master at expressing "shining truth." I am honored to bask in your brilliance🐻💞🐰
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11th Jul 2022 5:07pm
Thank you for visiting, as you know how much that means to me, although I said it truly wasn't necessary.... I am hardly brilliant... but I am humbly thankful...
...
Be well, dear poet.
-B
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Be well, dear poet.
-B
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11th Jul 2022 8:10pm
I loved the title...you had me humming the Men's Warehouse ad...but in a deep way.
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11th Jul 2022 8:57pm
lol... I don't even know what that means, but I assume it's cheeky and funny....of course...
Silly ol' bear...
;)
Silly ol' bear...
;)
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11th Jul 2022 9:16pm
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11th Jul 2022 9:18pm
Thank God that's a local commercial!!
and I've never seen it.... whew! .... I get it now, I get it!!
😂 😂 😂
and I've never seen it.... whew! .... I get it now, I get it!!
😂 😂 😂
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11th Jul 2022 9:36pm
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
11th Jul 2022 8:44pm
Without facts only doubt and speculation will be at the forefront. Until truth washes it all away.
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11th Jul 2022 8:52pm
Fucking, amen to that.
💯
Much obliged,
for the sage words.
A little does indeed go a long way... especially when it's truthful.
🌹 - B
💯
Much obliged,
for the sage words.
A little does indeed go a long way... especially when it's truthful.
🌹 - B
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
15th Jul 2022 11:03pm
Stand strong lady blue, you're truth is yours alone, and amen, so it is!
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16th Jul 2022 2:35am
Thanks for the lovely kind words, I definitely take them to heart.
It's a pleasure to have you visit 🦋
I appreciate it... and you.
🌹 - 💙
B
It's a pleasure to have you visit 🦋
I appreciate it... and you.
🌹 - 💙
B
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16th Jul 2022 5:41am
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
31st Jul 2022 8:13am
Blue, you are on a roll with these pieces. Even with micro poetry, the juxtaposition from one day to another is pretty clear and profound.
Great work.
Great work.
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31st Jul 2022 8:38am
I often wonder where those little lightning strikes of inspiration come from... Thanks for the nod, my friend
So glad you enjoyed!
🌹✨
So glad you enjoyed!
🌹✨
Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2022 2:35am
Good Poem Excellent Write Would Love Too Read More At Some Point :)
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Re. What A Difference A Day Makes.
28th Aug 2022 9:21pm
That contrast you create made for that climax of truth that shines your light for all to see. And I must say I feel privileged to behold your realization that brings everything together perfectly.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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