Sephina

I love this. Soooo swoon worthy and magically crafted.
It starts off like a dream but I enjoyed how you reminded
the reader of time - of the traffic lights - and people on the streets - with some
of your witty humor.
But not too much - as to not take away any from the tone of your story.
Loved everything about this.

Let them go, they'll go sulk
into the sky
for tonight

Brilliant!!!!
Thanks for posting before I go to bed:)

Thank you mama.  I think I was using the outside traffic stuff to show how the world continues, hectic at that, as the couple share their private moment.  
The world can wait!  

I'm glad you got some swoon out of it.  Lol. I'm still working on my swoon!  

Have a great night!

I have closed my eyes a thousand times to listen to the one word that tenderly resonates so smoothly to the essence of the night, Sephina. Loving the path of the stars and to be mentally submerged in its beautiful wake is priceless.

I have enjoyed reading this musing with much pleasure, my poet.

Enjoy your evening and have an engaging Wednesday

Days (work) are hectic and not fun.  But sometimes I get ideas that I jot down on scrap paper, to use when time is abundant.  This one started out that way.  

Thank you SKC for the poetic reply.  We are all in this DUP ship together, I'm trying to do my part to keep it afloat, like you do so well.  

You are always welcome, my poet... and you do such a great job as well at your own helm. of poetic mental enticement.

Enjoy your evening and have a safe and sound upcoming holiday as well

Never heard stars described as you did. Absolutely beautiful. All of it. You are a poet in the truest sense.

Thank you Pink for the awesome and supportive comment.  I'm trying to come up with different angles and ideas to write, even if they do mostly follow the same emotions.   Hey, I like what I like.  It works for me.  Its the nuance and the "aura" of two people together that motivates me.  It's the fuel to it all.  
I appreciate what you said.  Such words is what keeps me going.

Wow, that is just such an incredibly magical picture you painted and it just got more beautiful carrying me along this starlit path of love. I could see the sparkle and glow and hear the evening song. And I feel like you are teasing me with that beauty or maybe you want me to sing you a song. :p Open robe creating havoc for the traffic, why does this feel like a memory. *nevermind, innocent look * Summer beach made of linens... Your descriptions are stunning. "What doesn't want to be with you?" Such an incredible expression of lust and admiration.  

"Your hair, your earrings, your face
are a dream catcher.
I guess I fell towards you too.
But I have the fortune
to stay home with you. "

This is so swoon worthy indeed, the whole thing. Just breathtaking...

*If you sang, it would be a country song, huh.  And that's okay!  
I'm not a big country music fan, but years ago I heard a song that I still love to this day.  It's by Hank Williams Jr, and it's called "Outlaw Women".  And it's perfect.  

I'm shy to a point, then I'm bold as hell.  It's a comfort thing I think. Actually risque is fitting.
Sex in windows, or in a canoe on a lazy river, or against a cross on the steeple of a church... (all true), those kind of things!
It creates such an intense atmosphere.  
I'm happy that my poem made you happy!  

Why would you say country. lol (just kidding)... Maybe alternative, rock, metal, trance, or whatever. Perhaps put country in front of each of them. lol Or sounds that would make the traffic stop even without seeing the open robe. ;) That's really my kind of song...

Oh yes it does, been really bad in so many places... :p It's definitely intensely exciting. You get addicted to it.

Country because of your accent!   It ain't New York, Jersey, etc etc.  Lol

I knew what you meant. lol That's why I was saying 'country metal' etc.. :p Country is not my first genre of music although there are some good songs. :p

Echo all the above comments Styx
You were born to write, that's it, an amazing gift you have been bestowed.
I'll will 20 paintings to have 1/10 of your talent

Phenomenal... better than a BIG LIKE

Dude, do not underestimate your own talent.  I've always wanted to be some kind of painter, in an artistic sense, and I have zero talent for it.  Although I love to look and admire it.  And you bring that to the table, along with your talent as a writer.  
Your value is two-fold.

But, I do sincerely appreciate what you said.  I have every intention of slapping together some.of my stuff eventually, and calling it a book.  I would sell maybe a hundred copies max.  And I'd be okay with that.  It's out there.  It exists.  That's enough to me.

Thank you for your consistent kudos.  It does help my motivation.  

Dear S,

Triple ditto the above comments. I can’t write or paint but I’m going to will 25 paintings by PoetSpeak for 1/20 of your talent.😊 he said I could (totally fibbing).
This write continues to showcase your ability to really understand rich and lush descriptive writing. It’s as though you can make someone’s nerves tingle with the stroke of your pen.
I really enjoyed the story of these two. Another fantastic write. H🌷

Thank you, but I'm as good and bad as the company I keep. Same as the rest here.   We are all peers to each other.  
I get inspiration from all sorts of writings in here.  Even if one line.  I can build my own thoughts from a great line.  It happens more than you think.  
  I do know that I'm pretty good at building a scene.  I'm just not dedicated enough (or time enough) for novel length, etc.  
I have a few short (long!) stories, but they need editing skills that I do not possess.  

"Nerves tingle".  I like that!    I'm keeping it!  Lol.

Thank you H.