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Tomorrow (might be less)
that
sole irritant
you hear
spoiling
what peace
there was
a child
moaning
stimming
incoherently
trying to
communicate
i felt
his
pain
knew
the
problem
he is
but
only
one
amongst
a
crowd
alone
in a fully loaded
bus
train
plane
even a street
so
take
a breath
just
step
back
leave a little space
give a little love
for maybe
the struggle
will be less
tomorrow
sole irritant
you hear
spoiling
what peace
there was
a child
moaning
stimming
incoherently
trying to
communicate
i felt
his
pain
knew
the
problem
he is
but
only
one
amongst
a
crowd
alone
in a fully loaded
bus
train
plane
even a street
so
take
a breath
just
step
back
leave a little space
give a little love
for maybe
the struggle
will be less
tomorrow
Published 25th Jun 2022
| Edited 25th Aug 2022
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Wow, C
You've penned a profound bit of mastery. This piece is so emotionally powerful and poetically wrought with your keen eye and personal experience. It made my heart ache with slow realization that everyone isn't already cognizant of taking heed and care. (which of course not everyone is, unfortunately)
You opening up yourself and your reality of autism in this way really hit a nerve with me, which I deeply appreciate. I love the way you conveyed a gentle style of awareness which reminds everyone that patience, compassion and some understanding go a long way.
One of your best pieces, imo.
Outstanding.
Thank you for sharing with us
🌹-💙
B
You've penned a profound bit of mastery. This piece is so emotionally powerful and poetically wrought with your keen eye and personal experience. It made my heart ache with slow realization that everyone isn't already cognizant of taking heed and care. (which of course not everyone is, unfortunately)
You opening up yourself and your reality of autism in this way really hit a nerve with me, which I deeply appreciate. I love the way you conveyed a gentle style of awareness which reminds everyone that patience, compassion and some understanding go a long way.
One of your best pieces, imo.
Outstanding.
Thank you for sharing with us
🌹-💙
B
