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sky pyre
a smile
for the half-eaten dove laying
glass-eyed and still
smile how
remainders smile
and under a borrowed sky
the heart
never learns
i can feign my entire existence
but i can't pretend i don't hear your perfect voice
resonate from the cafe
i am a burning jetliner forever in descent
you are
everything else
for the half-eaten dove laying
glass-eyed and still
smile how
remainders smile
and under a borrowed sky
the heart
never learns
i can feign my entire existence
but i can't pretend i don't hear your perfect voice
resonate from the cafe
i am a burning jetliner forever in descent
you are
everything else
Published 23rd Jun 2022
| Edited 3rd Aug 2022
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23rd Jun 2022 5:25pm
Your impressive pen leaves the vestiges of your contrails to seer upon the page.... how lovely.
What exemplary writing!
Reading, that really made my day.
Thank you.
-B
What exemplary writing!
Reading, that really made my day.
Thank you.
-B
23rd Jun 2022 5:55pm
24th Jun 2022 2:26am
The ache and longing in this is palpable. "The heart never learns" is so universal, I think everyone can relate to that in some way and connect immediately with that feeling. Everything after that line just pulls you in deeper, a gravitational pull of heartache. It is beautifully poignant.
16th Jul 2022 9:17pm
