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Sinnamon Girl
You exist outside of the stricture
Of the structure,
Which binds and confines
In the tedium of
Time -
The mind; set your self
Free, always, at
Every opportunity
Dash headlong
Into the shifting face
Of chaos,
Heart hurled in a
Swirl
Of a song,
Longed for, all
Along:
My Sinnamon Girl.
Author's Note
I hope the term "girl" is not offensive...
I just thought it had a nice ring to it...
Lana Del Rey has a song called:
Cinnamon Girl.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DCYmJDO2_IE
Nevertheless...
Inspired by a Sinnamon Girl, I suppose. :p.
I just thought it had a nice ring to it...
Lana Del Rey has a song called:
Cinnamon Girl.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DCYmJDO2_IE
Nevertheless...
Inspired by a Sinnamon Girl, I suppose. :p.
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Re. Sinnamon Girl
11th Jun 2022 3:44pm
Re: Re. Sinnamon Girl
12th Jun 2022 7:45am
Re. Sinnamon Girl
11th Jun 2022 9:30pm
Hi Cipher,
This is one of my favorite songs!!
Both
Neil Young and Lana Del Ray's - Cinnamon Girl
Both great songwriters with great lyrics!!
Title pulled me in:)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u8MGszyeQl8
This is one of my favorite songs!!
Both
Neil Young and Lana Del Ray's - Cinnamon Girl
Both great songwriters with great lyrics!!
Title pulled me in:)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u8MGszyeQl8
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Re: Re. Sinnamon Girl
12th Jun 2022 7:56am
Re. Sinnamon Girl
What did you do C? This is so offensive... :p
I might even have to flag it as extreme content. I mean geez.
I love the word play with Sinnamon girl, it is clever and definitely grabs the attention and imparts much more meaning. But I could relate deeply to and identify with this journey you took me on outside of the stricture. To be outside the fringe of the confines that usually contain us and anchor people in repetition. A lack of structure... Setting your mind free to explore the chaos within. Dashing headlong into it. And the heart beats stronger and faster. And the blood tastes spicy and hot with the colour of Sinnamon.
You definitely know if you were inspired by a Sinnamon girl. ;)
The picture compliments this perfectly; like sitting on that fringe in an eerie sense of serenity, the eye of a hurricane, but soon to be completely immersed in the chaos. Love the heels and the colours are so beautiful.
I love Lana Del Rey but I have to admit I thought of Cinnamon Girl from Type O Negative instead for whatever reason.
I might even have to flag it as extreme content. I mean geez.
I love the word play with Sinnamon girl, it is clever and definitely grabs the attention and imparts much more meaning. But I could relate deeply to and identify with this journey you took me on outside of the stricture. To be outside the fringe of the confines that usually contain us and anchor people in repetition. A lack of structure... Setting your mind free to explore the chaos within. Dashing headlong into it. And the heart beats stronger and faster. And the blood tastes spicy and hot with the colour of Sinnamon.
You definitely know if you were inspired by a Sinnamon girl. ;)
The picture compliments this perfectly; like sitting on that fringe in an eerie sense of serenity, the eye of a hurricane, but soon to be completely immersed in the chaos. Love the heels and the colours are so beautiful.
I love Lana Del Rey but I have to admit I thought of Cinnamon Girl from Type O Negative instead for whatever reason.
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Re: Re. Sinnamon Girl
12th Jun 2022 8:17am
Is that a threat? :p
Umm...
This is kind of strange...
But I was actually listening
to the "World Coming Down" album...
Whilst writing this...
I was actually going to cite that version,
but... Not shore...
Actually, I had this experience, the
other day, where I absorbed the cinnamon and spice...
From the air...
And just took me on this heart rending excursion...
That was actually what made me
listen to some Type O...
Which I haven't in some months...
Nevertheless...
Tis a magical, interactive universe,
and when we open up to it...
There are such Highly Strange manifestations... :p
Yes...
I suppose I would... Know if I was inspired
by a Sinnamon girl... :)
The depth of your thoughts are quite
... On a side note:
Someone mentioned to me
that when you really like someone
and are compatible with them
you will get the taste of blood
on your tongue...
Umm...
This is kind of strange...
But I was actually listening
to the "World Coming Down" album...
Whilst writing this...
I was actually going to cite that version,
but... Not shore...
Actually, I had this experience, the
other day, where I absorbed the cinnamon and spice...
From the air...
And just took me on this heart rending excursion...
That was actually what made me
listen to some Type O...
Which I haven't in some months...
Nevertheless...
Tis a magical, interactive universe,
and when we open up to it...
There are such Highly Strange manifestations... :p
Yes...
I suppose I would... Know if I was inspired
by a Sinnamon girl... :)
The depth of your thoughts are quite
... On a side note:
Someone mentioned to me
that when you really like someone
and are compatible with them
you will get the taste of blood
on your tongue...
Re: Re. Sinnamon Girl
12th Jun 2022 7:59pm
Haha, I wouldn't dare... or would I.
Well clearly I got what you were putting out.
It is interesting when the universe aligns.
And it produces strange manifestations...
Like me.
Yes, ecstasy bites. ;) Always a perfect indicator you are compatible.
Well clearly I got what you were putting out.
It is interesting when the universe aligns.
And it produces strange manifestations...
Like me.
Yes, ecstasy bites. ;) Always a perfect indicator you are compatible.
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Re: Re. Sinnamon Girl
13th Jun 2022 10:49am
Strange manifestations, indeed... :p
I've actually been wanting to
play a little Truth or Dare... Lately. :p
I've actually been wanting to
play a little Truth or Dare... Lately. :p
Re. Sinnamon Girl
12th Jun 2022 11:12pm
All the HOT women are saturated in want on this one Cipher
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13th Jun 2022 10:50am