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It's not my fault that I love you
We could blame it on a lot of things
Or we could both just shut up
Take what's given in the underbelly
Ride a ghost train out of town
Or snuggle up close next to me
That booth in the back of Joe's Cafe
Yeah that booth
Cracked leather from lovers on the fringe
Things are great at home
They're better here and you know it
Order the ribeye steak medium
A bottle of their best Spanish red
It's payday and that 3pm meeting is canceled
Maybe dessert here or on the other side of town
Our call ....
Or we could both just shut up
Take what's given in the underbelly
Ride a ghost train out of town
Or snuggle up close next to me
That booth in the back of Joe's Cafe
Yeah that booth
Cracked leather from lovers on the fringe
Things are great at home
They're better here and you know it
Order the ribeye steak medium
A bottle of their best Spanish red
It's payday and that 3pm meeting is canceled
Maybe dessert here or on the other side of town
Our call ....
Published 8th Jun 2022
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Anonymous
8th Jun 2022 3:44pm
Hi Poet,how are you?
Really enjoyed reading this delightful pen.
The imagery was fantastic.
BTW,beautiful painting!
Take care.
X
Really enjoyed reading this delightful pen.
The imagery was fantastic.
BTW,beautiful painting!
Take care.
X
8th Jun 2022 3:50pm
Thanks on both Wired
This is vintage Poetspeak kind of write
Came to me in a flash this morning...
Appreciate your comment
This is vintage Poetspeak kind of write
Came to me in a flash this morning...
Appreciate your comment
8th Jun 2022 4:00pm
...the images you create, with paint and with words...
This one is like a long, deep sigh.
❤k
This one is like a long, deep sigh.
❤k
8th Jun 2022 4:09pm
Been thinking the last few days about the way I used to write.
The words and feeling are coming fast and furious
I've got my paintings to lend a hand too....
BIG THANKS K
X
The words and feeling are coming fast and furious
I've got my paintings to lend a hand too....
BIG THANKS K
X
8th Jun 2022 4:24pm
good morning dearest Poet
I love this we had a restaurant like this
where I used to go reminds me of better times in my eyes
I love the feel to this and the feelings expressed...
sexy write ❤️
I love this we had a restaurant like this
where I used to go reminds me of better times in my eyes
I love the feel to this and the feelings expressed...
sexy write ❤️
8th Jun 2022 4:28pm
Nice to know there are still places like that where you can get lost in someone's eyes ...
Thx Brenda
❤
Thx Brenda
❤
8th Jun 2022 6:30pm
I love this and the painting fits perfectly.
I see a person standing in the fringe and staking a step up trying to decide which way to go…
I see a person standing in the fringe and staking a step up trying to decide which way to go…
8th Jun 2022 7:06pm
This is my specialty Her
Life on the other side of this life
Like the painting sighting
Thx H
Life on the other side of this life
Like the painting sighting
Thx H
8th Jun 2022 8:21pm
No, it's all my fault. That's what everyone tells me, so it must true. :p
Oh yes... Lovers on the fringe; always pushing the boundaries.
Whether in the café, on the train, at home, or the underbelly of the city.
There is only one dessert that is important, and it burns calories.
One of my favorite paintings so far. There is something haunted about it..
Oh yes... Lovers on the fringe; always pushing the boundaries.
Whether in the café, on the train, at home, or the underbelly of the city.
There is only one dessert that is important, and it burns calories.
One of my favorite paintings so far. There is something haunted about it..
8th Jun 2022 8:28pm
I like when you take the blame
It's so rare
It's not my fault
That's for damn sure
Gives me hope
Or am I foolish?
Thx on the painting, one of my personal favorites, you have good taste.....x
It's so rare
It's not my fault
That's for damn sure
Gives me hope
Or am I foolish?
Thx on the painting, one of my personal favorites, you have good taste.....x
8th Jun 2022 8:36pm
8th Jun 2022 8:44pm
9th Jun 2022 4:37am
This makes me hungry, thirsty, and pining for the moment it created.
Wonderful words, to accompany your painting!
Wonderful words, to accompany your painting!
9th Jun 2022 4:50am
This is vintage Poetspeak writing Styx
I cut my teeth in the underbelly and I'm back to dish it up some more.
Lust is a must on my side of town
Thx for the great comment
Stay tuned ....
I cut my teeth in the underbelly and I'm back to dish it up some more.
Lust is a must on my side of town
Thx for the great comment
Stay tuned ....
9th Jun 2022 8:20pm
18th Jun 2022 2:26pm
I enjoyed your poem. It reminded me of the good things in life.
"Ride a ghost train out of town" struck the chord and I was there.
The picture evokes a face, and at the same time I get a cubist abstraction feel.
"Ride a ghost train out of town" struck the chord and I was there.
The picture evokes a face, and at the same time I get a cubist abstraction feel.
18th Jun 2022 3:26pm
I'm really glad you liked the poem and painting.
I had fun writing this one. I was thinking about Bukowski and the writer Raymond Carver when I wrote it.
Thanks James !
I had fun writing this one. I was thinking about Bukowski and the writer Raymond Carver when I wrote it.
Thanks James !
21st Jun 2022 10:19pm
It has that feel the Bukowski vein, and the poet speak magic.
I have not read Raymond Carver yet. But I am well read in Bukowski. Bukowski has it all, the pain, the joy, the madness, the sex, and the cold humourous style. He grinds you up into a pulp, and then gives you something beautiful for your time.
james
I have not read Raymond Carver yet. But I am well read in Bukowski. Bukowski has it all, the pain, the joy, the madness, the sex, and the cold humourous style. He grinds you up into a pulp, and then gives you something beautiful for your time.
james
21st Jun 2022 10:33pm
Appreciate that James
Yes, he was a fire starter but with a heart in all that mayhem.
I really like some of his novels specifically Post Office and others.
I feel that guy in the chaos and heart,
Thanks always for the reads and comments
Yes, he was a fire starter but with a heart in all that mayhem.
I really like some of his novels specifically Post Office and others.
I feel that guy in the chaos and heart,
Thanks always for the reads and comments
14th Jul 2022 4:23pm
Gotta love them rendezvous, filled with excitement and appetite, certainly makes for fond memories.
Awesome write Poet. BIG LIKE.
Awesome write Poet. BIG LIKE.
14th Jul 2022 4:25pm
Ride a ghost ship out of town..................possibly to a ghost town. Working on it,.
PS: loooooooooooooooooooove that painting. Shades of Jean Paul Riopelle.
PS: loooooooooooooooooooove that painting. Shades of Jean Paul Riopelle.
24th Jan 2023 2:46pm
Really appreciate the comment on poem and painting Robert.
If ever interested my paintings are up for sale. This one is a 11 x15 on cold pressed paper I believe. Could also be 13 x 17.
I remember thinking this one came out well.
Thanks !
If ever interested my paintings are up for sale. This one is a 11 x15 on cold pressed paper I believe. Could also be 13 x 17.
I remember thinking this one came out well.
Thanks !
