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Dirt and Dust
He held her back
when he was finally gone
she thrived.
It's just a shame
he had to die.
Well at least that's
what she tells people.
when he was finally gone
she thrived.
It's just a shame
he had to die.
Well at least that's
what she tells people.
Published 25th Apr 2022
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25th Apr 2022 7:04pm
Boom!
Okay, not a single wasted word in this! Perfectly placed on a page. Meticulously written. I know you can't see it, but I'm doing that standing ovation thing.
The only thing better than reading this , is reading the previous one and this one together one after the other!
Thank you for sharing!
Hold on to that strength!
Blue Skies at you
Al
Okay, not a single wasted word in this! Perfectly placed on a page. Meticulously written. I know you can't see it, but I'm doing that standing ovation thing.
The only thing better than reading this , is reading the previous one and this one together one after the other!
Thank you for sharing!
Hold on to that strength!
Blue Skies at you
Al
Anonymous
25th Apr 2022 7:35pm
There’s some serious sass going on here. I absolutely love that this kind of shows the limitations that other people place on us, and how we have the choice to shove those limitations right up their… nostril 😂
Thank you for sharing this
-M
Thank you for sharing this
-M
25th Apr 2022 7:36pm
hello lovely Niki first let me say I really love your photos
you really have an artistic eye...
as for your writing I love your sardonic wit
it's refreshing to hear honesty...
darkly delightful...
you really have an artistic eye...
as for your writing I love your sardonic wit
it's refreshing to hear honesty...
darkly delightful...
25th Apr 2022 8:20pm
25th Apr 2022 10:31pm
26th Apr 2022 4:13am
26th Apr 2022 7:57am
Death makes the lady sing dark things having class...
:)))
That picture tho...
Wonderful work
:)))
That picture tho...
Wonderful work
17th Jun 2022 9:25pm
It's a renaissance of sorts when we let go of the things that hold us back, even if it's death.
Insightful write.
Insightful write.
