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3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
It's late.
Too many mental tabs are open.
The CPU runs at 100%;
the clock is being ignored.
I need to finish this book,
and a bunch of articles.
Oh, and all the word games!
Wait... did I pack P.E. kits?
Where is the music coming from?!
Struck by inspiration,
I seize a scrap of paper -
an old envelope - and feverishly scrawl.
Now... where was I?
This video is hilarious:
I must send it to my kids!
There's another song on repeat
as I text my friend
who is also awake,
though for a different reason—
she's just got up!
We usually carve the night up between us, somehow.
Vaguely entertaining the notion of sleep,
I finish my chapter,
turn off the music,
retrieve the P.E. kits
and finish on my poem.
Time for lights out
so the system can reboot.
*
*
*
I wonder how my poem would sound in French?
Too many mental tabs are open.
The CPU runs at 100%;
the clock is being ignored.
I need to finish this book,
and a bunch of articles.
Oh, and all the word games!
Wait... did I pack P.E. kits?
Where is the music coming from?!
Struck by inspiration,
I seize a scrap of paper -
an old envelope - and feverishly scrawl.
Now... where was I?
This video is hilarious:
I must send it to my kids!
There's another song on repeat
as I text my friend
who is also awake,
though for a different reason—
she's just got up!
We usually carve the night up between us, somehow.
Vaguely entertaining the notion of sleep,
I finish my chapter,
turn off the music,
retrieve the P.E. kits
and finish on my poem.
Time for lights out
so the system can reboot.
*
*
*
I wonder how my poem would sound in French?
Written by
Wafflenose
(Ellie)
Published 8th Apr 2022
| Edited 19th May 2022
Author's Note
NaPo22
8/30
8/30
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Re. 3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
8th Apr 2022 7:22pm
Hello
Oh all the distractions...
This is so real life and relatable...
Would you like some suggestions on the rhythm and flow?
Blue Skies at you Elle
Al
Oh all the distractions...
This is so real life and relatable...
Would you like some suggestions on the rhythm and flow?
Blue Skies at you Elle
Al
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8th Apr 2022 7:38pm
Yes please. This was a 15 minute write, unlike this week's other offerings!
Re. 3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
8th Apr 2022 7:52pm
This is writing through the night while staying in the moment. It would be interesting to have an insomniac's anthology!
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This isn't my usual style (neither was the rhyming one!) but it's how my mind works! It never stops, and I don't want it to. I can't be bothered to sleep much, although my schedule and physical issues dictate that I have to sometimes!
Re: Re. 3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
8th Apr 2022 7:57pm
That's the beauty of NaPo, Ellie. It can push a poet into new avenues of expression, if allowed. I was impressed with this narrative.
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Re: Re. 3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
8th Apr 2022 7:58pm
Thank you! I agree... I don't have the time for my usual painstaking approach every day
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8th Apr 2022 8:00pm
Re. 3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
Forget about France. Rock 'n' Roll baby! I once went on a school day trip to Boulogne back in 1983, like most of us have & I still feel strangely nostalgic/romantic about it, lol. I remember spending half the trip trying to exchange a tatty 10 franc note (apparently defunct since 1979) for the equivalent coin, then asking in bad French, "Ooh ay la post? ' Lol. What I will say however is, if you think France is sooo great, why don't you move there? I'm an Aries, so bluntness comes with the territory.
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Re: Re. 3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
8th Apr 2022 11:08pm
It's not France (have never been)... just languages generally. I did GCSE German and A level French about 100 years ago, and am now working hard at Italian. I write in French and Italian sometimes. Occasionally I find I can express myself better that way. When is your birthday? Mine's on Wednesday and I've decided to start counting backwards now.
Re: Re. 3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
8th Apr 2022 11:11pm
Yeah well my birthday is very close to yours but you wouldn't expect me to disclose it in public, would you?
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8th Apr 2022 11:12pm
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8th Apr 2022 11:23pm
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8th Apr 2022 11:24pm
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8th Apr 2022 11:31pm
Well, I heard on BBC News today that there's this new gene therapy that can reverse the ageing process. The only Snagg is that it causes cancer. No sh*t!
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Re: Re. 3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
8th Apr 2022 11:34pm
Oh well! At least I have EDS skin, so will always look younger than I am... in theory, at least. Maybe I'm flattering myself!
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8th Apr 2022 11:37pm
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8th Apr 2022 11:41pm
Re. 3am confessions of an inexhaustible mind
9th Apr 2022 11:14pm
We can not function any other way, we must have multiple things going on at once. We have tried to work differently and have found that we make to many mistakes that way. Thus the work takes twice as long and we're stressed always about injuries. We like the layout here because it's so familiar. Tight work Lady
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9th Apr 2022 11:17pm
I have to have about 500 things going on at once, to keep my MH problems at arm's length. My brain also likes having lots to do. The body, not so much.